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PostSat Dec 06, 2003 7:06 pm    The Prototype,The Fugitive,and Cardies.

This is After The last trek movie,and Starfleet has restarted the transwarp program,and has used Weapon Technolagly from the klingons,Romulans,and their own to create more advanced ships then ever before to counter attack the borg.evan though that day is far off,testig now.

Chapter one, the hiest.

"James,Why are you doing this? your wanted by starfleet by treason already!" Sydney was yelling at James,An Ex Starfleet,Now Ex-maQuis. "Don't tell me What to do anymore Syd. The only way We can do what the main goal of the Maquis was, is to Nick that ship in the hanger! It's only two decks up! You can take your ship and go, But I'm gonna take that shuttle! I Scanned it, IT has Better weapons then a keldor! IF you won't come with me then all the better! LEss people means less death!" *packs SOme Ammo and Tricordes in his pack, And Loads a stolen Phase Rifle* Look, Only two guards are ther when ther is a shift change, And on top of that, It has a Matter Scoop! As long as i keep alitte anti-matter abaord, I can stay in space without supplys for months! It's better than most runabouts, Sleeping Ares In the back, a replicater! Come with me plaese!" James asks one, last time. " I just Can't, I have a nice home on Betazed now, I don't want to leave, Do what you want I'm leaving!" Sydney tells him as she Crawls out of the Vent shaft back into her guest qurters. And then Shuts the Grate and Lays face down on her bed and crys. And As this happens, James Begins the Long Crawl up,and a single Tear Falls from the vent. And almost a day later,After Sydney Left. JAmes Wakes up and Plans his Hiest of the shuttle. HE pulls out a tricorderand scans the area. "This can't be right,or my lick holds out still.anyways Better be carfull." Loads his rifle and Darts across the hanger to the shuttle,The hanger master Noticed him. "Hey you What are you doing?! Get out from behind that ship! Or I'll...." JAmes Fires a Blast and Knocks out the hanger comms. useshis tricorder and opens the shuttle door.He hops in to the pilot set, POwers it up,and the weapons. Then of course,the Station security guards File into the HAnger AIming At the Shuttle. "Surrender now! Get out of the Shuttle craft and surrender!" James smiled SMugly and and activated the external Comm system. " I know your tryting to gain control of the ship,but You can't, I locked the computer out with over 400 encriptions and maintaining them with the very computer your trying to gain contf. Anyways, LEt me out or I'll blast my way out don't temp me!" He then waited for then to decide. "Of course the Federation doesn't want to lose this shuttle!" James thought to himself, "Of course when It's me doing it,Now to Blast my way,dodn't want to do this but hey,all i got." he shrugs,and Bows away the hanger door,And a un-suspected Decompresion Sucked All the guards,And the shuttle into space. "Damn it, They didn't evan use the forcefeild i guess they didn't think i would blast my way through the door,Well no time to Grieve." James Actievated the warp drive, He presses a T-W on accident,and didn't bother to set much of a course,just needed to get away. And then,The computer says something that Stops james cold. "Transwarp drive activated" "WHAT?!?! Transwarp? this must be a experimantel ship. Needs a name however, I'll worry about it later. Computer: HOw long will it be untill we reach the destination?" Computer: " 1 hour " "Hmm, Alright, Computer,What is the name of this ship? 'NX-5476' hmm, Computer,Log Ship Designation Sydney.
'Logged'." And then James begins to look around for abit. Finds the bed and goes to sleep, The computer Wakes him when they drop out of warp. Computer Bring up a hologramatic Astromectic Display of our current location. JAmes looks it over. Computer,I said our current location, NOt Caradasion space!" The Computer Codley Replys "This is our current location" "And James Sits and Try to Figure what to do next. "Syd is gonna Kill me when she hears this"

Thx to Syd herself She let me use her name and other in the future I hope! But anyways Plaese voice your opinons,and hopefully,this will work out better then my last one Qap'la!


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PostSun Dec 07, 2003 11:07 pm    

Hey,Hoped ya like it! I'll post more if ya do! I know i do!

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PostMon Dec 08, 2003 9:44 am    

So post more.

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PostMon Dec 08, 2003 6:40 pm    

all right!

Chapter
It had been a few weeks sense he ended up in cardassion space.Sense the shuttle was in testing only, Supplys wern't full stock,He'd been Traveling to a nearby planet,were he knew a few old Maquis cells were,and hopefully some food a fuel.

Computer,Can you re configer the hologramtic screen to Project a hologram?? :Affirmative: Do you Have a File for Sydney leth in the bajoran database? :Affirmative: when was the ;ast time she updated her personalty file? : 3 days ago : DAmn Syd, You know me well, or i just got lucky. Project hologram." The computertakes a fewsecond Compileing #d images and personalaty files. The Image is Displayed,and of course "Sydney" Immeadly began Yelling at James " JAmes IF you get this message, You must have got lonely, but ,YOu know i don't like to curse,but Damn you! you actully left without me!! Never thought you'd EVER do that! But,Now thats out of the way," Syd Runs OVer to james and Hugs him"I know the REal me,will still miss you, BUt i Feel better already,So Were are we?" SOmewhat Flabbergasted by the hug, he somehow manages to say it without falter or emotion, " Deep Cardassion space,I need to find some FUels for the REplicater,And we need some more Real Achoholic drink,been a tough few weeks all alone, I finally Re-wrote the command circts in the computer so as Only ME and you Can acess the computer commands. But now, Sense i'm not All alone, I can sleep and you can watch out for Cardassion Patrols, Night! *James Walks over to the larger of the 2 beds and Lays down tiredly,hopeing to get some recoopative sleep* "James sydney says quitly, SLeep well.

Short one i know, But hey, Not much for this one! later!!


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PostFri Dec 12, 2003 8:14 pm    

been awhile,but I'm bacl by poular demand! I could use a new title for the Fanfic,but, i could use some help too!.`

JAmes and the Hologram james had come to accept as his old freind,called Sydney,or Syd for short.

"James!" Sydney yelled "James wake up Before i shove your Dak'tagh in your chest!" HE Threatend lightly. however,due to his chaotic lifestyle, Jameswoke up quite quikly and sliced at the hologram with his Dagger under his pillow,then he relizsed what he had done before he relised were he was. "oh god no!" James exclaimed, Then of course,Syd slapped him across the face. "ow! Wait oh,Damn i'm beginning to hate this thing,not enough room. But It is my fualt isn't it?" JAmes ASked Syd in Bland conversation. Syd ignored him " WEre in low Obit of the planet."
"Take us in and land in a desserted area."


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PostSat Dec 13, 2003 2:14 pm    

Continue,

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PostSat Dec 13, 2003 3:28 pm    

Glad you ulike,to bad your the only one
I'll post mor as soon as i get more time! I also have a website to keep up and running,so ya know,could be,about a day


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PostSun Dec 14, 2003 9:07 am    

^
I'm sure I'm not the only one... Several members read stories without posting a comment.


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PostSun Dec 14, 2003 4:57 pm    

AH! I know of one, BUt man, plaese voice your comments if you read this story!! PLaese? lol

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PostSun Dec 14, 2003 6:23 pm    

I like it (I read every story in Fan Fiction... but don't reply to all of them... I should really though )

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PostTue Dec 16, 2003 6:16 am    

james, I really like your story you should be a writer one day

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PostTue Dec 16, 2003 6:19 am    

I hope so!

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PostTue Dec 16, 2003 4:20 pm    

They had Been on the Hardly inhabbited PLanet for rougly 3 weeks now, When JAmes Landed, HE was almost KIlled for not Piloting the Runabout into the caves so the cardassions wouldn't find him,He evan had to shut syd down.
" The caves ar lined with Sensor BLocking mineral? how?" JAmes asked,He was hopeing to Find a way to remove his shuttle FRom the Caves,The paint was Cracking due to moistuer, and constant Tapping from the native life. Bajorinns got staranded here sense the Ocupation. And Have sense breeded into the native life,they were Almost warp Capeabnle when the cardassions cam and "claimed" the world. It Was more of a small moon. You Could Easly Walk acros the Surface in a week.( i'm sick, to tired to post more for now) sorry it's so short!


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PostSun Dec 21, 2003 12:56 am    

After anohter week had passsed and they had finally gotten enough supplys to leave, And thats when the cardies,Came.

"hurry! There coming closer!!* syd was yelling at the top of her lungs James Grumply Replyed"I'm coming! I gatta get this food on board!! I don't wanna Starve to death!" A cardassion marksman shot james in the leg, Cuaseing James to Fall to the Ground and an cry out in pain. "Son of a bitch!" James then Pulls a Phaser rifle Set it to kill,and the Caradassions's head off. "Rember that and tell your Freinds about me!" James yelled Cockly. "Syd!"James gasped, Fix my leg quikly! Syd Grabbed a med kit and Ran to help james. It's a clean wound, YOu'll be okay, I'll Have to Regenerate the muscle however" James Winced sensed she didn't use any pain reducers. James Shot a few moreshot to keep the cardassions Back,And just AS James could Stand A cardassion team beamed in and Statred shooting evryone, Syd picked up the Rifle and began to shoot them She was the only one fight ing back sense James had Dived into th ship to Grab his Mekleth he made while he was on the planet. James then ran out and Startled a number cardassions who thought they had Messed with a klingon, began running untill they Relised what was going on. The Turned to Kill or knock jame out, but Jame Skillfull weilded his mek'leth, Sliceing At their necks,and hands,the only un armored part if thier body, He killed about five when they Hit him in the side,then his klignon Half took over and He went into a firey rage. Sliceing the commander and then Lopping his head off as it rolled off the cliff. "Anybody else want some?!" he yelled as he walked towards the Remaing Cardassins. THey Dropped their weapons and Ran as fast as they could in the opiste direction. James picked up the weapons, Boarded his ship, Closed the hatch,and left,with all but 3 crates of food. "Well Syd, how fun was that?" he asked sarcasticly.

Hope you like, my writers block eneded and i finally got to post this chapter! yay!


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PostSun Dec 21, 2003 6:31 am    

Good,

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PostMon Dec 22, 2003 10:30 am    

lol, I'll add more as soon as i decide what happns next!

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