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PostSun Sep 28, 2003 8:52 am    

Jena-Luc:OPEN FIRE
Kate:Hold your horses Jean-Luc,I we are detection humanoid signatures
Will:Allright, we need an away team...
Tom:I'll Go Paris to Munroe...
Alex:Munroe here whats up Tom?
Tom:Alex you gonna come to the party?
Alex:Would miss it for the world...
Data:I am fully functional, and i wish to go
Jean-Luc:Sounds like a party, im comming along to!
Kate:Tuvok, better go to make sure the boys behave
Tuvok:Yes Maim
Kate:Those ships will be here in 2 hours, get ready away team...
Tom:Kate may I request that Seven of Nine and Icheb come along to?
Kate:You realize that if Icheb dies, Naomi will hunt you down and kill you
Data:We shall gaurd him with our lives
Naomi:HEY I DONT like him
Tom:First stage denyal...let get ready kids
Later in the armoury...
Alex:You trying to play match maker tom?
Tom:Huh? What are you talking about Alex?
Alex:You know, Data and Seven?
Tom:AAAAA yes, a good plan eh?
Data: I have never met this Seven of Nine so how could i feel a-O MY GOD
who is she?!?!?!
Tom:That would be Seven of Nine Mr.Data
Icheb:We have a mission to focus on let get-
Naomi:Dont get hurt Icheb, Come back alive
Jean-Luc:Hehehe, your girl friend Icheb?
Icheb:No, we are just CLOSE FRIENDS
Tom:First Stage Denyal
Icheb:Shutup Tom, I didnt make fun of you for dateing Torres
Tom:Point made, lets go!



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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 7:24 am    

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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 6:20 pm    

Our brave heros beam abord a spices 8472 ship
Data:Here they Come!
Tuvok:Get Ready
Tom: Wait, their flanking us
Jean-Luc: Harry, come on we must get the hostages
Tom:Right, we will distract the hostiles
Harry:Dont get killed Tom or B'lanna will rip my head off
Data:Tom watch Icheb, I do not wish to be killed by Ms. Wildman
Icheb:Allright, lets leave Naomi out of this
<Jean-Luc and Harry retreat from the engagement and find a beautiful> young woman being attacked by a spices 8472
Jean-Luc:Now its not nice to hit a lady
<Jean-Luc runs at the spices 8472 and beats the $h!t out of him>
Jean-Luc:What your name?
Dana:Dana Scully
Harry:OK, lets get you back to the Enterprize
<Dana looks deep into Jean-Lucs eyes, he can see what she is thinkign and he shakes it off...>
Jean-Luc:See you soon Dana


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PostWed Oct 01, 2003 9:25 pm    

Lol, its getting very interesting.
Good work, keep it up.


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PostThu Oct 02, 2003 2:34 pm    

Jean-Luc:We have captured the ship, lets get those *bee*
Kate:Allright, everyone set coarse of those spices 8472 ships!
<After all 4 ships arrive and a long and intecse combat one ship runs back into its realm...>
Will:FOLLOW IT!
Kate:Take us in
Tom:Lets rock and roll
<insernt Elvis song a 'little less conversasion' here>
<When they enter the realm only few ships remain...>
Kate:Allright, beam them out
Harry:Roger we have all of them captain.
Kate:Captain, i prefer that to admeral...Allrgiht beam us to their shis Mr. Kim
Tom:Allright, GET OUT NOW
Libby:NO HARRY I WONT LEAVE YOU
Harry:Sorry Libby, I love you
*************************************************************

Read Soon to find out the finallie............



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PostFri Oct 03, 2003 3:36 pm    

Ohhh, finallie

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PostFri Oct 03, 2003 4:03 pm    

Make it grandios... and long.

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PostSat Oct 04, 2003 10:32 am    

ok
umm give me time to write it on paper.....



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PostSun Oct 05, 2003 5:26 pm    The Finallie

Kate:Allright, The Ships have gone home, take over the Spices 8472 ship you are on and get the hell out of here!
Harry:The ship we captured is being overun with spices 8472!
Naomi and Dana scream in unison: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Tom:Looks like we have some stoweayays abord
Icheb: NO NAOMI!!!!!!!
Chakotay: Sorry kiddo, let the single guys die first
<Chakotay putses both of them out of the way and begins to fight the spices 8472 hand to hand>
Jean-Luc: DANA
<Jean-Luc fires his rifle and destroys both of the attackers>
Jean-Luc:Dana you allright?
Dana:I am not that you are here Jean-Luc
<After saying that Jean-Luc kisses Dana>
Tom:Sorry to break up the party kids but we got hostiles inbound
Jean-Luc:Dana take this rifle
Dana:Sweet
Kate:Looks like you kids are the most threat, all the remaning spices 8472 have beamed to the ship your on
Icheb:Naomi, honney take this
Naomi:Sweet, what is it?
Icheb:Federation Assult Rifle, and may i say you look really se-
Harry:Thats enought Romeo, we got work to do
After hours of dogfighting spices 8472 are destroyed
Kate:Allright Everyone set a coarse for home
*************************************************************

THE END



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PostMon Oct 06, 2003 3:34 pm    

CONGRADULATIONS
The story had a good ending...
All the speacies8472 running around


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PostMon Oct 06, 2003 3:45 pm    

thanks here is the full story

Part 1
Lt Wildman(naomi):<checks console then rechecks scans> Sir we are recieveing a distress call from Deep Space 9
Capt Icheb:on screen
<the screen shows a destroyed starbase with a ship comming at them>
Iched: Identify that ship!
Female Ensign:<scanns> sir it is a Defiant class vessel
Iched: Hail them
Naomi: Yes Sir <pushes button on console>
Icheb: <walks to center or brige> This is Captin Icheb of the USS Mercedes we recieved a deistress call, what is going on?
Worf: This is Lt Commander Worf acting captin of the Avenger ,Deep Space 9 was destroyed by a mysterious spices, they used biological wepons, we never stood a chance.
Icheb:Naomi scan those weapon signatures
Naomi:Yes sir<scans>I cant make heads or tails of this sir
Icheb:Let me see those scans<looks over naomis sholder to see scans then winces> Defiant return to starfleet command now. Lt Wildman contact Admeral Janeway, and send her the signatures I think it is time that voyager is commisioned again.Set a coarse for Jupiter station, warp 9
Naomi:Yes sir<sets coarse>
<the USS Mercedes arrives at jupiter station along the the USS Protege>
Captin Kim(harry):This is the Protege, we have heard of your stiuation but Admeral Paris wishes to become friends with spices 8472
Icheb:we tried that long ago, looks like it never worked
Naomi:We are receveing a transmission from Admeral Janeway
Harry:so are we
transmission:all people who were on the USS Voyager return to starfleet command now!
Iched:Naomi se-
Namoi:one step ahead of you sir<sets coarse>
Harry:ok cya there Protege out
<many ships arrive at starfleet command, all voyager personnel are orded to beam onto the ship>
<harry,seven,tom,chakotay,icheb and kate are in voyagers ready room>
Captin Paris(tom):a rebellion? sounds nice
Captin Chakotay: Kate what you are saying is impossiple to do we would need more ships
Admeral Janewy(kate):well we must try even if its agants starfleet we will have more topedos ,made for this kind of warfare
Commander Hudson(seven, Anakah):well atleast the borg are mostly destroyed so they wont interfere
<Naomi enters ready room>
Naomi:Maim we have just scanned 2 ships comming in at high warp!
Kate:Drop the formalitys naomi all personnel battle stations
<The USS Enterprise-E and USS Titan( rikers ship) drop out of warp off voyager port bow>
Captin Picard(jean-luc):Admeral Janeway, we know your plan and we wish to help
Captin Riker:Yes we will assist you if you can give us those weapon speks
Kate:alright, Harry begin transmission Tom the helm Tuvok tatical Chakotay 2ic Seven arm the anit spices 8472 weapons, its hunting time!
Harry:Admeral i havent detected any spices 8472 signatures yet
Kate:Keep scanning harry, we will find them soon
<Enterprise-E hails all ships>
Jean-Luc:Deep space 8 is under attack, all forces change coarse
Tom:Im on it
Geordi:Coarse Set
Deana:we are all set will(riker)
Kate:Arm weapons, red alert
Tuvok: Weapons Armed
Worf: weapons ready
male lt:locked and loaded sir
<after about 5 min at high warp the ship arrive>
Will:Damn, to late
Kate:Wait go into the white hole
Jean-Luc:WHAT!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?
Kate:Just do it
<all 3 ships enter spices 8472's realm>
inside the realm they are attacked by 10 ships
Kate:Jean-Luc, will we have a problem
Will:ya, should we open fire?
Jean-Luc:we have already
Kate:open fire all ships
<all ships begin to fire upon spices 8472 ships>
<Tom leaves station and heads to deck 10>
Kate:Mr Chakotay take the helm, attack pattern alpha 1 ,it worked for the
<Chakotay takes the helm>
Borg. Mr. Tuvok try some transphasic torpedos on those ships!
Tuvok:yes maim!
<launches torpedos>
<scans ships status>
Will:Our weapons have damages 3 ships and destroyed 1
Jean-Luc:The Enterprise was built to fight the Borg, we can take on these guys.
Kate:Jean-Luc, the Borg are afraid of this spices
Jean-Luc:Damn
<scans voyager>
Will:Kate i am detecting a shuttle leaving your shuttle bay
Kate:Dont worry thats Mr. Paris, he took on a Hergoin hunting vessel once
<remaing spices 8472 ships run away>
Tom:maim the remaining ships are bugging out(definition:gettin the heck outta there),but how do we get out of their realm?
Kate:The same way we got in Tom
Tom:Yes maim im outta here
<he sets coarse to the tear in space>
<all ships follow>
Kate:What the hell, where are we?!?!?
<harry scans>
Harry:Maim we are in the Delta Quadrent
Jean-Luc:What?!?!!?
Will:How!?!?!
Kate:We are in the delta quadrent again,damn but how?
Harry:It wasnt the same way we got in maim, it was a different one
Will:That means starfleet has no defence, unless diplomacy works!
<steps to center of bridge>
Kate:All ships set a coarse for these cordantes...go to read alert and ready weapons
<tuvok his some buttons on his console>
Tuvok:maim we could make some cronoton torpedos while we are en route to the cordantes
Kate:Harry, Tuvok, Seven, B'lanna get on it
Harry:Yes maim
Seven:Yes Admeral
B'lanna:Ok everyone report to Engneering
Tuvok:On our way Captin
<Harry, Tuvok, Seven go to engneering>
Tuvok:With these cronoton torpedos we could do som serious damage to the borg....<Tuvok trails off>
B'lanna:Well I never would have thought we would be designing these torpedos...but I never thought I would be working with you miral...
Miral:Quit embarrasing me mom
Seven:<laughs>well with these new torpedos we could easliy get the borg to open a transwarp conduite for us, but janeway has another plan in mind...
Harry:Admeral Janeway is planning to get the borg to let us through or we destroy the borg, that simple
Tuvok:A logical and powerful plan
B'lanna:Well we have the design done now we need to build it
<a few hours later>
Seven:That was hard
Miral:Ya, who ever made quantum torpedos must have had alot of time on their hands
Tuvok:We don we will arrive at the cordnates in 3 hours
Seven:Get the computer to replacte as many of these torpedos as possiple,we designed it and put the specks into the computer.
B'lanna:computer how many of these torpedos can you replacte in 2 hours?
Computer:25 of the specified torpedo can be replated in 2 hours
B'lanna:Do it!
Computer:Affirmative
<all ships arrive at cordnates>
Kate:Alrite lets wait for the borg
Jean-Luc:I detect 12 incomming cubes and an unown class of ship!
Will:Its huge whatever it is....it is a Pyrmid shape
<they recieve a transmission>
Borg Queen:Captin Janeway,Commander Riker,Captin Picard its nice to see you again...like my new toy?
Jean-Luc:Well its the command center of all borg activity...
Queen:Yes Jean-Luc, you still hear our song.....you know all about the pyrmid
Kate:Well i be damned...its where you control after Admeral Janeway Destroyed the nexus you had no home...
Queen:Wrong that was a different queen...i will be more perfect then her...amd i start by destroying you!
Kate:All Crew red alert
Jean-Luc:Go to red alert all crew battle stations
Will:All crew battle stations
<3 ships fire everything they got at the pyrmid>
Queen:hahahaahah your pewney ships are no match for me-
Kate:Shut her up now Harry
Harry:With pleasure
Jean-Luc:She rotates the shield modulation on the pyrmid, there is no chance that our shields will penitrate them!
Will:Right unless we beam in but...
Kate:That would mean whoever goes in, wont come out....
Commander Munroe(alex):I will go captin
Kate:Alex I know your the best but if you die...
Alex:The borg would know alot about the federation i know
Lt Commander Munore(Telsia Murphy):Alex if you go in there i will go in to
Alex: ok captin were going in, Telsia we got to stop at sickbay to get the anti assilmation drug
Telsia:sure
Alex:well its been fun
Tom:Good luck munore
Harry:I will try and get you out as soon as your are finished kids
Alex:Thanks
<alex and telsia head to the turbo lift>
<alex and telsia enter sickbay>
The Doctor(Joe):ahh well i wish you good luck(give hyprospray to alex and telsia) it would be rather dull without you , mr paris, ,r kim and mr chakotay pulling pranks on everyone
Alex:thanks doc
Telsia:bye doctor
<alex and telsia head to transporter room 1 (arm in arm)>
<alex and telsia beam onto the pyrmid>
Alex:We gotta find the queen!
Telsia:Where is she
Alex:most likely twards the center of the ship, come on
<after about 30 min of walking and blasting borg....>
Alex:Is her
Queen:Mr. Munroe the collective remembers you very well
Telsia:Alex should i open fire?
Alex:Gogogo
<they shoot the queen but she keeps putting her drones infront of her to protect her>
Alex:To hell with this!
Telsia:Alex no-
<alex jumps through the borg and delivers a swif punch to the borg queens face then takes out his i mod>
Alex:Ristance is far from futal!
<and he destroys the queen>
alex:munroe to voyager, two to beam to sickbay
<telsia nad alex beam out>
Kate:All ships engage your transwarp drives, we can just transport as many as we want off every borg vessel
Jean-Luc:We have done that, all of our cargo bays are filled
Will:us to
Kate:Harry did you get every transwarp coil?
Harry:all but one, should i transport it to engneering?
Kate:do it
B'lanna:We got the coil maim, re rerouting it to the warp core
Kate:All vessels set a coarse for home

Part 2
in a few hours the ships arrive at starfleet command....
Kate:O my god....what happend?
Jean-Luc:it appears that spices 8472 destroyed earth...
Riker:no i detect life signs...their spices 8472......
Harry:No LIBBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kate:now is not the time, alright all ships land on earth, everyone arm themselves........
<Tom,Harry,Chakotay,Kate,Jean-Luc,Riker,Deanna,Beverely beam onto earth>
Tom:Its gone.....
Kate:What the hell happ-Agu<Kate was attacked by spices 8472>
Harry:NO CAPTAIN<Harry fires quantm torpedo launcher at the hostile>
Kate:Thanks Haryy<gets up and brushes herself off>
Jean-Luc:Lets find some survivors, see if they can tell us what happend
Riker:Alright my team we will head east, Kate your team head north and Jean-Luc head west.
Kate:You heard the man lets move out
Harry:We need to make more even teams....
Kate:Alright, girls come with me to the east
Chakotay:Alright Tom Harry lets head north
Jean-Luc;Alright Riker lets head west
<after about 10 mineuts of walking Will and Jean-Luc see a commet heading for earth>
Jean-Luc:what the- number 1 run!
<both of them barely avoid the explosion when the see the 'commet'>
Will:Data? Your alive?!?!?!
Jean-Luc:Data its you
Data:I require some power sir
Jean-Luc:Picard to enterprise, beam up mr.data
Geordi:With Pleasure
<data is transported>
After hours of searching they have discovered 1 thing, they were the only humans left in the sector...
Kate:We gotta get into their realm and rescue our people...
Harry:How, even if we filled up all the ships, 200 people would have to stay behind...
Tom:I'll stay, if i can get a hold of a spices 8472 ship we could get out-
B'lanna:No Tom, please don't
Harry:Tom's Right, Im with you Tom
Chakotay:As am I
B'lanna:But Tom, who will help me raise Miral?
Tom:I don't plan on dieing
Kate:Allright, The crews of all three ships will take over 4 spices 8472 hips, everyone else will escape in the Titan, Voyager and Enterprise.
Icheb:They will be assilmated, hehehe
Tom:YES Icheb, thats the way to think
Seven:You sense of humar is different
Jean-Luc:You must learn to laught at yourself seven, that is why Icheb has dealth with being borg easyer then you
Kate:Right, lets stop the chatter, we still must destroy all but 4 spices 8472 ships, then rescue the surviving humans
Harry:How do we get into their realm, we just entered through one of their own conduits?
Kate:We wait, they wont let us live
Jean-Luc:Well good luck kids, all crew battle stations
Tom:I detect spices 8472 ships approaching, there are 24 of them
Kate:all crew battle stations
Will:Red alert
Jena-Luc:OPEN FIRE
Kate:Hold your horses Jean-Luc,I we are detection humanoid signatures
Will:Allright, we need an away team...
Tom:I'll Go Paris to Munroe...
Alex:Munroe here whats up Tom?
Tom:Alex you gonna come to the party?
Alex:Would miss it for the world...
Data:I am fully functional, and i wish to go
Jean-Luc:Sounds like a party, im comming along to!
Kate:Tuvok, better go to make sure the boys behave
Tuvok:Yes Maim
Kate:Those ships will be here in 2 hours, get ready away team...
Tom:Kate may I request that Seven of Nine and Icheb come along to?
Kate:You realize that if Icheb dies, Naomi will hunt you down and kill you
Data:We shall gaurd him with our lives
Naomi:HEY I DONT like him
Tom:First stage denyal...let get ready kids
Later in the armoury...
Alex:You trying to play match maker tom?
Tom:Huh? What are you talking about Alex?
Alex:You know, Data and Seven?
Tom:AAAAA yes, a good plan eh?
Data: I have never met this Seven of Nine so how could i feel a-O MY GOD
who is she?!?!?!
Tom:That would be Seven of Nine Mr.Data
Icheb:We have a mission to focus on let get-
Naomi:Dont get hurt Icheb, Come back alive
Jean-Luc:Hehehe, your girl friend Icheb?
Icheb:No, we are just CLOSE FRIENDS
Tom:First Stage Denyal
Icheb:Shutup Tom, I didnt make fun of you for dateing Torres
Tom:Point made, lets go!
Our brave heros beam abord a spices 8472 ship
Data:Here they Come!
Tuvok:Get Ready
Tom: Wait, their flanking us
Jean-Luc: Harry, come on we must get the hostages
Tom:Right, we will distract the hostiles
Harry:Dont get killed Tom or B'lanna will rip my head off
Data:Tom watch Icheb, I do not wish to be killed by Ms. Wildman
Icheb:Allright, lets leave Naomi out of this
<Jean-Luc and Harry retreat from the engagement and find a beautiful> young woman being attacked by a spices 8472
Jean-Luc:Now its not nice to hit a lady
<Jean-Luc runs at the spices 8472 and beats the $h!t out of him>
Jean-Luc:What your name?
Dana:Dana Scully
Harry:OK, lets get you back to the Enterprize
Jean-Luc:We have captured the ship, lets get those *bee*
Kate:Allright, everyone set coarse of those spices 8472 ships!
<After all 4 ships arrive and a long and intecse combat one ship runs back into its realm...>
Will:FOLLOW IT!
Kate:Take us in
Tom:Lets rock and roll
<insernt Elvis song a 'little less conversasion' here>
<When they enter the realm only few ships remain...>
Kate:Allright, beam them out
Harry:Roger we have all of them captain.
Kate:Captain, i prefer that to admeral...Allrgiht beam us to their shis Mr. Kim
Tom:Allright, GET OUT NOW
Libby:NO HARRY I WONT LEAVE YOU
Harry:Sorry Libby, I love you
<Dana looks deep into Jean-Lucs eyes, he can see what she is thinkign and he shakes it off...>
Jean-Luc:See you soon Dana
Jean-Luc:We have captured the ship, lets get those *bee*
Kate:Allright, everyone set coarse of those spices 8472 ships!
<After all 4 ships arrive and a long and intecse combat one ship runs back into its realm...>
Will:FOLLOW IT!
Kate:Take us in
Tom:Lets rock and roll
<insernt Elvis song a 'little less conversasion' here>
<When they enter the realm only few ships remain...>
Kate:Allright, beam them out
Harry:Roger we have all of them captain.
Kate:Captain, i prefer that to admeral...Allrgiht beam us to their shis Mr. Kim
Tom:Allright, GET OUT NOW
Libby:NO HARRY I WONT LEAVE YOU
Harry:Sorry Libby, I love you
Kate:Allright, The Ships have gone home, take over the Spices 8472 ship you are on and get the hell out of here!
Harry:The ship we captured is being overun with spices 8472!
Naomi and Dana scream in unison: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Tom:Looks like we have some stoweayays abord
Icheb: NO NAOMI!!!!!!!
Chakotay: Sorry kiddo, let the single guys die first
<Chakotay putses both of them out of the way and begins to fight the spices 8472 hand to hand>
Jean-Luc: DANA
<Jean-Luc fires his rifle and destroys both of the attackers>
Jean-Luc:Dana you allright?
Dana:I am not that you are here Jean-Luc
<After saying that Jean-Luc kisses Dana>
Tom:Sorry to break up the party kids but we got hostiles inbound
Jean-Luc:Dana take this rifle
Dana:Sweet
Kate:Looks like you kids are the most threat, all the remaning spices 8472 have beamed to the ship your on
Icheb:Naomi, honney take this
Naomi:Sweet, what is it?
Icheb:Federation Assult Rifle, and may i say you look really se-
Harry:Thats enought Romeo, we got work to do
After hours of dogfighting spices 8472 are destroyed
Kate:Allright Everyone set a coarse for home
*************************************************************

THE END



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PostMon Jan 05, 2004 8:13 pm    

well, give me you opion, what did you think?


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PostMon Jan 05, 2004 9:58 pm    

looks like a film or episode script

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PostThu Jan 08, 2004 4:44 pm    

yes, that is the way i wanted to write it...i wanted to try something different...what do you think, maybe me and my friends may act it out someday...


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