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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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 Tue May 31, 2005 10:56 pm Deaths meaning. (Poem) |
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"Death can mean so many things
Even take you through tons of dreams.
Blood is what I seem to see
When I think to many things.
Tears seem to gleam
Like going a stream
What have I done to make this obsecene.
Black and grey are colors of stray
Father forgive me for my stay.
Waters of rain sound like chains
Rocks and caves seem so lame.
Pain is something I never fear
Only when people make it so near.
I ask you now
never to scoul
times of darkness
are always a foul."
~Andrew
I just got bored so here you are. I was having trouble finding an ending so I just left it like that. Got a name for this one??
Last edited by AndrewBullock on Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:07 am; edited 1 time in total
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia
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Joined: 08 Apr 2005
Posts: 8560
Location: Australia
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| Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:02 am |
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Kool, LOve it! Um hows about "Deaths meaning?"
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:06 am |
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^^Sure #1. This one's for you!!!^^ 
~Andrew
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nadia
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Joined: 08 Apr 2005
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Location: Australia
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| Wed Jun 01, 2005 2:32 am |
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Aww, thanks Andrew
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zero
Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Posts: 4566
Location: Texas
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| Wed Jun 01, 2005 2:31 pm |
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Nice
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Wed Jun 01, 2005 6:05 pm |
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Thank you, guys.
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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zero
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Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Posts: 4566
Location: Texas
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| Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:34 pm |
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anytime hun!!! Just keep it up!!
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