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Creeper the sneaker
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PostThu Nov 20, 2003 5:07 pm    Windigo ( Pg )

This is kinda based on Jeepers Creepers but some of the characters in this storie are made up?



Chap 1

Darry slow down? Darry looked at Patricha. Darry please? The car slowed down alittle. There isn't evan a single cop on the road? SO! said Patricha looking at him. There was silance for a while. I can't believe you crashed the car when you your 15? And you almost got hurt!? said Darry. Iren pocked her head up. Who is the oldest?.....I know I'm the youngest. Darry pointed at Trich. WOW!! said Iren freaked out. I thought Darry was the oldest? Darry laughed. I wish Iren. Patricha started to laugh to. Darry then looked at the cars hood and saw a black thing on it. What the heck........is that? The car went over to the side of the road. Darry turned off the car. What is that? said the other two. All of them then got out of the car and went near the hood. It's a bat!? said Darry. Poor thing. said Trich. How do we get it off of the car hood? said Iren. Darry started looking around. That will do. Darry went over and picked up a broken peace of wood and came over to the car. Be carefull!? said Patricha. The bat started screeching as Darry slide the wood underneth the bats belly. There we go? as Darry walked over to where there was grass. Darry put the bat down and the three of them went back to the car.
(hour later)
I's there evan a diner on this road? said Trich. I'm so hungry!? said Iren. Darry looked in the mirror. Your not the only one sis?........................I see one!! Good pull in there bro? said Trich. The car pulled into the driveway. Aaaa......Who has money? said Iren looking at both of them. I'll buy!? said Trich getting out of the car. OH GOODY!!!! said Darry getting out with Iren. Iren then hit Darry near the funnybone. OH CRUDE!!!!!!!!! as Darry held his elbow up. That really hurt sis!? said Darry running into the diner.


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PostFri Nov 21, 2003 4:21 pm    

Is the 3rd chapter supposed to be that short and end without a dot?

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PostSun Nov 23, 2003 2:15 pm    

No um er I'm still writing it?

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PostWed Nov 26, 2003 5:48 pm    

Okay I'm just checking my Signature?

Um Dont ask?



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PostWed Nov 26, 2003 6:44 pm    Re: Windigo

Chap 2

Patricha sat down at a table Iren and Darry then joined her. This Bratt hit me in the arm!? Iren laughd. I'm glade she did it? said Patricha smiling at him. Oh shut up Trich!? Patricha luaghd. I just realized something? said Iren. What. said Darry still rubbing his elbow. We are at the Dixi Boys? Hey yeah!? I wonder if bill is working? said Trich. Wanda came up to them. Hey you three? Oh hey. said Darry. Wanda put glasses of water on there table. Thanxs! said Iren. Patricha took a sip of water. Bill came over to them as Wanda went back to the counter. Hey guy's? as he sat down with them. Hey Bill. said Darry turning his head to look at him. What do you's want to order? said Bill looking at them. The usally? said Iren. Let me see? Toast for Iren......... Eggs and Bacon for Tricha?......................And Eggs for Dar? Right!? said Darry. Bill got up and put the order's down.
(Hour later)
Patricha payed for there lunch. I'll drive? said Trich. Sinse it is your car!? said Darry. Patricha went outside with Iren and got into the car. Well see ya later Bill? as Darry went outside and got into the car. It's starting to rain? said Iren. Patricha started the car and it went back onto the road.
(Short Hour later)
Are we at Dad's camp yet? said Iren. Don't worrie sis we'll get there? said Darry. Darry then fell asleep. Darry woke up in the car. They where at a camp. We are finally here? Darry got out of the car and went near the picnick table. Iren was swimming in the water. Patricha was watching her. Darry cam over.


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PostThu Nov 27, 2003 6:37 pm    Re: Windigo

You are actullu awake? said Trich. Where is Mom and Dad? They went out for awhile? Do you know when the'll be back Trich? said Darry. Patricha walked over to the cabin. No.......They never said anything..............If I know Mom and Dad the'll be back at 7:00? said Trich going into the cabin. HEY IREN!! Iren looked over. WHAT DARRY!!!!! Darry yelled again. ME AND TRICH WILL BE IN THE CABIN!!!!!! Iren shouted again. OKAY!!!!!! Darry went in the cabin and went and sat down at the kitchen table. Patricha was starting to make sandwitches for Iren.

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PostMon Dec 01, 2003 6:17 pm    Re: Windigo

Just to let you's know I'm Editing the hole storie so?

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PostTue Dec 02, 2003 10:16 am    

Creeper the sneaker wrote:
No um er I'm still writing it?


All right, I just thought there might be somthing wrong with the forum... Now I see.


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PostMon Jan 05, 2004 6:11 pm    

Chap 3

Darry went upstairs into his room. Darry went near the window and turned on the Tv.
(Meanwhile outside)
Iren jumped of the dock and into the water. She then went over to the sand and sat down. I'm glade it stoped raining? as she looked around. Iren looked at the tree's. Ever pritty!? Iren then saw something laying on the ground. She got up and started to walk over to it. She gasped. Mister?.....Hey sir?.......Iren started to shake the man. Hello? Darry looked out the window. Iren? Darry went downstairs. Patricha! Patricha turned. Iren is gone!? Patricha freaked. WHAT!!!!!!!! The two of them went out running. IREN!!! said Trich looking everyware. Iren then came over to them. Hey guy's? Darry and Patricha turned to look at her. Patricha grossed out. Why is there blood on you? Oh yeah there is a man lying hurt over there on the ground. Patricha and Darry both looked at each other. Show us? said Darry. Iren ran to the man as the other two followed her. Oh god!? said Trich. Darry bent down. He's leg is in one of Dad's bear traps? Patricha tryed to open the trap carefully. C'mon open you stupid thing!? Darry laughd. Trich looked up. You can help me you know? Darry went over and pulled with her finally the trap opend up. Darry put the trap over near a rock then went over to Irene. Irene notiched the man wearing a cloth around his mouth. Darry grabed his arms. Lets bring him into the house? Trich grab his legs? Patricha sighd. We'll put him in the guest room? What if this guy is a killer!? said Trich. We'll tie him up........or something Trich? Great!? Darry and Trich started to walk near the cabin. Becarefull Dar?

To be Con't..............


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PostSun Feb 29, 2004 6:41 pm    

Thinking...................

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