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Valathous
The Canadian, eh
Joined: 31 Aug 2002
Posts: 19074
Location: Centre Bell
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 Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:43 pm Random lyrics I wrote |
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This song is pretty depressing but yeah, I was bored, and wrote them in like 10 minutes. So yeah, here you go!
I remember the time when I could say you were mine.
I remember that time, now my mind pays the fine.
The road goes ever on say they.
Though mine just seems to wither away.
The clock ticks on with its perpetuating strokes
Though those of my heart are closer to chokes
Your embrace filled me up.
Without it now, I just want to give up.
(Chorus)
You wreathed my heart in fire!
For you it will still desire.
Now from these fires, I shall imbue
A life where I may never start anew
The jealousy that was turned my life pleating
Has become to me a-fleeting.
For I have discovered a new best friend.
Whose razor sharp bend shall cause my end.
(Chorus)
The light in my eyes has become a blur
My heart will no longer hear your gentle purr.
Your ice-cold gaze will freeze my love.
Your words will give me the final shove.
(Chorus)
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Puck
The Texan
Joined: 05 Jan 2004
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:55 pm |
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Liked it, wish I had a tune to listen to it wiiiiiith, though.
Anyhow, awesome lyrics, my favourite verse was the second one, btw
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Lord Borg
Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003
Posts: 11214
Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:04 pm |
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Cool, good job Dan
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Founder
Dominion Leader
Joined: 21 Jun 2004
Posts: 12755
Location: Gamma Quadrant
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:06 pm |
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*Tear falls from eyes. Is speechless.*
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B'Elanna Torres 7 of 9
Ballet Babe
Joined: 20 Aug 2001
Posts: 3642
Location: DISNEY WORLD
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:34 pm |
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that's really pretty dan! i wish i could hear it sung!
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"...I want so much more than they've got planned."*Belle Reprise* Beauty and the Beast
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:36 pm |
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^^
Good job, Dan.. these are good..
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Starbuck
faster...
Joined: 19 Feb 2003
Posts: 8715
Location: between chaos and melody
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:48 pm |
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ubersexyness!!!111
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Republican_Man
STV's Premier Conservative
Joined: 26 Mar 2004
Posts: 14823
Location: Classified
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| Mon Jun 20, 2005 12:05 am |
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Very good! I give it a 7.5 to 8 out of 10, for a beginner, of course. But good work 
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"Rights are only as good as the willingness of some to exercise responsibility for those rights- Fmr. Colorado Senate Pres. John Andrews
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Seven of Nine
Sammie's Mammy
Joined: 16 Jun 2001
Posts: 7871
Location: North East England
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| Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:44 am |
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I like them a lot. I need to hear it, now 
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