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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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 Tue May 31, 2005 1:13 am Path |
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By: Andrew J. Bullock
"The back water ways
have began to phase.
Where do I go
to put my soul?
"Forgive me father for I have sin"
"I know it's something you can never mend."
Father I need
Father i'll even bleed for you.
Watch this soul
turn to coal,
Help me through
the broken mold.
Back to Heaven
I won't tell,
back to hell
and I will fail.
All I need is your love
even if it's soaked in sud."
~Andrew
This is kinda of odd, but hey, it's 2:11 in the morning and i'm extremly bored. 
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia
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Joined: 08 Apr 2005
Posts: 8560
Location: Australia
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| Tue May 31, 2005 2:34 am |
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Andrew I think thats one of your best yet! I like ones about Heaven
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Sam Kenobi
Not a Duke
Joined: 13 Jun 2003
Posts: 10373
Location: The 'Verse
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| Tue May 31, 2005 2:42 am |
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Interesting use of slant rhyme...
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zero
Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Posts: 4566
Location: Texas
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| Tue May 31, 2005 4:13 pm |
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 good job Andrew!
keep writing more!!
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