I Like Apple Juice

Theresa · **Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:19 pm I Like Apple Juice**

Apple juice, it's so good to me,
it comes from the fruit of an apple tree.
Apples, apples, they're so tart,
Apple juice, it's close to my heart.

'Twas a dare,

Lord Borg · **Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:24 pm**

What a silly, silly story

Theresa · **Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:25 pm**

Yay! (since that was my goal,

)

Seven of Nine · **Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:41 pm**

Nice poem

I also like apple juice

nadia · cookie Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia

Birdy · Socialist Joined: 20 Sep 2004 Posts: 13502 Location: Here.

YEAH

Me loves applejuice too.
Gonna drink some later.

Good poem btw. Applejuice deserves a good poem.

Theresa · **Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:24 pm**

^^People,

And J said it was childish,

I would have preferred childlike,

Thomas · **Tue Apr 12, 2005 10:46 am**

Deep,

madlilnerd · **Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:26 pm**

I think apple juice makes me more thirsty than I was before i drank it, but the poem would be cool and creepy in a horror movie when a little girl in a orchard starts singing it... and then something horrible would happen like everyone's hearts got cut out and replaced with apples.
I over think sometimes

Lord Borg · **Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:51 pm**

well except for the replaceing with apples part its a good idea!!

Theresa · **Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:14 pm**

Nah, you'd have to do the replacing of hearts,

Read the last line, Chris,

madlilnerd · **Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:40 pm**

Yes, REPLACE THE HEARTS!

MW HA HA HA

*whispers* nobody likes you, everbody left you, they're all without you having fun.... *back to normal voice level*

I don't know what came over me...

Thomas · **Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:58 pm**

I'm thinking Green Day.

madlilnerd · **Fri Apr 29, 2005 1:36 pm**

Glad to see someone worked it out

I think its sounds better if you replace "they're all without you having fun" with "It's time to kill you"
I haven't heard the actually thing. My friends Ashleigh and Jenny (AKA the Lushee Sisters) keep singing it.
I had a dream I was singing american idiot in the school talent show wearing only little american flags on my top half. It was incredibly disturbing on many many levels....

Apple juice is nice though, whether or not creepy little girls are singing about it.

Illogical13 · **Fri May 13, 2005 2:38 pm Apple juice rocks!**

So wierd! So many times a day I drink apple juice and so many times a day I'm convinced that it's addictive! A very good poem, not just describing your feelings towards apple juice, but so many others as well!
LoL - great stuff!

Sam Kenobi · **Fri May 13, 2005 7:10 pm**

*Simon accent*

...It's awful.

The rhythm is all off, especially on lines 2 and 4. Rhyme scheme is very basic (couplets? Come on...) , word choice is very crude and basic, not to mention there was no use of alliteration, besides the countinuos use of the word and variations of "apple". No imagry, symbolism, not even a single metaphor or simile.

No. I don't think you'll even come close to being the Poetry Idol.

AndrewBullock · **Fri May 13, 2005 7:35 pm**

Be carefull what you say^^

Not all poems have to rhyme.

Theresa · **Fri May 13, 2005 8:14 pm**

Omgoodness,

It was supposed to be awful,

It was a joooooooooke.

Sam Kenobi · **Fri May 13, 2005 10:40 pm**

Ohmy gosh, you guys... check out this

Theresa · **Fri May 13, 2005 11:11 pm**

Well, that's who you usually make me think of anyway,

Seriously, I have never seen an ep of American Idol,

nadia · cookie Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia

Sam Kenobi · **Fri May 13, 2005 11:51 pm**

madlilnerd · **Sat May 14, 2005 7:12 am**

If you're simon cowel, you'll have to hoist your waistband up so that it's under your armpits

Theresa · **Tue May 24, 2005 11:12 am**

Who wants more?!

There are many things I love, you know,

madlilnerd · **Tue May 24, 2005 4:09 pm**

More... more!!!!