My poetry

5thhouse · **Wed Jan 08, 2003 7:05 pm My poetry**

I have recently started writing poetry in class when I am bored(it is not very good). But I guess I will share- I will post more latter.

How could one do this
I used to think
now sitting here in red;
shunning actions that I do
not one my heart and head;
far from here I am
looking in through glass,
wondering what happened here
to break the mirror new

janewaykat · **Wed Jan 08, 2003 9:39 pm**

whats wrong with that its much better than i could do GOOD JOB

5thhouse · **Wed Jan 08, 2003 10:15 pm**

Well thank you.

This stanza can stand alone or go after the first one

Heart and hand yet reaching out
To hold the hand in need,
Energy yet flowing through
To break the bonds of greed;
Shinning a brilliant bright
The lonely heart does do,
To leand and listen
Mend its own;
And mend doors of need

Seven of Nine · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 4:38 am**

Beautiful

Voy_Girl · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 1:41 pm**

very good

Wonderful poems!!

Josi Rockholt · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 5:51 pm**

Exactly, what's wrong with them?They're beautiful and a lot better than I could do.

5thhouse · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 6:15 pm**

Well, I don't think that they are very good, but I guess you peoples do not really agree

5thhouse · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 8:39 pm**

The golden sun is setting down
Upon the golden pond
Simple sounds yet ringing through
The stillness does it lay,
Beyond the bourne
Of hope it rises
Golden is the sun;
Glistning skys
to mark their own;
Setting sadness
To dark doth lay
Intrepid does it keep;
Behind and under
Wonder bourne
Untill the sadness lay

5thhouse · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 10:26 pm**

flowers flying untill the sky
to reach thy hand doth sun,
keeping rays not blankets through
where blankes covor need;
darkness keeping, hide doth pain
only hands can heal
but holding down the blankets do
keep far from hands of light

janewaykat · **Thu Jan 09, 2003 11:31 pm**

getting better and better

harry_kim · Captain Joined: 10 Dec 2002 Posts: 665 Location: Voyager

Those are excellent

Voy_Girl · **Fri Jan 10, 2003 3:51 pm**

Great

5thhouse · **Sun Jan 12, 2003 7:02 pm**

Well Thank you everyone
Here is another

Until the sadness lay
the broken heart doth keep
the tears of tries
upsetting suns
beyond the bourne doth lay,
flowing full of flowers stay
the stillness meadow keep;
holding sounds of nature cry
to sooth the shattred soul,
patterned blankets deemed by time
to covor all and heal
all the woundes exposed;
untill the sadness lay

Voy_Girl · **Mon Jan 13, 2003 2:35 pm**

I like the language style

5thhouse · **Thu Mar 06, 2003 8:52 pm**

Black Whispers
Holding Head
in stillness does it lay
blanket covor
No silence keep
the darkness does it hear
to long to feal
the light to grace
embracment covor keep
redness touch
entrance thy soul
to reach thy hand not given

5thhouse · **Thu Mar 06, 2003 8:54 pm**

Voy_Girl · **Fri Mar 07, 2003 8:33 am**

The new one is good, too

5thhouse · **Fri Mar 07, 2003 8:41 am**

Thanks

The_Doctor · Lieutenant Commander Joined: 25 Feb 2003 Posts: 339

Love 'em, there really great!

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

nuthin wrong as far as i can see... great poems

Starbuck · **Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:02 pm**

lovely poems 5thhouse my fellow poet who writes much better than i do because no one understands my poems

Seven of Nine · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 3:39 am**

Beautiful as always, Lanna!