Notes/Ideas-Feedback Wanted!

[Ronevick]

-In 2066 a Nazi power arrises in Germany again and begins construction on weapons of mass destruction

-The US learns of this and in a preemptive strike they nuke Berlin and several other major German cities.

-The German war machine is left devastated and all hope of defeating the US is lost for them.

-German scientists devise a way to travel back in time to stop the bombing from happening in a last ditch effort to stay alive.

-In 2076 US troops have ravaged Germany and nearly 3/4 of Europe has been brutaly destroyed by nuclear weapons from German and the US and the scientists complete their time warp machine.

-They send nearly all of the remaining German military into the past, 1945 to be exact, during the middle of WWII.

-The leaders of the future German war machine launch an all out assault on the 1945 US, leaving the country crippled beyond repair.

-Unfortunately, during the time warp, the German's radar systems are damaged, and nearly a half of their weapons, given enough fuel to strike a target anywhere on Earth, miss the US completely and ravage the Earth leaving billions dead and millions wounded.

-The Germans establish themselves as the dominant force on the now dark and stormy planet Earth, its atmosphere and sky harshly damaged by the nuclear effects of the German's bombs.

-The President of the US announces to the remaining governments of the world a plan to join forces and form a resistance against the Germans.

-The year is now 2022, and the Germans remain the powerful force on the Earth, but the resistance begins to close in on the German capital equipped with new technology developed primarily by the British.

-Australian resistance task force 117 captures two German bombers after shooting them down over the now very polluted Atlantic Ocean while on a mission to drop nuclear bombs on remaining populated areas of the US.

-The Australian, British, and US governments work together and get the two bombers operational again and eventually send them back against the German war machine. Led by the two bombers, every remaining aerial task force is deployed against the Germans in a last ditch effort to even the odds of the war.

More to come. Does this idea have any merit at all? Also, I could use help with a name lol.

[tom_88_2]

it is very interesting but i have no ideas for names except mably The Resistance

[Deciviel]

Your story is dark, complex, and bleak-I like! I have a couple ideas for a name...

Dark Reich

The Treachory Complex

and Blackened Earth.

[prayerful7]

Excellent idea!! It has a good ring to it!

As for title, look at these...

Scorched Skies

Darkened Present

The Weapon of Time

Clouded Resistance

I think they all sound good, and they fit your story pretty well.. whateer you choose, write it anyway!!

[Sarah Connor]

Hmm, How about

The Dark Ages of Earth

The Dark War

A Time Of Darkness

Look For The Dark

((heh, all have Dark in em!)

[Captain CB]

i tink this would make a very good RPG

[Ronevick]

^Yeah I was just thinking about that, seriously!lol And thanks for the names and feedback guys. I'll be writing it in a few days when I have time to do something like that.

[Ronevick]

Well, I just made Chapter 1. The story is called The Time of Hell. I kind of combined some of your titles, though about em', and added in the word hell.