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Solitary Poet
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PostMon Oct 25, 2004 1:39 pm    {THE QUEEN} a poem

I haven�t written a poem since I was a teenager so don�t laugh just tell me what you think.

THE QUEEN

Mourning in the morning

Claws dig into your face

That pain in your chest

It�s not just a jest

It�s the end of the human race

Your death rattle

Her majesty�s battle

Screams of rage-for air

She lives for pain

Your children she�s slain

Even her life�s blood burns

Her love is fear

Whispered in your ear

She has taken your turns

Your anguish she learns

Is life for her kind

She draws you

Wants you needs you

Your dreams she haunts

Your blood she flaunts

Mourning in the morning

Claws dig into your face

That pain in your chest

It�s not just a jest

Her majesty�s fallen from grace



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PostTue Oct 26, 2004 8:45 am    

Thats really good. I'm printing it and putting it in my locker.

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PostTue Oct 26, 2004 1:38 pm    

I hope you enjoy it. Some people at the Helix BBS forum asked if they could set it to music.

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PostWed Oct 27, 2004 8:43 am    

I don't understand Poetry. when it rhymes good i enjoy reading it, but i never seem too find the message or morales.


I don't find this one rhyme well enough. is it: 1221?



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PostWed Oct 27, 2004 2:10 pm    

Great poem!

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PostWed Oct 27, 2004 2:42 pm    

Not all poems are supposed to rhyme. Poe only rhymed half of the time.

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