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What was your Fav. pome of them all.
Life
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Shadows
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Lies
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Total Votes : 4

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vorrick
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PostTue May 10, 2005 1:14 pm    My Poems(Vorrick)

Shadows:

I wake up,
Walk from room to room,
Start finding shadows all too soon,
Start finding shadows in every room.

You walk in The Door,
Start walking up to the second floor,
You see me walking from door to door,
Looking at shadows on the second floor.

I see you but keep walking,
Walking to a shadow,
Seeing what I am to be,
Im consumed by shadow.

Lies:

I come down to the breakfast table,
The first things I hear are lies.
I go to the Family room,
I hear the TV Telling lies.
I start making my way to school,
I hear the people telling lies.
I get home from school this day,
By now ive told you several lies.

Life:
You like to live�
Life, like there�s nothing going on,
Life, like there�s nothing ever going wrong,
Life, But guess what, you�ve got it all wrong,
Life, Because life has never been that way and,

Life, its Never gonna be that way,
Life, you�ll never be able to have a happy day,
Life, you�ll never be able to say,
Life, That everything is gonna be ok,
Life, this is the one thing you�ll be able to say,
Life, Is that this is just a normal day.


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Voy_Girl
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PostThu May 12, 2005 2:23 pm    

Well done!

They all had a different message, which is good. I really liked the first one.
The third reminded me of a song... but I can't remember what it's called. Hmm... I'll have to think about that.


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vorrick
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PostFri May 13, 2005 12:31 pm    

why thank you.

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madlilnerd
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PostFri May 13, 2005 12:40 pm    

I voted for shadows. That was the one I liked best

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Leo Wyatt
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PostFri May 13, 2005 2:42 pm    

I voted Shadows as well.

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