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This sounds extremely interesting
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It has a good start, Needs a ot of work before it could become a Novel
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Not in league to become a Novel but perhaps a short story
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Please, for humankind�s sake, stop writing!
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sabertooth1217
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PostFri Jul 09, 2004 1:19 pm    Opinions on a Novel I have started

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Virus
A Novel by John R. Lechlitner

Characters: Daniel Becker, Christina Miller, Robert Clancy
Location: Dallas Texas; July 19,2143

Summary: What would you do if you woke up one morning to find out that everyone you loved was gone? Your entire life changed in only a matter of hours? Daniel Becker experienced this on July 19, 2143. A computer virus was unleashed in Washington DC, the capitol of the leading country on Earth, exposing itself to every system on earth. Exposing it into the nuclear power plants, Toxic waste organizations and into classified medical labs which contains lethal infections only few humans know about. Three people found out about this virus, a little too late. How can only three people prevent a tragedy that could corrupt an entire world?


Please give me all of your Input on a Novel I have started (Which won�t be posted with hope of getting it published at some point). Will this make a good Novel? Is �Virus� I good name for it?


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PostFri Jul 09, 2004 6:27 pm    

Obviously, to create a better picture in my mind I'd need to read more, but the idea is indeed very interesting. I wouldn't mind reading it.

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sabertooth1217
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PostSun Jul 11, 2004 1:20 pm    

Thanks, I think that i am going to keep up with it and hope to get it into my first book someday.

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PostThu Jul 22, 2004 3:14 pm    

has a good storyline, I say keep writing

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PostSat Jul 31, 2004 6:45 pm    

thats a great start i would keep writing it may become popular if you finish and get it published

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PostTue Aug 10, 2004 2:53 pm    

I think the title was good. Short, and right on. Perhaps you could post one line or two from it, like a quote, just so that we get the general idea?

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