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PostTue May 20, 2003 6:53 pm    

ok,a shuttle combat
sounds simple....i will win
no you wont mr paris
ok lets start
e can desing our own fighters
ok


they begin and so does another false alarm....


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PostMon Jun 02, 2003 5:23 pm    

they both run to b'lannas quartes,top speed but she is gons,no where on the ship.......

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PostWed Jun 25, 2003 8:10 am    

"paris to captin, b'lanna has dissapperad" tom says ergently
"we dectected a transporter signature leutenant"janeway says
"get up there mr paris"the doc says
"right away" and tom is off running


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PostSat Jul 26, 2003 2:18 pm    

'the hergoin???' tom asks???!!?!!?!?!?!
'yes im afraid so tom' harry says
'well we gotta rescue her'tom yells
'no can do tom, we will wait' says janeway
'ok'tom says but he is thinking to hell with that
tom goes to the shuttle bay and takes the delta flyer out for a spin and plots an intercept coarse, behind the hergoin ship
'janeway to paris'
'im a little busy now captin'
'tom get back on voyager'
'no, i will not leave b'lanna'
on the bridge
'harry tractor him'
'no captin hes right we are not gonna leave b'lanna'
'captin i believe you should go to your quarters 'and tuvok whipps out his phaser
'mutany....this has happend 3 times on this ship! what kind of a crew are you!?!?'janeway asks
'were not a crew, we are a family' chakotay answers
'mr munroe set a coarse ,follow the flyer all crew battle stations' janeway orders


.....


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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 6:42 pm    

please continue now. It's really good.

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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 1:57 pm    

'coarse set maim' munroe answers
'mr tuvko status' janeway inquires
'shields are at 100%,torpedo bays are ready,40 photon torpedos, phasers armed, trivolcot device functional.'tuvok answers
'maim tom has engages a hergoin warship'harry says
'his status?'chakotay asks?
'he is out manivoring them and he has demolished their shields, jeeze the things we do for women' harry answers
'damn right harry, seven get to astrometrics to scan for other herogin vessels' chakotay orders
'yes commander'seven answers
'as well seven see if you can find their shield frenqincy, it may prove to be a tatical advantage'tuvok request
'yes commander' seven answers
'maim tom has destroyed their weapons and engines, their a sitting duck!'harry states
'well done mr paris' janeway says
'seven to the captin'
'janeway here whats the problem seven?'janeway asks
' there are 4 herogin hunting vessels inbound, all random shield frenquiceys'seven answers
'all crew this is the captin, arm yourselves.mr munroe better get the hazard team ready'
'yes maim' munroe says then takes off running
'mr chakotay take the helm, attack pattern alpha 69' janeway orders
'yes maim'chakotay answers


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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 1:59 pm    

....
to be continued tomorrow......

sorry guys but i have a writers block


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PostWed Jul 30, 2003 8:06 am    

in case you are wondering attacp patter nalpha 69 is the most dangerons one and is usually a last resort what you do is you face your target and at high impulse fire all phasers and a fair ammount of torpedos(2) at the target then get as far away from it as possiple,hit and run...

'the herogin hunting vessel has been disabled'tuvok states
'this one is a tough one,captin i have detected b'lannas dna signature on that ship' harry says
'get her off it then'janeway replys
'done maim she is in sickbay'harry answers
'the remaining vessels are still in presuit'chakotay says
'reporting for duty maim' tom answers as he enters the bridge
'good tom we need you at the helm'janeway answers
'yes maim'

...

what do you think should happen to b'lanna?

...


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PostSat Aug 02, 2003 1:54 pm    

'those fools!'b'lanna screams in sickbay
'ms.torres there is no need to worry'the doctor says calmly
'no worry those <bleep>s took my baby' b'lanna says and begins to cry
tom enters sickbay
'what happend?'tom asks, he sees his wife crying and goes over to comfort her
'the herogin took b'lannas baby tom'the doctor says sadly
'what?!?!?!?!?'tom says in shock
at this point b'lanna has cried so much on toms sholder that half his uniform is wet
'well doc its been nice knowing you'tom finally says after some deep thought
'where are you going mr.paris?'the doc inquires
'to get my our baby back!'tom says heroicly and he marches back down to the delta flyer, he is gonna get his baby back and take a few herogin down in the process....


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PostSat Aug 09, 2003 11:11 am    

"tom get back here"
"no captin, im going to get b'lanna and my kid"
"tom that is scuside,we alredy scanned the vessel it is no on board"
"i know captin, its on one of the four ships on a intercept coarse"
"tom you wont get by 4 ships"
"i can try"


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PostSat Aug 09, 2003 12:27 pm    

Continue now please. It's really good.

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PostSat Aug 09, 2003 12:57 pm    

Harry:Tom has engaged 3 of the 4 ships! the other one is heading for voyager
Janeway:Power Weapons
Tuvok:yes maim
Janeway:Chakotay take the helm, attack pattern theta 7
Chakotay:yes maim
Hergoin Vessel:You will not get this child back, it is ours now
Janeway:Why do you want a klingon child
Herogin:so we can put her DNA in ours...a klingon is a warrior and would make our hunters better
Janeway:Well we are gonna get her back
Harry:They have opend fire captin
Janeway:Return fire, how is tom doing
Harry:he has destroyed all three vessels
Tom:Paris to Voyager i have the child but she is barely alive
Janeway:Harry beam that child to sickbay!
Harry:Already did maim


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PostSat Aug 09, 2003 10:53 pm    

please continue

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PostSun Aug 10, 2003 2:58 pm    

'mr paris' the doctor asks
'ya doc'tom answers
'take a look at this'the doctor request
(doctor hads tom padd)
'my baby was not born?'tom asks
'no, she was borg prematurely'the doctor replys
'so what do we do?'tom asks
'we simply put her back in b'lanna'the doctor says
'woah woah woah doc will that cause any pain to my child and b'lanna?'tom asks
'yes, infact it may kill the child'the doctor answers
'then its not gonna happen'tom snaps back
'well what do you propose we do mr. paris?'the doctor imquires
'we transport the baby back into b'lanna!'tom answers


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PostSun Aug 10, 2003 9:13 pm    

transport why do u want to keep transporting that baby

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PostMon Aug 11, 2003 9:32 am    

cause im the writer

'transport the baby back into b'lanna?'the doctor asks'thats obsurd
'got a better idea'tom inquires
'as a matter of fact'the doctor trais off
'what?'tom asks
'we could simply keep the baby out, and put it in a incuabtion chamber'the doctor says
'hell no, thats like the borg, lets aks b'lanna'
'ask me what?'b'lanna asks?
'what do you wish to do with your child'the docotr replys
'huh?'b'lanna inquires
'listen swette, we can put the baby back inside you or put it in a incubation chamber'
'well i think we should..............


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PostMon Aug 11, 2003 10:49 am    

it is a good story but quit leaving us hanging
or else


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PostMon Aug 11, 2003 5:25 pm    

sorry
it will be continued but i need time to think


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PostTue Sep 16, 2003 7:58 pm    

this is the whole story unintrupted...sorry for the change of writeing format...

Chakotay is walking through the corridor as his last log entry plays>
Chakotay:First officers log stardate 696.9,it has been a producive week on voyager...b'lanna is still going crazy while tom is falling asleep at the conn.perhaps they need time off until their child is born.
<chakotay knocks on Tom and B'lanna 's quaters door>
Chakotay:Tom?B'lanna? wake up.your both late.
<tom answers from in the room>
Tom:Sorry commander we had another false alarm,im thinking of me and B'lanna sleeping in sickbay.
Chakotay:Tom i have decided to let you both have some time off.
Tom:Commander?i am okay.....but i am not sure about B'l-
B'lanna:Tom i am fine okay?i can go to wo-
<B'lanna begins to scream in pain>
Tom:Paris to sickbay medical emergency.
chakotay and tom begin to lift bl'anna and they run through the corridors of voyager....
computer activate the EMH tom says
please state the nature of- never mind mis torres please calm down
blanna grabs the doctors neck and says tell me this in not another false alarm
well can i atlest scan you? the doctor says
after 5 mineutes of profanity,screaming and the destroying of sick bay the doctor finally comes to a conclusion
congraultions its a.........
...is a flase alarm
you bleep hologram and after saying that torres try to rip of the doctors neck
no miss torres please calm down
HELL NO
MISS TORRES CALM DOWN OR I WILL HAVE TO SEDATE YOU
the doctor give her a sleeping drug
never a dull moment is sickbay he mutters
hey doc can we sleep in her tom questions
whats it matter we have done this for the last week
tom you and blanna are orderd to take time off
yes sir tom mutters....perhaps the crew will get some sleep i think they can her us on deck 15 toms fuatla attempts at humor do not ease the
situation.....
chakotay janeway says, this baby problem is a real problem...
i agree captin on deck 2 i can hear b'lanna threating to kill the doctor at 200 hours and tom and the doc telling her to calm down....
perhaps we should transport the baby out of her
no chakotay says
wel what should we d- the captin says
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA DONT YOU BEEP TOUCH ME
B'lanna honey please calm down
My MATERIX SHE WILL CALM DOWN I WILL SEDATE MS.TORRES!!!!
GET YOUR HOLOGRAOHIC HANDS OFF ME
ahh 200 hours,right on scedual chakotay mutters....
PARIS PARIS chakotay vellowed
...wa...o....sorry sir tom answerd drearly
paris you are orderd to rest
.....no sir i am fine......
tom plase go get some sleep b'lannas next false alarm is not due till 200 hrs
yes sir
(it is 1 week after, paris was returned to duty)
AAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCKKKKKKK
chakoty?
yes tom
tell me that was not b'lanna
im sorry it was
damnit.....
honey are you alrgiht
that bleep of a klingon would no shut the bleep up so i sedated her
ok doc wats the problem
b'lanna
she is not a problem!
wanna settle this on the holodeck mr.paris?
your on!
ok,a shuttle combat
sounds simple....i will win
no you wont mr paris
ok lets start
we can desing our own fighters
ok
"paris to captin, b'lanna has dissapperad" tom says ergently
"we dectected a transporter signature leutenant"janeway says
"get up there mr paris"the doc says
"right away" and tom is off running
'the hergoin???' tom asks???!!?!!?!?!?!
'yes im afraid so tom' harry says
'well we gotta rescue her'tom yells
'no can do tom, we will wait' says janeway
'ok'tom says but he is thinking to hell with that
tom goes to the shuttle bay and takes the delta flyer out for a spin and plots an intercept coarse, behind the hergoin ship
'janeway to paris'
'im a little busy now captin'
'tom get back on voyager'
'no, i will not leave b'lanna'
on the bridge
'harry tractor him'
'no captin hes right we are not gonna leave b'lanna'
'captin i believe you should go to your quarters 'and tuvok whipps out his phaser
'mutany....this has happend 3 times on this ship! what kind of a crew are you!?!?'janeway asks
'were not a crew, we are a family' chakotay answers
'mr munroe set a coarse ,follow the flyer all crew battle stations' janeway orders
'coarse set maim' munroe answers
'mr tuvko status' janeway inquires
'shields are at 100%,torpedo bays are ready,40 photon torpedos, phasers armed, trivolcot device functional.'tuvok answers
'maim tom has engages a hergoin warship'harry says
'his status?'chakotay asks?
'he is out manivoring them and he has demolished their shields, jeeze the things we do for women' harry answers
'damn right harry, seven get to astrometrics to scan for other herogin vessels' chakotay orders
'yes commander'seven answers
'as well seven see if you can find their shield frenqincy, it may prove to be a tatical advantage'tuvok request
'yes commander' seven answers
'maim tom has destroyed their weapons and engines, their a sitting duck!'harry states
'well done mr paris' janeway says
'seven to the captin'
'janeway here whats the problem seven?'janeway asks
' there are 4 herogin hunting vessels inbound, all random shield frenquiceys'seven answers
'all crew this is the captin, arm yourselves.mr munroe better get the hazard team ready'
'yes maim' munroe says then takes off running
'mr chakotay take the helm, attack pattern alpha 69' janeway orders
'yes maim'chakotay answers
in case you are wondering attacp patter nalpha 69 is the most dangerons one and is usually a last resort what you do is you face your target and at high impulse fire all phasers and a fair ammount of torpedos(2) at the target then get as far away from it as possiple,hit and run...
'the herogin hunting vessel has been disabled'tuvok states
'this one is a tough one,captin i have detected b'lannas dna signature on that ship' harry says
'get her off it then'janeway replys
'done maim she is in sickbay'harry answers
'the remaining vessels are still in presuit'chakotay says
'reporting for duty maim' tom answers as he enters the bridge
'good tom we need you at the helm'janeway answers
'yes maim'
'those fools!'b'lanna screams in sickbay
'ms.torres there is no need to worry'the doctor says calmly
'no worry those <bleep>s took my baby' b'lanna says and begins to cry
tom enters sickbay
'what happend?'tom asks, he sees his wife crying and goes over to comfort her
'the herogin took b'lannas baby tom'the doctor says sadly
'what?!?!?!?!?'tom says in shock
at this point b'lanna has cried so much on toms sholder that half his uniform is wet
'well doc its been nice knowing you'tom finally says after some deep thought
'where are you going mr.paris?'the doc inquires
'to get my our baby back!'tom says heroicly and he marches back down to the delta flyer, he is gonna get his baby back and take a few herogin down in the process....
"tom get back here"
"no captin, im going to get my kid my kid"
"tom that is scuside,we alredy scanned the vessel it is no on board"
"i know captin, its on one of the four ships on a intercept coarse"
"tom you wont get by 4 ships"
"i can try"
Harry:Tom has engaged 3 of the 4 ships! the other one is heading for voyager
Janeway:Power Weapons
Tuvok:yes maim
Janeway:Chakotay take the helm, attack pattern theta 7
Chakotay:yes maim
Hergoin Vessel:You will not get this child back, it is ours now
Janeway:Why do you want a klingon child
Herogin:so we can put her DNA in ours...a klingon is a warrior and would make our hunters better
Janeway:Well we are gonna get her back
Harry:They have opend fire captin
Janeway:Return fire, how is tom doing
Harry:he has destroyed all three vessels
Tom:Paris to Voyager i have the child but she is barely alive
Janeway:Harry beam that child to sickbay!
Harry:Already did maim
'mr paris' the doctor asks
'ya doc'tom answers
'take a look at this'the doctor request
(doctor hads tom padd)
'my baby was not born?'tom asks
'no, she was removed forcefully born prematurely, a new meathod of tortchure for thr herogins'the doctor replys
'so what do we do?'tom asks
'we simply put her back in b'lanna'the doctor says
'woah woah woah doc will that cause any pain to my child and b'lanna?'tom asks
'yes, infact it may kill the child'the doctor answers
'then its not gonna happen'tom snaps back
'well what do you propose we do mr. paris?'the doctor imquires
'we transport the baby back into b'lanna!'tom answers
'transport the baby back into b'lanna?'the doctor asks'thats obsurd
'got a better idea'tom inquires
'as a matter of fact'the doctor trais off
'what?'tom asks
'we could simply keep the baby out, and put it in a incuabtion chamber'the doctor says
'hell no, thats like the borg, lets aks b'lanna'
'ask me what?'b'lanna asks?
'what do you wish to do with your child'the docotr replys
'huh?'b'lanna inquires
'listen swette, we can put the baby back inside you or put it in a incubation chamber'
seven enters at that moment
'well i think we should..............
......transport the baby back"she finally says
"thats is impossiple"the doctor replys
"impossiple is a word humans use far to often"sevven says
"well miss.borg how do we do this?"tom asks
"we get the proper cordantes-"seven begins
"im not a planet seven"torres replys
"-but it will work"seven answers
"ok lets get started,docor to transporter room 1"
"Krall here, what can i do doc?"
"prepare for a transport"
"yes sir"
"tom take the baby to transporter room 1"the doctor order
"yes sir"and tom grabs his child and runs at top speed to transporter room 1
"well good luck doc"tom answers as he puts the little child on the transporter"see you soon"he says to the child
the child disappears
"doctor to mr paris, it worked"
"alrite doc, lets get back to work" and tom heads for the bridge.....

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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 2:13 pm    

well thats the story begeing to end i corrected most of the spelling errors
you guys tell me what you think....enjoy



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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 6:30 pm    

cool can u rite when they have the baby?

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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 6:36 pm    

that would be a novalisitation of endgame(which i have taped so it could be quite good) but i will do that later, in another topic


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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 6:59 pm    

your a good writer!

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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 7:20 pm    

really?
well then read my elite force story before making that judement



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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 7:33 pm    

when i get some more time i will

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