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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 1:33 pm Forgotten Child (DEEP poem) :P |
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Dappy had to beg me to post this. You can even check page 29 of his TIM to see.
It's not pretty... well, I suppose it's pretty depressing.
Here goes:
No more, No more, open heart, locked door,
I cannot stay imprisoned in this desolate house
Impoverish and lonley with nothing but my mind.
The doves no longer nuture
And croon over their ugly
Half fledgling. Instead, they
See me as a weight around their snowy necks.
A spiteful thing, a creature of malice that waits for
Them to step through that coloured gateway.
Waits in her chains for the zoo keepers.
Enter that nest of the forgotten child.
Depression, laced up and masked by the
Garish slabs of colour stabbed on the walls like angered blood.
Feel the lack of proper family emotion.
Look, finally gaze, upon the face of
That being you created and forgot about.
Small, half feathered halfling
Alone and confused and angry in the dark.
Angry at being left
In the desolate gaping void of the rainbow house.
Material father, destroys the few things I love
Leaving me with these objects, feelings, never wanted.
Reach out for that mother's embrace, hollow and bitter.
Smell her perfume, hear her meaningless "good night"
And realise you are the forgotten
Unloved
Worthless child
They have come to regret.
They have come to regret.
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Help me. Get Lost.
www.lost.eu/1b3b1
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 3:07 pm |
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oooooo
Deep and myserious!
I love it!
good job girl!
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:41 pm |
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YAY!!!
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Tue Aug 02, 2005 1:42 pm |
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i thought it was really good honestly!
I hope more ppl come see it.
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lionhead Rear Admiral
Joined: 26 May 2004 Posts: 4020 Location: The Delta Quadrant (or not...)
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Tue Aug 02, 2005 4:16 pm |
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Oh, that hit the spot.... great job.
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Never explain comedy or satire or the ironic comment. Those who get it, get it. Those who don't, never will. -Michael Moore
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:43 pm |
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Aw, thankyou. Dappy liked it too. I hope Andrew Bullock comes and sees.
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Wed Aug 24, 2005 10:13 pm |
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Well, Andrew Bullock did
It's good, I'll say. Actually was going to write one my self, but saw that you had writen one so just haaaaad to see it
It's really good though, Kim.
Good job,
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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