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AndrewBullock
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PostSun May 22, 2005 1:47 pm    Pain

The screeming pain
always the same.
Will it not leave,
Stop making me bleed.
Take your last breath
This is the last test.
Think of me in times of pain
For I will feel your thoughts of shame.
I'll never forget the times we've shared
Even though I was a slumber of snares.
Father forgive me for I know not what I do
Father take me and i'll walk on through.
For if i'm sent to hell,
slaped in chains
and sent to jail,
I will take my stand as you once did.
Open the gates
to Heavenly saints
leave me not here
and I will not fear.
I'll love you always
even from far aways.
Protect me, Father
for i'll always need it...



~Andrew J. Bullock


Not quite done, but I guess it's okay.


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PostMon May 23, 2005 2:28 am    

Wow Andrew you are so good at this! Mabye you should call it Pain? Keep writing more! I love your poems!

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AndrewBullock
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PostMon May 23, 2005 5:42 am    

lol!


Thanks, Nadia. I'll continue to write more.



~Andrew



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PostMon May 23, 2005 5:44 am    

Thats good, cause I wanna hear more !

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KathrynDavismyalterego
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PostSat May 28, 2005 10:07 pm    

nice job

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