My Book of poems

Leo Wyatt · **Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:09 pm My Book of poems**

Sometimes I cry without warning
Sometimes I cry when I am mad
Sometimes I can't never explain
Why on Earth do I cry?
I don't know, you tell me.

Don't ask where I got that from, it just came to me.

Superman · Fleet Admiral Joined: 06 Dec 2003 Posts: 10220

That's very nice, kmma.

And do you know why I think it is nice? Because it is spontaneous, you said you don't know where you got it from. I do - it came from the heart.

Lovely, thanks for sharing it.

Curtis · **Sun Dec 12, 2004 7:01 pm**

Greatness...pure greatness, straight from the heart as Starfleet_Dentist said

. I hope you have more just like it and share them.

Leo Wyatt · **Mon Dec 13, 2004 7:04 am**

I will have more to come.

Leo Wyatt · **Mon Dec 13, 2004 1:22 pm**

Sky is as blue as my eyes
but it goes away as the darkness falls
My baby blue eyes turn to tears
falling like rain on a cool and lonely December
night.
I am all alone without the one I love.

Superman · Fleet Admiral Joined: 06 Dec 2003 Posts: 10220

Very good. Sounds like it came from the heart again. I'm no expert on poetry but I would say that poetry is only good if the author puts some emotion into it and their personality shines through.

Leo Wyatt · **Tue Dec 14, 2004 5:32 pm**

Thanks. I am working on a book of poems. When I get through with it. I will post them here. I am working on one right now. I will post it by Friday.

Superman · Fleet Admiral Joined: 06 Dec 2003 Posts: 10220

I look forward to it, kmma.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:36 am**

The wind blows hard,
it knocks me down to the cold green grass,
I barely get up and look up
There this man with long hair brown hair
standing over me
he said, '' My child, I always with you til the very end.''
I suddenly close my eyes and think to myself,'' I am dreaming or is this Jesus, I so long to see.''
I looked back up, he was taking me up to the big blue sky.

lionhead · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 10:03 am**

I'm sorry, i just find it very boring.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 10:25 am**

Then if you find it boring then don't post here. If you gonna say that, then pm me personally. I am not going to go on your post and say something of yours boring and hurt your feelings. But looks like you the only one. That finds it boring.
Have you ever heard if you dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all?

If I was a vengeful person I would get you back but I won't cause I am better than that.

And I will continue to write my poems, It makes me feel better.

superwoman · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:08 pm**

^Deb, he wasn't trying to be mean. It was just his oppinion... You can't expect everyone to love it. People has diffrent taste that's all.

But do keep writing... even thou everyone doesn't like it, some people do.

lionhead · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:14 pm**

Yes, i was just giving my opinion 9i even sayed i'm sorry before i even sayed it). Thank you for explaining that Superwoman.

I even got a Pm from charlie, i thought it was very funny.

Sometimes yo people are very light touched. phf, i'll stop saying anything from now on.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:31 pm**

No, you can. but I think opinion likethat should be in a pm so it wont really hurt the person. i am not mad. I was at the time but went and thought about things. Hey my hubby was only looking out for me.

I will keep writing and it is not boring.

lionhead · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:37 pm**

alright, be at peace and fire away.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:37 pm**

You right Superwoman. My poems is my way of being without Charlie and Lionhead can laugh all he wants. It is not going to hurt me anymore. Cause he aint worth getting mad over. I am going to keep writing. I never said he couldnt say anything . But opinions like that as i said above.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:40 pm**

I will start all over with my poems. I pmed voygirl and asked her to lock this cause it got out of hand. But i am not giving up cause I will be back with more.

superwoman · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 2:53 pm**

You don't have to lock this thread because of that

He just said that he thought it was boring... not everyone like poetry and all that... You shouldn't have to stop writing just because of that. I bet he didn't mean to hurt those feelings of yours!

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 4:34 pm**

Yeah, true I hope VOy girl ignores my pm then.

Thomas · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 5:27 pm**

K, it's like superwoman said - not everyone likes poetry, and I'm sure lionhead didn't mean to hurt your feelings, Deb,

You can delete your PM to Voy_Girl from your outbox before she reads it and then she'll never get it.

Leo Wyatt · **Sat Dec 18, 2004 5:42 pm**

Yeah, I know. I pm Lionhead and apologzed but whenever he reads it its up to him. I was just too emotional today. I acted like a total b and usually dont

Superman · Fleet Admiral Joined: 06 Dec 2003 Posts: 10220

I like them but I think if anyone finds them boring, they should say why. Constructive criticism and all that. Nothing wrong with somone finding something boring but it is probably best to say why so that the author can see where you're coming from. Just a thought.

superwoman · **Sun Dec 19, 2004 5:20 pm**

^Yea... I agree. But maybe he didn't know why...

anyway... I think it's best if we just drop this

lionhead · **Sun Dec 19, 2004 7:08 pm**

Finally!

Leo Wyatt · **Mon Dec 20, 2004 9:00 am**

The snow is white as the fluffy fat clouds
and the sky is as blue as the ocean.
I love to sit out in the warm spring air,
looking up at the clear blue sky.