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PicardsTrueLove
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PostSun Jan 26, 2003 5:50 pm    Advice for those who think they can't write

I've been amazed at how many ppl say that they can't write here: I just wanted to offer some advice as a writer.

All that you need to do to write a good story is to immerse yourself in the environment you're writing about. If you're writing about events that take place in a certain location, imagine it in your mind. Then put the people you're writing baout in that location. Wiht something like a TV show it's no problem, b/c the characters have already been fleshed out for you. Then you simply sit back, close your eyes, and watch as the scene unfolds in back of your eyes. When you're satisfied that your mind has created a realistic scene, you simply sit down and let your ideas flow. As long as you can imagine, you can write a good story. All you have to do is make sure you stick to the characters' personalities and you're golden.

Just thought I'd offer some words of encouragement. Hope to see all of you posting your imaginings!

Sincerely, Dana Katherine Scully



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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 3:30 pm    

Ohh..... Scenes appearing... *drools* j/k

I'm just trying to say that you give great advice, and that I recognize what you describe.



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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 5:47 pm    

Oh good! I read that again and was like: wow thatw as so random. What was I on? Whatever it was, I didn't take it by choice!


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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 6:42 pm    

Thanks for the Advices on Writing

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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 6:45 pm    

You can't tell if you can't write unless you try.


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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 6:46 pm    

Precisely Ziona: everyone should try and keep trying. Eventually something good will some of it.


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PostMon Jan 27, 2003 6:50 pm    

Took me about 5 years before I could get anything down on paper.


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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 10:16 am    

Really? I've been writing since I was really little. Not well of course....he he. My parents kept all of my papers from my childhood: it's relaly great.


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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 11:45 am    

omg, that's exactly what I do! Up here *points to head* I already have my story finished, but putting it down.........well that's another problem.


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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 3:20 pm    

Captian_Janeway wrote:
omg, that's exactly what I do! Up here *points to head* I already have my story finished, but putting it down.........well that's another problem.


When I'm going to write things down, I usually come up with so much good things to write, that I've forgotten the end by the timel I'm done with the beginning...



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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 3:22 pm    

Ziona wrote:
You can't tell if you can't write unless you try.



Yeah, and you learn new things along the way... The best imo, is that you get to experience different things, even if you're making them up yourself.
It's like daydreaming; only you put it on paper while dreaming it up.



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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 6:08 pm    

Exactly! "Writing is a window on dreams." Hmm I like that! I'll add it to my website..... I have so much fun writing: I wish I had more time to do it!


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PostTue Jan 28, 2003 6:42 pm    



Yea I didn't start writing til recently cause I couldn't think of anything to write about. And suddenly I got smacked in the face with about 100 different Ideas and now i'm trying to get them all written out.



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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 12:43 am    

I didnt start writting till just recienlty... lol I STILL think i cant write but I love to anyways. I hate writting for school tho... *glares* anyways thanks for the good advice!


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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 9:35 am    

he he. My English teacher this year is the head of the department. She's brutal!!! My analytical writing is going to get so much better, but she's just miserably picky. Oy! It's depressing.


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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 11:56 am    

You thinks that's depressing? My enlgish teacher found a copy of my story, all of them (One, My J/C, and Renegade). She pulled me aside and said she thinks i'd better focus more of my energies on my school work instead of my stories.......even though my average is a 94! She called mom, mom said no more stories, mom took away computer, me get on school computer and write anyway. Teacher find out.........she tells me too enter essay contest.

So what I need help with is an esssay. TEacher say If I do well she'll tell my mom that my writing in encouraging.

Do you think they'd except an essay on Star Trek? J/k. Just, topic ideas would be very nice..........(hint, hint)



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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 3:35 pm    

PicardsTrueLove wrote:
Exactly! "Writing is a window on dreams." Hmm I like that! I'll add it to my website..... I have so much fun writing: I wish I had more time to do it!


I use to think I could get more time too... Only now, I'm trapped in this block getting only lame ideas I hardly smile at myself



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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 3:38 pm    

Captian_Janeway wrote:
You thinks that's depressing? My enlgish teacher found a copy of my story, all of them (One, My J/C, and Renegade). She pulled me aside and said she thinks i'd better focus more of my energies on my school work instead of my stories.......even though my average is a 94! She called mom, mom said no more stories, mom took away computer, me get on school computer and write anyway. Teacher find out.........she tells me too enter essay contest.

So what I need help with is an esssay. TEacher say If I do well she'll tell my mom that my writing in encouraging.

Do you think they'd except an essay on Star Trek? J/k. Just, topic ideas would be very nice..........(hint, hint)


Aww, that's so sad..... To me, my works in any language has improved drastically just thanks to my fanfic writing.

For topic ideas: Choose a frame for the story (ex. summer, early 1900's, children playing, children pushed out of friendship)...
Ok, that's not really an idea. Just a tip...



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PostWed Jan 29, 2003 4:19 pm    

Captian_Janeway wrote:
You thinks that's depressing? My enlgish teacher found a copy of my story, all of them (One, My J/C, and Renegade). She pulled me aside and said she thinks i'd better focus more of my energies on my school work instead of my stories.......even though my average is a 94! She called mom, mom said no more stories, mom took away computer, me get on school computer and write anyway. Teacher find out.........she tells me too enter essay contest.

So what I need help with is an esssay. TEacher say If I do well she'll tell my mom that my writing in encouraging.

Do you think they'd except an essay on Star Trek? J/k. Just, topic ideas would be very nice..........(hint, hint)


That's horrible! My English teachers have always been very encouraging w/my fanfic.

Hmm let's see essay topics.....well what kind of essay is it? Is it a personal essay or an analytical one?



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PostThu Jan 30, 2003 1:25 am    

It is Horrible! :@ If any of my english teachers found mine lol I'd be SO embarrassed! lol they'd be correcting my grammer. But Yeh I think that Fan Fics inprove your writting. I DEFINATLY improve with everystory i write and it does help when im writting stories for class.


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PostThu Jan 30, 2003 3:55 pm    

Captain Leah Manzer wrote:
It is Horrible! :@ If any of my english teachers found mine lol I'd be SO embarrassed! lol they'd be correcting my grammer. But Yeh I think that Fan Fics inprove your writting. I DEFINATLY improve with everystory i write and it does help when im writting stories for class.



I have no intentions showing my fics to any teacher... not that they would know what it was about anyway..



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PostThu Jan 30, 2003 5:51 pm    

he he: my teachers are really great though (wel most of them). I'm in a private school, so the teachers are really enthusiastic about what they're doing. One of my best friends is a teacher.


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PostFri Jan 31, 2003 4:20 pm    

PicardsTrueLove wrote:
he he: my teachers are really great though (wel most of them). I'm in a private school, so the teachers are really enthusiastic about what they're doing. One of my best friends is a teacher.


Private school.... I'm in the only school within miles, and the teachers are good, however a lot of the students rather sleep than pay any interest at all...

How old's that teacher/friend?



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PostFri Jan 31, 2003 4:20 pm    

umm.....60? he he but she doesn't act like it at all. She and her husband are so cute: they're hilarious.


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PostFri Jan 31, 2003 4:26 pm    

Aww... that's sweet! My english teacher is like that too, now she's trying to get me to play a part in a 2-man play...


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