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Deciviel Captain
Joined: 27 Sep 2002 Posts: 508 Location: Joe's Garage
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Wed Apr 23, 2003 6:52 pm I Cry |
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My heart quenched with anguish,
So lonley without you.
You laugh and rejoice with another,
Whilst I reap the seeds of sorrow.
Each day with the rising of the sun,
I hope that maybe this will be the day.
The day in which we find our love,
But then I am awakened by harsh reality.
Thoughts of you echo throughout my mind,
I cry a secret pain inside.
A confluence of anxieties pesters my soul,
Am I doomed to die alone?
I weep a thousand tears for you,
I feel a thousand pains for you.
I�d die a thousand deaths for you,
I am frostbitten by the cold of lonlieness.
Blessed be your heart,
Oh how I wish I could be at your side.
Yet that dream may never come to pass,
And so once again I cry.
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shrek man Whiz Kid
Joined: 14 Jan 2002 Posts: 5519
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Wed Apr 23, 2003 8:49 pm |
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That was good and sad.
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@Chuckles Rear Admiral
Joined: 23 Aug 2002 Posts: 3253 Location: I want to drink your blood lol
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Wed Apr 23, 2003 9:35 pm |
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wow very powerful ending
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu Apr 24, 2003 1:57 pm |
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Indeed... The whole poem is very powerful.
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Lxe keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002 Posts: 3622 Location: stv
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Thu Apr 24, 2003 11:44 pm |
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very beautiful.
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