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KathrynDavismyalterego
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 Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:11 pm Breakdown(a poem) |
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In this place no hope can be found
Here falling toward a breakdown
caught in a web of fear
Only one way out of here
stand again even if it is alone for what you believe
get up form your knees and go with pride home
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nadia
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| Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:58 am |
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its very good! whats it about????
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KathrynDavismyalterego
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| Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:17 pm |
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it's basicly about breaking down but realising you have to stand up for what you believe even if you're the only one and you stand alone take pride in what you believe  thanks a lot I apretiate your comments! 
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nadia
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| Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:09 am |
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cool,now I under stand
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madlilnerd
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| Fri Apr 29, 2005 1:37 pm |
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Good poem. Reached me like moral boosting poems should.
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KathrynDavismyalterego
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| Mon May 16, 2005 9:31 pm |
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I'm glad you like it I write a lot of poems at another forum I just wanted to see if anyone here would read one of them and what they thought
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