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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:43 am You Used To Love Me. (Song Lyrics I wrote) |
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These are lyrics I wrote. I even tried to put it together in music. Still working on that.
The song is like a pop/rock type song with a semi-slow tempo.
You Used To Love Me.
By: Andrew J. Bullock
(Starts out soft and mellow)
When I see you on the streeet....
You look so differently..
What happend to you befoooore......
You used to love meee...
(Short Break)
*Chorus*
(Louder with a good melody)
You used to love me
what ever happend to you..
You used to stay with me
But now I look and you're gone,
You're with someone noooow.....
But you used to love me...
(Small Break; music softens)
You showed me many things..
I thought i'd never see....
You made me smile
and laaaugh all the way....
You never rated me..
I was always good to you...
You even said you stiiil looove meee..
*Chorus*
You used to love me!
I never wanted to lose you..
and I see my self cry out..
Because you're never here anymoore..
I caaan't taaake thiiiis paaain..
Everything we've shared before..
I want yoou baack here with mee..
Because you used to loove me.
(Music plays out for the ending)
You used... oh yes, you used to love me...
(Music ends in a slow tempo)
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I kinda rushed it. This isn't the final peice, but it was something to pass the time with.
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Thu Jun 30, 2005 2:10 am |
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Thats really good! My brother is in to song writing too! It's very good Andrew! You should be proud of yourself!!
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anywaythewindblows Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 74
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Mon Aug 08, 2005 4:39 am |
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ooh nice
fav. part
You showed me many things..
I thought i'd never see....
You made me smile
and laaaugh all the way....
You never rated me..
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Tue Aug 16, 2005 10:53 am |
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Nice. I wrote a song too, but it was so crappy that I almost hurt myself because of the shame. Settled with burning the paper, though.
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