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Deciviel
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PostWed Apr 23, 2003 6:52 pm    I Cry

My heart quenched with anguish,
So lonley without you.
You laugh and rejoice with another,
Whilst I reap the seeds of sorrow.

Each day with the rising of the sun,
I hope that maybe this will be the day.
The day in which we find our love,
But then I am awakened by harsh reality.

Thoughts of you echo throughout my mind,
I cry a secret pain inside.
A confluence of anxieties pesters my soul,
Am I doomed to die alone?

I weep a thousand tears for you,
I feel a thousand pains for you.
I�d die a thousand deaths for you,
I am frostbitten by the cold of lonlieness.

Blessed be your heart,
Oh how I wish I could be at your side.
Yet that dream may never come to pass,
And so once again I cry.


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shrek man
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PostWed Apr 23, 2003 8:49 pm    

That was good and sad.

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@Chuckles
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PostWed Apr 23, 2003 9:35 pm    

wow very powerful ending

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Voy_Girl
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PostThu Apr 24, 2003 1:57 pm    

Indeed... The whole poem is very powerful.

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Lxe
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PostThu Apr 24, 2003 11:44 pm    

very beautiful.

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