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Chakotays Angel
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PostMon Dec 16, 2002 2:17 pm    Poem of Love and Pain

I wrote this poem after watching Resolutions for first time. Please tell me what you think of it. Any comments or ideas on changes would be of most help to me

Masks of Desire

Why must I hide my love for you behind this masquerade of
Protocol and Regulations,

My heart calls your name but dies away because of
Pain from pushing you away,

I want to feel your gentle loving touch again upon
My body

But these masks that I wear over my heart conceals the desire
That is burning in my soul for you.






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PostMon Dec 16, 2002 3:00 pm    

Lovely


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PostMon Dec 16, 2002 4:43 pm    

Thanks Voy_Girl

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PostTue Dec 17, 2002 3:42 pm    

You're welcome... Got any other poems?


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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 12:23 am    

[b] b] Here you go
Hearts of Ice

Hearts on fire with passion can quickly turn cold as night becomes day

Hearts filled with love can quickly turn cruel as
Months becomes years

Hearts that instruct with honor can quickly turn ruthless as strength becomes weakness

Hearts of ice are all that is left of you and I.


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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 8:43 am    

VER y nice!


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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 6:30 pm    

Thanks

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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 7:39 pm    

Very nice.

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PostThu Dec 19, 2002 3:56 pm    

I like your poems Chakotays angel....

what inspires you?



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PostThu Dec 19, 2002 3:59 pm    

They're great.


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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 2:15 pm    

Voy_Girl, What inspires me to write poems is the love and the hardships of life in the world. I wrote these poems as if they were from Janeway point of view. I'm glad you like my poems and will post a new one really soon.

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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 2:23 pm    

Here is a new one that I wrote last night after I watched Coda.

Magic of love

Love has a very special magic

Two hearts that have never touched
Are brought together

Two souls that yearn to be together
Are joined together

Two lovers that burn with passion
Are untied together

Love has the power of Magic
Flowing threw it.


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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 2:28 pm    

Yay! We love J/C!!!


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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 3:32 pm    

Chakotays Angel wrote:
Voy_Girl, What inspires me to write poems is the love and the hardships of life in the world. I wrote these poems as if they were from Janeway point of view. I'm glad you like my poems and will post a new one really soon.


That's a good source of inspiration... I hope you write many more of the same quality as you uphold now

I like your newest piece too, btw!



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PostSat Dec 21, 2002 12:16 pm    

chocho_11 wrote:
Yay! We love J/C!!!

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PostSat Dec 21, 2002 4:06 pm    

^You too, VF?


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PostMon Dec 23, 2002 5:47 pm    

A new one
Moonlight on Roses

As the delicate rose buds bloom when kissed by a moon beam

As the gentle light caress the beautiful buds during a soft summer night

Only the moonlight and the gentle night can make these roses bloom to life

Just like your gentle touch makes my heart bloom with the love for you.




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PostMon Dec 23, 2002 5:49 pm    

Another one

Star crossed

Lovers who can�t be together

Hearts that cry out for each other at night

Souls that burn with the fires of passion

Arms that arch to caress each others bodies

Died slowly in each others arms

They are called Star crossed.



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PostTue Dec 24, 2002 3:57 am    

aww.... so very sweet these are!!


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PostTue Dec 24, 2002 8:22 am    

Very nice.


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PostWed Dec 25, 2002 3:19 pm    

hope there's many more...


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PostThu Dec 26, 2002 5:40 pm    

there will be many more real soon

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PostFri Dec 27, 2002 8:15 am    

good will be waiting..


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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 3:47 pm    

Here it is

Angel Tears

The gentle rain falls upon my window pane
Winter snow swiral around my lonely heart
Dew drops dance on the petals of the last summer rose
You and I parted so saddly without a last kiss
Our love will live on forever in our lonely hearts
Like Angel tears from Heaven.


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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 3:55 pm    

one more

Forever Goodbye to Our Love

You said the you would love me till the end
but now the end has come for us
I loved you with all my heart
but you shattered it like glass upon the ground
We parted so bitterly towards each other
but now we know there was no really love for each other
So Forever goodbye to our love


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