Sometimes.... (a poem)

[Starbuck]

Sometimes... when I'm all alone, I cry because I'm different
Sometimes... after a fight with someone I love, I cry because they're gone
Sometimes... when its dark, I pretend that I can fly
Sometimes... when I'm asleep, I dream about you
Sometimes... when I'm alone, I cry because you don't like me
Sometimes... when I'm afraid, I hug my blanket tight
Sometimes... when I'm sad, I say things I don't mean
Sometimes... when I feel abandoned, I get defensive and mean
Sometimes, just sometimes, I know that I'm alone

[IntrepidIsMe]

Wow, it's good. Pretty powerful,

[Starbuck]

Thank you aaron

[Micteth-Son of Udas]

not bad
as a writer of poems my self i sugest that you change this one word :
tight
to :
tightly

gives it a bit of ryme to it