From the Bottom of a Broken Heart

Captian_Janeway · **Fri Oct 18, 2002 11:24 am From the Bottom of a Broken Heart**

This is a poem form my broken heart, and i hope you enjoy it. i have written a couple of stories, and i thought, Why not give poetry a shot? well here goes.

[i]A lonely breeze carasses my cheek,
I look out my window and see a tiny boat at sea,
and realize that boat is just like me,
alone,
with only the mind to confort,
only the soft song of lonliness to lull me to sleep,
no bells of joy,
only cries to fill the ears,
no light of love,
only sadness to fill the heart,
no flowers of hapiness,
only bitterness to fill the soul,
and shades of greyto fill the eyes.

An eagle flies but my heart cries, 13
I look to the world for the answers,
and look to myself to see what really matters,
for the past is life's greatest mystery,
only the wise and strong of heart con solve,
but my heart is tattered and torn,
only a shread of identity to seek the truth,
and a well of self pity from wich I shall draw my strength,
for many a times have tears touched my cheek,
and for each love lost I shall weep,
the lies and falsehoods can no longer hide the truth,
and with all that I am,
all the I shall be,
I shall find it and bring back tears of joy to my broken heart.[/i]

What do you think? I just wrote this, and look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Captian_Janeway · **Fri Oct 18, 2002 11:25 am Re: From the Bottom of a Broken Heart**

[quote="Captian_Janeway"]This is a poem form my broken heart, and i hope you enjoy it. i have written a couple of stories, and i thought, Why not give poetry a shot? well here goes.

[i]A lonely breeze carasses my cheek,
I look out my window and see a tiny boat at sea,
and realize that boat is just like me,
alone,
with only the mind to confort,
only the soft song of lonliness to lull me to sleep,
no bells of joy,
only cries to fill the ears,
no light of love,
only sadness to fill the heart,
no flowers of hapiness,
only bitterness to fill the soul,
and shades of greyto fill the eyes.

An eagle flies but my heart cries,
I look to the world for the answers,
and look to myself to see what really matters,
for the past is life's greatest mystery,
only the wise and strong of heart con solve,
but my heart is tattered and torn,
only a shread of identity to seek the truth,
and a well of self pity from wich I shall draw my strength,
for many a times have tears touched my cheek,
and for each love lost I shall weep,
the lies and falsehoods can no longer hide the truth,
and with all that I am,
all the I shall be,
I shall find it and bring back tears of joy to my broken heart.[/i]

What do you think? I just wrote this, and look forward to hearing your thoughts.[/quote]

Captian_Janeway · **Fri Oct 18, 2002 11:26 am**

Sorry I double posted.

Voy_Girl · **Fri Oct 18, 2002 3:41 pm**

Very nice, and deep, poem.

5thhouse · **Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:44 pm**

Thats good

Captian_Janeway · **Tue Oct 22, 2002 9:17 am**

Thank-you. I got dumped and wrote this.

Voy_Girl · **Sun Oct 27, 2002 8:57 am**

That's sad, but it explains the poem.

Lxe · **Thu Feb 27, 2003 9:43 am**

very beautiful Captain_Janeway.

Josi Rockholt · **Thu Feb 27, 2003 9:46 am**

It's beautiful.Good job.

Chakotays Angel · **Thu Feb 27, 2003 5:06 pm**

Beautiful and Strong with emotions

Matrix881 · Captain Joined: 19 Feb 2003 Posts: 520

Nice Beautiful Poem

ussshorty · **Sat Mar 22, 2003 5:12 am**

buetiful

brings a tear to my eye

theres a britney song called 'from the bottom of my broken heart'.

but this poem is way better than that song

janewaykat · **Sat Mar 22, 2003 10:59 am**

It's really good

ussshorty · **Sat Mar 22, 2003 12:05 pm**

i agree there really should be more talent like this and thank god the star trek voyager site hs talent.

Voy_Girl · **Sat Mar 22, 2003 1:59 pm**

^
True..

ussshorty · **Sun Mar 23, 2003 10:15 am**

at least the ppl on this site write their own stuff and makes sure it comes from their head cause some ppl actually have the cheek to go to a fanfiction site and nick summin from there.

Voy_Girl · **Mon Mar 24, 2003 3:06 pm**