What was your Fav. pome of them all. |
Life |
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Shadows |
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Lies |
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Total Votes : 4 |
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vorrick Professional Snoozer
Joined: 12 Nov 2002 Posts: 1287 Location: In bed, With my laptop on my head
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Tue May 10, 2005 1:14 pm My Poems(Vorrick) |
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Shadows:
I wake up,
Walk from room to room,
Start finding shadows all too soon,
Start finding shadows in every room.
You walk in The Door,
Start walking up to the second floor,
You see me walking from door to door,
Looking at shadows on the second floor.
I see you but keep walking,
Walking to a shadow,
Seeing what I am to be,
Im consumed by shadow.
Lies:
I come down to the breakfast table,
The first things I hear are lies.
I go to the Family room,
I hear the TV Telling lies.
I start making my way to school,
I hear the people telling lies.
I get home from school this day,
By now ive told you several lies.
Life:
You like to live�
Life, like there�s nothing going on,
Life, like there�s nothing ever going wrong,
Life, But guess what, you�ve got it all wrong,
Life, Because life has never been that way and,
Life, its Never gonna be that way,
Life, you�ll never be able to have a happy day,
Life, you�ll never be able to say,
Life, That everything is gonna be ok,
Life, this is the one thing you�ll be able to say,
Life, Is that this is just a normal day.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu May 12, 2005 2:23 pm |
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Well done!
They all had a different message, which is good. I really liked the first one.
The third reminded me of a song... but I can't remember what it's called. Hmm... I'll have to think about that.
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vorrick Professional Snoozer
Joined: 12 Nov 2002 Posts: 1287 Location: In bed, With my laptop on my head
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Fri May 13, 2005 12:31 pm |
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why thank you.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Fri May 13, 2005 12:40 pm |
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I voted for shadows. That was the one I liked best
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Fri May 13, 2005 2:42 pm |
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I voted Shadows as well.
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