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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu Nov 27, 2003 1:06 pm |
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Please do!
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janewaykat Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 May 2002 Posts: 5780 Location: Basketball court and college
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Thu Nov 27, 2003 2:37 pm |
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Yep, me too!!
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Thu Nov 27, 2003 7:58 pm |
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Just read the whole thing. It's great. Please continue.
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tom_88_2 Commodore
Joined: 03 Mar 2003 Posts: 1561 Location: United States
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Fri Nov 28, 2003 12:53 am |
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this is very good please continue
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Captian_Janeway Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002 Posts: 283 Location: Terra
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Fri Nov 28, 2003 7:25 pm |
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Okay!!! I will write! Hmmm.....What will happen next?
------Chapter Six: Just Make Him Stop-----------
I threw myself on my bed, just fuming. Rage was a blissful feeling, it felt like liquid fire flowing through my veins, so this is what it means to be angry. Wow, it was a very powerful feeling. Heart pounding, adreniline pumping, thoughts racing, and everything making sense. Hewlett was at fault, Miral was dishonored, and I was violated.
"WHY?!" I screamed, "WHAT DID I DO WRONG?!"
"You didn't do anything, Taya." A soothing voice said, and I realized Miral was on the other side of my door.
The carpet was soft under my feet as I walked toward the door, and I sat with my back against the door. I heard Miral do the same.
"You okay, Miral?" I asked.
"Yeah. My mom's really pissed off at me, but I don't care."
"Liar." I said, giving a futile attempt at a chuckle.
Miral nodded, "You know me too well. I hate it when my mom and I are mad. My poor father."
"He's a lucky man, though."
"Why?" Miral asked, shooting a look down the stairs. There she saw our mothers in quiet conversation.
"He's got two intelligent women who love him."
More on the way.
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janewaykat Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 May 2002 Posts: 5780 Location: Basketball court and college
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Fri Nov 28, 2003 9:06 pm |
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Great job! can't wait for more
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tom_88_2 Commodore
Joined: 03 Mar 2003 Posts: 1561 Location: United States
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Sat Nov 29, 2003 12:04 am |
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yes very good
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Sat Nov 29, 2003 9:13 am |
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I agree, that was good. Just a little hard to remember where we left off. Ah, I guess I'll just have to read the story from start again.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:40 am |
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Very good. Next part please.
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Captian_Janeway Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002 Posts: 283 Location: Terra
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Thu Dec 18, 2003 3:19 pm |
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I'm ba-ack!!! Now, don't ask why I've been gone. It's a long devastating story beginning at my childhood...... (let's just get to the story.)
"I'm not very intelligent." Miral argued, "don't try to tell me to otherwise."
A long-awaited smile formed on my face, "Okay, then. No more arguing."
I stood up and opened the door, Miral fell flat on her back. Laughter filled the air between us. We laughed untill our sides hurt. It felt good to be happy for a moment.
"So, Taya," Miral began, "about going to Risa. You're going to need some company, and who better than someone who knows what's going on?"
I smirked, "My mom can't be away from work that long, but your welecome to come in her stead."
"Okay. When do I pack my bags?"
"Don't bring a thing," I ordered, "that's what replicators are for."
Miral and Taya, together on Risa. What sort of trouble awaits them there?
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu Dec 18, 2003 3:28 pm |
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You must write more!!!!
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Thu Dec 18, 2003 3:53 pm |
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Ok,need more.
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Captian_Janeway Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002 Posts: 283 Location: Terra
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Thu Jan 01, 2004 10:40 pm |
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"You're going to spend whatever you can while you're away?" Miral asked, giving a slight chuckle.
"Yep," I replied, "and make sure when this is over the Hewlett's are poorer than dirt. Money isn't everything, but at least I can spend it shamelessly on myself. And you of course. Why not use this as an excuse to go on a shopping spree? I love to shop, you love to shop, and the Hewletts'll pay for everything."
Miral stood and faced the door, "Come on out, Tae. No use hiding from the world."
I laughed deeply, "Yeah, yeah. 'Cause I got so much to be proud of."
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tom_88_2 Commodore
Joined: 03 Mar 2003 Posts: 1561 Location: United States
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Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:00 pm |
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very good
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Fri Jan 02, 2004 3:09 pm |
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Good job.
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Captian_Janeway Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002 Posts: 283 Location: Terra
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Thu Jun 04, 2009 8:59 pm |
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After going on a seven year hiatus I have returned, and find it very strange that after so many years I am still writing fan fictions. I don't plan on finishing this one, it's dead, but I will start several new ones.
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minituvok Ensign, Junior Grade
Joined: 12 Jul 2009 Posts: 41 Location: My room, singing "You Are My Sunshine" with my Doctor.
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 7:16 am |
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Wait, what? NOO!! I must know how it ends!
-------signature-------
I say "Live Long and Prosper".
Then you say "Peace and Long Life".
It's the way of life.
Don't deny it.
LOVE IT.
OR DIE.
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buffyscrubs Ensign
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Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:03 am |
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