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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 2112 Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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Sat May 28, 2005 5:28 pm See. (Poem/kinda song lyrics. lol) |
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By: Andrew Bullock
"Tragedy strikes one so many
When it does it’s oh so canny.
Back to that feeling of pain’s you hate
Not even states could break your fate.
“What have I done to deserve this life?”
“What have I done to serve this fight?”
I'm falling for I can't see
I need someone to free me.
And in that darkened time
I know that you will be kind.
Someone please save me from the charm
Even when I’m so unharmed.
For now I see the error
Thanks to the weather.
Thanks for coming back to me
Now that I know that I can see.
The mistakes I’ve made
Will never... be the same."
~Andrew J. Bullock
Towards the end I was thinking of a song-type-setting. lol
Sorry if you have trouble understanding it.
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005 Posts: 8560 Location: Australia
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Sun May 29, 2005 1:07 am |
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It's good, I realy like it when I see that you have written stuff cause I know that it `aint gunna be crappy! Well done once again Andrew
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