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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:27 am My poems =P |
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Yes...I've written poems.
Oath of Eternity.
Hear my pledge of alliegance, my love.
Hear me, when I say that I�ll be there for you for all eternity.
I shall stand by your side when the oceans dry out.
I shall stand by your side when the stars fall from the blackness of the night sky.
When the dead rise from their graves,
When the angels cut off their wings,
When trees, plants and the most beautiful of flowers wither and die,
Even when children cry tears of blood, my love, I will stand by your side.
I swear my oath of alliegance, my beauty.
This warrior will never leave your side.
The Streets
There is a street on which I have walked for a long time.
It�s named Misery.
Misery is a big and wide road, where many people walk sometimes.
Some people walk there most of the time.
This street is where I met you.
You were only passing by,
But you led me to another street.
Then there was another street, on which I walked for a while.
It was named Joy.
In between Joy and Misery lies another street.
The most beautiful street of them all.
It was named Love.
We walked on Joy for a while, you and I, together.
You led me slowly towards Love, with your words and small gestures.
We walked to Love, you and I, together.
Suddenly you looked at me, and your eyes shot open in fright.
You ran away, straight onto the street named Misery, and left me alone on Love.
I ran after you, onto Misery.
Now we walked together on Misery.
You walked faster.
I understood you wanted to get away from me.
I stopped for a moment.
And thats where we are.
Sometimes I look towards Joy and Love, and think of the days that we had. Hoping that you, one day, would like to go there with me.
I walk with one foot on Love, and the other on Misery, and look after you where you walk, alone on Misery
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:02 am |
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I love the first one, Dappy!!! The second one is good too, but I like the second one more.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:04 am |
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Thank you. I have a distinct feeling I might write more tonight.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:07 am |
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~You will write a poem... a poem about how girls on the internet are deeper then they seem... then you will scrap that poem and write something a bit more poetic...~
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:09 am |
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Bah, I already know you're very deep.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:10 am |
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Help!! I'm drowning!!!
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:13 am |
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That deep, eh?
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:14 am |
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Yes. So deep, I'm drowning.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:18 am |
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I know what you mean. Really. heheh
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 3:45 pm |
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Quote: | When the angels cut off their wings,
When trees, plants and the most beautiful of flowers wither and die,
Even when children cry tears of blood |
You know what's weird? The dream I had last night had all that stuff. Satan was there too.
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:31 pm |
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Hmm ... I sense some deep dark mystery to you. Your poems really do tell me a lot about you.
They are very good poems. You have a special gift for putting your feelings into words and making them make perfect sense. Or letting the person reading know exactly what is going through your mind, and your feelings.
Good Job. Write more soon!
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:58 am |
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Wrote one today, while seeing my cat sleep. She did look dead.
Cattus Mortem Est
She lies still in the boiling sun,
eyes closed,
legs stretched out.
(Cattus Mortem Est)
She rests still on the gray streets of the concrete jungle.
Cause of death unknown.
People see,
(Cattus Mortem Est)
Nobody cares.
It's just a dead cat, afterall.
(Cattus Mortem Est)
This other one is not actually a poem. It's just something I wrote. I name all of my things I write, that are about my odd opinions about things "Ramblings of a Lunatic". And since this is the third one I've written, it's only logical that I call it Part III.
Ramblings of a Lunatic, Pt. III
Some say that summer is inspiring.
It's the opposite for me.
The sun, the heat, the plants and the green.
They are so typical.
The heat and the sun exhausts me.
Not physically, but from a psychic, mental and creative point of view.
I long for the nights.
Their darkness, silence and understanding feels safe. Like a true friend when you really need one.
But I am not allowed to spend time in the silent, dim night.
It is deemed neccesary, a must, to be outside in the intense, almost frantic, heat and the staring sun.
This comes directly from the heart.
The sun stares at me in this moment.
Close your big, glowing eye, sun.
Let the moon take your place.
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Birdy Socialist
Joined: 20 Sep 2004 Posts: 13502 Location: Here.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:49 am |
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Kewl! From your first post I like the second one best, but you sent that to me once right?
And from this ^ post I like the second one best, too. Thought the cat poem is pretty cool too
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Nosce te ipsum
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 5885 Location: Slough, England
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 10:51 am |
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Dappy... why aren't you married yet?
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:00 am |
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Several reasons, dear.
1. I don't really want to get married.
2. I'm too weird
3. ...Can't think of this one, but 2 sounds too little. So I'll have this 3rd one as well.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:02 am |
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You're really not too weird.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:05 am |
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You wouldn't know. ^_^
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:07 am |
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You're poems are very, very beautiful. And anyway, I like weird.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:15 am |
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Thank you, and yes, so do I. I don't mind that most people here think I'm weird. They are of very little importance to me.
Anyhow, I couldn't find the other Ramblings of a Lunatic. I was going to post them, but the site I had them on is down.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:16 am |
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I walk around making cool stuff up, but it always get's forgotten. Someone needs to invent something that records your thoughts.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:18 am |
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Keep a notebook with you. I do that sometimes.
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madlilnerd Duchess of Dancemat
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:21 am |
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Yeah, but then I end up forgetting it as I write it... or getting hit while crossing the road.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:22 pm |
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Yes...That could be a problem.
Normality(Foul language)
Normality is being drunk every weekend.
It is getting in bed with as many different girls as you can.
It is following the trends.
It is having all the friends that money can buy.
Normality is Failure.
"MTV is the religion. The law.
Live by it."
Normality is Stupidity.
*beep* normality.
Wrote this just now. It's not very good, I know.
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:03 pm |
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Captain Dappet wrote: | Wrote this just now. It's not very good, I know. |
Hey! I think your poems are awesome!
I don't think you are weird, unless you get a kick out of killing baby animals.
You shouldn't care what people think of your poems or writings. You do have a talent, a skill and you let people know the depth of your mind through words.
Keep it up.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:22 pm |
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No, this isn't the depth of my mind. If I would be exposing the very depths of my mind, it would be like standing in a crowded square, taking my clothes off, except it would be much nastier and weirder.
And no, I don't get a kick out of killing baby animals, don't worry there.
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