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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Sun May 23, 2004 6:39 pm The Life and Times of the USS PathFinder:Chapter 7 Coming |
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The Life and Times of the USS PathFinder
By Kyle Stewart
(I got the infomation from my rpg.)
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Sun May 23, 2004 7:43 pm |
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Chapter 1- The Crew Comes On Board
In the early 25th Century starfleet was building a new starship that would be thier flagship. That ship would be far superior any other ships before it. That ships name would be PathFinder and the class is also be PathFinder a one of kind vessel. The Person that was lucky enough to get this honour of this ship was Captain Geordi LaForge, a captain that had the USS Enterprise-D Galaxy II but got destroyed from a unknown cause. He was the best of the best. He had some of this old crew members that would come back and serve with him. There was his trusted first officer Commander Katie which served with him on the previous ship. But this ship had alot more than his previous ship. But he would miss her but who knows what lye ahead for him and his crew. The First to arrive was Lt. Lugard the chief helsman of this great ship and than this Second Officer came on board and his Chief Tactial Officer came on board than the rest of the senior officers came aboard. And many other crewmembers came also, some he havent met before some he has. And the rest of the crewmembers came to the famous ship. Captain LaForge and a few other crewmembers went to StarFleet HQ to find out what the mission they will be. It turned out that they had to face Borg and the Romulans. So Captain LaForge and the 2 people came with him beamed back to the PathFinder and getting ready to leave spacedock.
To Be Continued.
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Chapter 2-Leaving Spacedock/Briefing Room of Mission 1
When Captain LaForge came back on board. He went to the bridge where he's bridge officers are. He gave the order to Lt. Lugard to the ship out at quarter impluse, when we got cleared from ops. Operations cleared us so we left spacedock. When we cleared we headed to the Romulan Netural Zone at Maxisum Warp with our liquid metal hull to cover us for protection from high warps. Our ETA to there was 30 minutes to get there but all of a sudden a borg cube was coming our way. So enaged our cloak we have onboard. So I called all the senior officers to come to the conference room where we discussed the mission were about to embark on. So Captain LaForge told them that the Borg and the Romulans were joining forces to destroy all the federation. Captain LaForge told them also they were gonna be other ships and make up the Delta Fleet. Also told them that the Borg is where the Romulan's Homeworld is stationed.Captain LaForge's chief tactial officer contacted the fleet and they were gonna be to thier postion in 30 mins. So all of the fleet arrives beside the PathFinder and getting this mission done and over with. Also that Captain LaForge gave the order to put the armor up around the mighty PathFinder.
To Be Contiued....
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Seven of Nine Sammie's Mammy
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Mon May 24, 2004 8:01 am |
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Not bad at all
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Mon May 24, 2004 1:32 pm |
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Chapter 3-The Mission Begins Part 1
A few minutes later the mighty PathFinder has her armor is at full strength and phaser banks were charged and ready to fire. Her photon torpedo tubes 1 through 10 were ready to go also. While the ship was underway 10 borg cubes where on senors and all a sudden they dissappered on senors. Then Captain LaForge told his chief tactial officer to mention Seven in astormectics to do contiual sweeps to make sure the borg dont come by and said to her that they may have masked their warp signature. Shortly after he told his crew this, "THIS IS THE CAPTAIN:ALL CREW WERE GOING TO WAR AND SOME OF US MAY NOT RETURN AND SOME OF US WILL SO LETS GIVE IT OUR BEST EFFORT. LETS SEE IF OUR SHIP CAN DESTROY ALL THESE SHIPS ETC. AND PREPARE FOR IT." Than he closed comlink and than he told his chief tactial officer RED ALERT. So the mighty PathFinder was ready for battle. During the way to the netural zone, the astrometics 5 borg cubes were on the way to the PathFinder and thier almost dead ahead of us and at 5 million kms. Shortly after the chief astromectics officer called Captain LaForge and told him that thier was 20 more borg cubes coming towards us. Than the PathFinder had almost a major power loss but the cheif got it back up to 100%. It was too close for comfert. When we dropped out of warp we saw 3 romulan warbirds were off the starboard bow of the U.S.S. Uylesses, a galaxy class ship thats part of the Delta Fleet. So Captain LaForge gave the order to use the quantum torpedoes to destory thier warp cores. The ships were no matched for us and they werent no threat to us anymore. During the battle there was some causouties, but nothing major. They fired on some of the borg cubes were coming and destoryed some of them. Than Captain LaForge gave the order to get outta there at warp 4 and left the scene. By this time the PathFinder was in the Romulan Netural Zone and it was them and against the borg and the romulans. Far from starfleet and the ships are some damaged and the ships start to make repairs before moving on. But one of his crewmembers die during the explosion of the battle. The repairs took along time to complete before contiuing on. Few hours went by with repairs still going on.
To Be Contiued.....
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Chapter 3 Continued- The Mission Begins Part 2
The Repairs were finally done on the PathFinder and could get moving once more. Along the way Captain LaForge gets a message from his chief astrometics officer telling him that they will be at he place where the borg and the romulans are stationed. They will be there in less than 2 hrs, which is pretty good. 30 minute went by the chief astromectics sent the data to the captian where he reviewed her findings and told her to send them to the helmsman and getting ready for the battle. The Battle is gonna start which the crew has picked for the ship and to serve him. The PathFinder and the rest of ships finally reaches the stationed where the borg and the romulans are stationed. Its time for pay back to them. This time he asked his crew to make a suggestion to destroy the romulans from the inside out. The suggestion was homebase and destroy there and put a virus at the borg area and destroy the romluns. Which in fact the Borg and the Romulans homebase was destroyed thanxs to a certain brave soul. But he told us that the borg and the romulans had 20 ships left. Which was kind of good news. But we destroyed them no other the less. On the way back home a certain crewmember was stirring up in the ship.
To Be Contiuned......
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Tue May 25, 2004 2:18 pm |
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Chapter 4-Crewmember On The Loose.
During the way back home to earth someone was starting to eat some crewmembers on board. Captain LaForge didnt know who it was but it turned out to be his chief engineer Lt. Cmdr. Creeper. This crewmember was a senior officer and for some reason hes acting strange. But one of the medical offficers found a way to make this creature stop eatting humans. The medical officer stopped Creeper from going more crazy than before. Which it worked and all of sudden he didnt like eatting any more people. Finally PathFinder reaches earth and it was time to relax for the crew. The sad thing his first officer got promoted to captain and got her own command. Which shes gonna be sadly missed. But that postion was opened to the crew. But a new fresh commander was the captain's wife and she brought thier daughter along as well. Her name was Hyenafire.
To Be Contiued.....
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Tue May 25, 2004 6:26 pm |
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Chapter 5-Captain's Holiday/Creeper Breaks out
Shortly after looking for Commander Katie, Captain LaForge got a transmission from starfleet saying that Commmander Katie got a promtion to Captain. Which means she got her own command and her ship was the U.S.S Bismarck. Shortly after awhile Captain LaForge heads to the personal shuttlebay where his girlfriend and daughter Hyenafire. Were waiting for him to come down and head down to earth. Him and his famliy were heading to the cabin for some relaxing time off. While the PathFinder Lt. Commander Creeper was breaking out of the forcefield. While near the cabin Captain LaForge and Commander Sheena, sat down and Hyenafire was happy as can be in the back looking around. Both of them walked into the cabin and both of them look around and Sheena likes the cabin. Hyenafire walks into the captain and askes whats the watery stuff is and Captain told her it was a lake. After they were just abit settled in the medical officer Faith called them and told him that Lt. Cmdr. Creeper escaped from sickbay and is on the loose. So he had to go back to the ship and it was his chief security officer was helping Creeper out. While Lance and Creeper were on the loose Brian we injuryed. So after that was settled Captain LaForge went back to the cabin and tries to finish up the holiday.
To Be Contiuned.....
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
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Wed May 26, 2004 2:16 pm |
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good so far.keep going.
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John Connor Admiral of the Terran Empire
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Chapter 6-Troubles on the PathFinder/New First Officer
After awhile spent at the cabin Captain LaForge and his famliy try to have a relaxing evening. But it was shortly lived and the captain had to had back to the ship where his chief of security and science were on the loose. Creeper and Lance were going around the PathFinder and making a trouble along the way. Captain LaForge saw his chief engineer and told him to smarten up or he put him in the brig. But he didnt understand what he was trying to say. But he lost his security,science and first officer all at once and which he was in need of. Especially he was in need of a first officer. But a couple days later he got alot of people that wanted he postion and only one got it. His new first officer was his assistant doctor Lt. Commander Faith Counts which he liked that he picked her. Also he called for senior officers to report to the briefing room for the newest mission they were just about to embark on. The mission was that shortly after thier mission that they destroyed the borg and romulan alliance that the romulans talked about "Peace" Which they wanted badly and be part of the federation.
To Be Conituned....
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Puck The Texan
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Fri May 28, 2004 12:05 am |
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Ok...I have started reading it like I said I would I like it alot so far. Keep up the nice work
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ACDC Girl Krazy Kitty
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:33 pm |
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ok... this is like a REALLY late post, but i just came across it, and it's good. you should write a book.
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
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Sun Nov 28, 2004 1:25 pm |
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Great job Kyle, I look forward to more of this story.
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Alucard Vampire
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Tue Nov 30, 2004 8:30 pm |
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Very good story. You've got skills!
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ACDC Girl Krazy Kitty
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Tue Dec 07, 2004 7:29 pm |
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Yeah, he's very talented as well as everybody else.
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Sarah Connor Rear Admiral
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Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:28 pm |
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Woah..brings back memories -tear- I wont tell you the rest Im Faith BTW ^.^
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
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Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:23 pm |
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ACDC Girl wrote: | Yeah, he's very talented as well as everybody else. |
I guess we all are talented in our own little ways...although some of us (like me) can't write good enough stories to please themselves
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AndrewBullock The Misguided One
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Fri Dec 31, 2004 5:20 pm |
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I didn't know you did this Kyle. I'm impresed very much! Keep up the good work.
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