Denial

[AndrewBullock]

Hearts of shunder
hear my thunder.
Why do I try
Why do I cry.
Bullets strike me down
Like dead brids fall to the ground.
O father give me strangth
O father take away his hate.
For I have sins
and so does he.
Take the better one
Who deserves you to cradle them.
I'm not worthy
I'm not good.
Will you speak to me
or will you beat me.
I need you now
so don't go south.
For I must be saved
Saved, by his faith.



~Andrew

[madlilnerd]

You put so much emotion and strong passion into your work! I love it!

[AndrewBullock]

Thank you!! Writing helps me in a way. I just put the words together as I go along.




~Andrew

[madlilnerd]

I got told off in English today for writing poetry. Yes, that's right, in an ENGLISH class I got told off for writing poetry. Last week my teacher told me off for writing a play.

I like all of your poems. Have you ever thought about getting them published?

[vorrick]

It was good.... keep it up

[AndrewBullock]

Thank you, Vorick


I've never thought of publishing them. Maybe my english teacher can help me with it. She's a friend of mine. (I know.... such a teachers pet )

Thank you for not hating it. lol



~Andrew