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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 5:09 am Unnamed Story. |
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Well...This is really just a test. Was thinking about writing something like this yesterday, but...Yeah. I usually write stories in M/S Word, and then maybe post them. But this is an exception. Hence, it doesn't have a name. But hey, what are names anyway?
Chapter I
Izzy Torrent
Isaac Jonathan Torrent, 17. Isaac "Izzy" Torrent, from East London, England, now living in the small town of Duncan, Canada, was sitting on the bus, on his way to Alberta. He had his feet up on the back of the seat on front of him, and leaning his elbow on the window.
Nobody wanted to sit by him. Might be because he looked kind of funny. A wristband with medium-sized spikes in four rows, torn dark blue jeans, a black shirt, and a white tie, hanging loosely from his throat. His hair was messy and long, dyed black.
Back home in Duncan he was pretty popular, and in certain circles in Alberta as well.
Popularity doesn't bring with it friendship however. Though nobody could tell, Izzy Torrent was probably one of the lonliest guys around.
He knew they only liked him because he played guitar. And he was damn good at it too. He turned his eyes from his Chuck Taylor-clad feet, shoes which he had stolen not so long ago as he wasn't prepared to pay that much for them, to the guitar case in the seat next to him.
There sat his only friend. His one true friend, whom he could trust and rely on completely.
His everything. His lover, his best friend, his family and colleague - a plain black guitar case and the red and black electric guitar within.
He grabbed the case and pulled it closer, then looked out the bus window, waiting silently for his stop.
To be Continued.
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 5:23 am |
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It's good so far
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 2:24 pm |
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Hmm ... I'm interested in seeing where you plan to go with this.
It is a great introduction!
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 3:06 pm |
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I haven't planned anything with it. I'm just going to write, really, based on ideas I just kinda...get
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 3:09 pm |
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^Well said, Tobbe.
And good job
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 3:27 pm |
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Well, that's cool!
Keep it up!
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Thu Jul 28, 2005 5:23 am |
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Is there a second part to the story?
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 28, 2005 6:22 pm |
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Not yet. Might be in the future.
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Thu Jul 28, 2005 7:15 pm |
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Ok, thanks
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ILoveHarry Admiral
Joined: 14 Jan 2004 Posts: 7909 Location: Houston
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Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:34 pm |
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He sounds frickin hot! I'd sit by him.
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:18 am |
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/\ Your funny
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 1:29 pm |
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ILoveHarry wrote: | He sounds frickin hot! I'd sit by him. |
Amen to that! He's like an attractive version of my mate Manwhore (real name Gurbaj).
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