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madlilnerd
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PostMon Aug 01, 2005 1:33 pm    Forgotten Child (DEEP poem) :P

Dappy had to beg me to post this. You can even check page 29 of his TIM to see.
It's not pretty... well, I suppose it's pretty depressing.

Here goes:


No more, No more, open heart, locked door,
I cannot stay imprisoned in this desolate house
Impoverish and lonley with nothing but my mind.
The doves no longer nuture
And croon over their ugly
Half fledgling. Instead, they
See me as a weight around their snowy necks.
A spiteful thing, a creature of malice that waits for
Them to step through that coloured gateway.
Waits in her chains for the zoo keepers.

Enter that nest of the forgotten child.
Depression, laced up and masked by the
Garish slabs of colour stabbed on the walls like angered blood.
Feel the lack of proper family emotion.
Look, finally gaze, upon the face of
That being you created and forgot about.
Small, half feathered halfling
Alone and confused and angry in the dark.
Angry at being left
In the desolate gaping void of the rainbow house.
Material father, destroys the few things I love
Leaving me with these objects, feelings, never wanted.
Reach out for that mother's embrace, hollow and bitter.
Smell her perfume, hear her meaningless "good night"
And realise you are the forgotten
Unloved
Worthless child
They have come to regret.
They have come to regret.



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zero
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PostMon Aug 01, 2005 3:07 pm    

oooooo

Deep and myserious!

I love it!

good job girl!


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madlilnerd
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PostMon Aug 01, 2005 5:41 pm    

YAY!!!

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PostTue Aug 02, 2005 1:42 pm    

i thought it was really good honestly!

I hope more ppl come see it.


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PostTue Aug 02, 2005 4:16 pm    

Oh, that hit the spot.... great job.


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madlilnerd
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PostWed Aug 03, 2005 12:43 pm    

Aw, thankyou. Dappy liked it too. I hope Andrew Bullock comes and sees.

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AndrewBullock
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PostWed Aug 24, 2005 10:13 pm    

Well, Andrew Bullock did

It's good, I'll say. Actually was going to write one my self, but saw that you had writen one so just haaaaad to see it

It's really good though, Kim.

Good job,

~Andrew



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