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Deciviel
Captain
Joined: 27 Sep 2002
Posts: 508
Location: Joe's Garage
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 Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:21 pm Bye Bye, Daddy |
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(This is a poem about a little girl who's been abused by her father and has comitted suicide. It's the girl's suicide note.)
I couldn't take it anymore, Daddy. No more.
You'd tell me such horrid things, call me such horrid names. Why couldn't you love me?
You'd come home drunk and hit Mommy, made her cry. That made me cry.
You told me I would never be nobody. That you care more about beer than me.
You'd hit me every day, said you could never love me.
I didn't wanna hurt you no more Daddy, no more. I didn't wanna make you mad at me no more.
Don't cry Daddy, your angries are gone now. I won't make you mad any more.
Forgive me, Daddy, for the pain that I've caused. Tell Mommy not to cry.
Please don't hit her.
I love you Daddy.
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"Wheeee. Now say 'nuclear wessels'."
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Captian_Janeway
Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002
Posts: 283
Location: Terra
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| Tue Oct 14, 2003 7:15 pm |
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*tear*
Is this about that story from Homecomeing?
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sabertooth1217
UPN Boycotter
Joined: 21 Jun 2003
Posts: 11484
Location: Texas
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| Wed Oct 15, 2003 10:11 am |
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please tel me thats all made up lol
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Sarah Connor
Rear Admiral
Joined: 10 Jul 2003
Posts: 3644
Location: Kentucky
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| Wed Oct 15, 2003 2:24 pm |
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*Tear*
Some poems are meant to be read...and some are meant to be repeated.....This one is both.
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Josi Rockholt
Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001
Posts: 10136
Location: Boston, Ma
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| Wed Oct 15, 2003 3:47 pm |
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Wow,that was touching. What's really sad is that it happens every day.
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Thu Oct 16, 2003 11:36 am |
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Really moving.
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Paris8
Freshman Cadet
Joined: 01 Oct 2003
Posts: 8
Location: Germany
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| Tue Oct 21, 2003 10:58 am |
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Wow!!
I think it's really good but sad, too.
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John Connor
Admiral of the Terran Empire
Joined: 07 Sep 2002
Posts: 15657
Location: I.S.S Emperor
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| Sat Oct 25, 2003 9:04 am |
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Its very moving it made my cry.
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Tim McGraw
Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Posts: 299
Location: Green Bay, WI
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| Mon Oct 27, 2003 6:19 pm |
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 WOW what a sad story but that just goes to show what partents do to there children that's why if you know of a kid that is getting abused by her family members call and report them no matter if you know the family or not.
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Tim McGraw is the sexiest man in counrty music! (just ask the country music critics they will tell you. You could also ask his lovley wife Faith Hill)!
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Starbuck
faster...
Joined: 19 Feb 2003
Posts: 8715
Location: between chaos and melody
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| Fri Oct 31, 2003 8:02 pm |
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I cry almost as hard over that as I cried over
"How do I love thee?" and my poem Goodnight my sweet indigo rose.
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Alpha6006
Commander
Joined: 24 Jun 2003
Posts: 410
Location: At Co-ordinates 22.24.1224.
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| Tue Nov 11, 2003 8:10 pm |
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I cant express the words on how I felt about this poem, I dont personally know how it is to feel abused. But i know that this was painful for the little girl, it seems like she felt like all this was her fault. When I read it I had tears in my eyes. But it also mad me angry toward the father. In a way, the father killed her, he kept on leaving a message in her head that al of this is her fault and i quote "You told me I would never be nobody" so she could have felt like she had no reason to live. If you live in the uk and you need someone to talk to the Samaritans run a help line for people in need it is 08457 90 90 90.
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mr_glyn
Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 16 Apr 2002
Posts: 253
Location: Kent, UK
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| Tue Dec 09, 2003 7:02 am |
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Bugger  Sad...
With the people within this forum we all have a very good imagination and to picture what that child went through. Damn
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