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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 10:44 pm Someone Like You |
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Someone Like You
By:Andrew J. Bullock
"A given gift is someone like you
Loving, caring, knowing you're true.
Never would I ask to give you up
and always would I try to cheer you up.
If you were in the depths of death
I would sacrifice myself so you'd be alright.
If I hadn't met you I would be gone
into the depths of fiery logs.
I think of you as a big brother
although I know i'm full of thunder.
I always wanted to know someone like you
one little 'hey' set it all through.
Thank you for giving me this chance with you
Always will I look back and smile because of you.
~Andrew"
I ran out of words. I know some of this doesn't rhyme, but it's something I could work with.
Last edited by AndrewBullock on Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:39 am; edited 2 times in total
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:06 am |
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Awww Andrew that poem is so sweet The title could be Someone Like You
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:25 am |
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Good suggestion, Nadia. Thank you for taking a liking in it.
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:48 am |
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That is so beautiful. I am your fan 4 life
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 6:46 am |
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Well Im his #1 fan! Andrew even says so!!
btw, your welcome Andrew
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 6:50 am |
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Well I am his mom sticks tongue out He says I love you mom.... haha
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 6:52 am |
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Are you Andrew's mumma??
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 7:07 am |
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No not real one. But he calls me his second mama. I love him like he is one of my own.
sssh we hijacking his topic. this is his lol
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 2:16 pm |
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aww, Andrew... that was so cute.
Good job hun, keep it up!!!
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:29 am |
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Thank you. You all make me laugh You're funny people.
But also the most encouraging.
Thank you
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:32 am |
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Your Welcome Andrew
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:08 am |
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I wonder what i'll do with all of these poems.. probably keep them in some sort of scrap book or something. When I feel sad or something like I like to read my poems. They help me. lol
Can't thank you guys enough,
~Andrew
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:32 am |
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You should make a book! "Andrews Book Of Poems"
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Tuvok8917 Dutchie
Joined: 15 May 2004 Posts: 4205 Location: On my way back home
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 4:40 am |
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This is really good...
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zero Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 4566 Location: Texas
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 4:44 pm |
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You should save them, because one day you might be famous and then die... and then have lines in your poems quoted... and very pricey!
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:59 pm |
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lol, thank you Zero. I will save them. Hopefully they'll be something some day.
Thank you Rob for saying, "This is good..."
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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Tuvok8917 Dutchie
Joined: 15 May 2004 Posts: 4205 Location: On my way back home
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Sun Jun 19, 2005 1:30 pm |
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AndrewBullock wrote: |
Thank you Rob for saying, "This is good..." |
haha, funny. Will catch you on MSN
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