"I Think I'll Keep You"(PLEASE ADD ON)

Captain Leah Manzer · **Fri Sep 05, 2003 10:14 pm**

okey.. have you loaded anymore?

Voy_Girl · **Sat Sep 06, 2003 2:22 pm**

PicardsTrueLove · **Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:20 am**

Voy_Girl · **Tue Sep 09, 2003 2:46 pm**

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Good plot! It's really a shame you can't write it yourself. If somebody else does it, it'll probably turn out totally different, though that is not always a bad thing.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Tue Sep 09, 2003 7:21 pm**

I shall attempt... cuz I'm been urning for something to write during those long periods at school, and now i can attempt something... you see the only problem is that the story is so long now, you can like loze track for everything, and i really dont know what is happening right now.... well i do... but you know.. the details... here is what i think is going on.. without looking at my verson of the story....

Ok....Chakotay and Janeway have just told eachother that they love each other, Data is back, and just like hurt Janeway. Miral almost died from a voyager Toy. The Doctor is going slightly crazy (but we really havent brought that in much), erm. Picard just woke up from being kidnapped, and Crusher as "assumed" pregnant now, but we want her to figure it out. Data i think is running around the enterprise (tho i could be wrong) ... k thats about all i can remember for now. is there anything else?

PicardsTrueLove · **Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:07 pm**

That sounds about right...

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sat Sep 13, 2003 6:10 pm**

Is Janeway hurt right now? so maybe i could write a Sickbay seen including all of this...hm..

PicardsTrueLove · **Sun Sep 14, 2003 10:26 am**

Hmmm...a sickbay scene....lol. No one's dealt with Picard since his awakening....lol

Captain Leah Manzer · **Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:06 pm**

A light- It was shinning door to a new place which lit the dark path. Beverly walked along the long pathway. She felt the cold sand beneath her feet, grooving to her bare toes. Her clothes hung of her, soaking wet. Water dribbled down her back from her hair messily scattered on her rear. She continued to walk towards the light which was only metres away. She now had a purpose. Beverly did not know why but something was drawing her to that light. She now felt a direction. She smiled at the light. It was an escape.

�Is this the end?�

Beverly stepped into the passageway, knowing no other place to go.

�I guess it is�� and she was gone.

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I�m half naked, and I have two of the most indifferent people debriefing me. What are the chances.

Jean-luc Picard sat on a biobed wearing only a medical gown and a blanket, looking very uncomfortable. Facing him stood Commanders Tuvok and Worf, both looking quite awkward. Tuvok held a Padd in front of him and fiddled with it nervously. He contained the emotion, and finally demolished it.

�Captain,� he started, �could you describe what happened when you were on the shuttlecraft.�

Picard closed his eyes, not truly wanting to relive the moments.

�I don�t remember much,� said the Captain, �I was only awake for 10 minutes or so. But�it was dark. I could hardly see Beverly. I noticed that her clothes were ripped to shreds, and like myself, her pip�s were missing.�

�Did you see your captor?� Worf asked, after a glace at his Padd.

�No, I was not conscious for most of the time.� He avoided her reaction to him. It was the last he had seen of her-Screaming Data�s name in fear and ageist.

God, I hate that man. He will pay.

�Is there anything else?� Tuvok asked, again with a look of awkwardness on his face.

�No.�

Picard shifted his weight on the bed. Tuvok and Worf exchanged a look, that told what they were really feeling.

�Thank you Captain. That will be all for now.�

They left Picard on his bed, alone.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:08 pm**

sorry that was REALLY short and crappy, but since notone has posted in a while i might as well get something down. I will write more tonight, and hopefully post tomorrow... NO ONE POST>.. I have many ideas... well u can post... but...erm... yeh.. n/m my ideas are *beep*... lol I;m going to stop talking now, cuz i;m boring my self. BYE!

Saoirse_Granger · **Thu Sep 25, 2003 2:05 pm**

No, Leah, that was great! I'm really kinda worried about Bev though....maybe she's gone through the light to the other plane of existence to speak to "Westlee" (soz, I just hate the way she says it...it's Wezley!!!!!!!!!!)

I'm sorry, I really should write but I have no time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Captain Leah Manzer · **Thu Sep 25, 2003 10:05 pm**

but think about it... it is from her point of view... she could be waking up... up to interpritation

Voy_Girl · **Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:56 am**

Finally a new chapter...!

PicardsTrueLove · **Mon Sep 29, 2003 5:29 am**

That was great Leah. God guys I am so sorry: I've been so behind on this. Someone should take over on FF.net: you can just copy the story from the site and post it under your name I guess. It's going to be a long, stressful year for me and I simply don't have the time.

Voy_Girl · **Mon Sep 29, 2003 12:50 pm**

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I would, if FF.Net would let me register a new name some time!

Saoirse_Granger · **Mon Sep 29, 2003 1:29 pm**

I already have 2 accounts...but we could start a new one, with the penname The STV Crew and we could share the password, then any one of us could update. I do that with my friend, Quillmagic. And if anyone feels reeeally bored they can check out my fanfics at www.fanfiction.net/~ficchick

(PTL soz about whenever I was talking to you, i think it was yesterday, my mouse froze about 7 times and then the keyboard freezes and all you can do is ctl alt del and restart, then it freezes again....I think it's fixed now, anyway. And the masterclass wasn't too great, either...)

Voy_Girl · **Tue Sep 30, 2003 1:06 pm**

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Good idea, if the system works. Hasn't worked for me yet!

I really like your nick...

Saoirse_Granger · **Thu Oct 02, 2003 2:54 pm**

Gee, thanks....I was running low on inspiration and I needed a nickname to review someone's story that they had written and put the anonymour review lock thing on, so I made up an account, not knowing I would ever actually write anything of my own........

Voy_Girl · **Sat Oct 25, 2003 3:43 pm**

I've posted the first parts on another site now, just to let you know.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Thu Oct 30, 2003 9:44 pm**

wow its been ages since anyone has posted.. Anyone wanna add soon?? Common!

lol

Tech · **Tue Nov 04, 2003 6:11 am**

When I have the proper inspiration, I promise, one day, I will continue the story, but unfortunately, there is nothing on my mind to write about currently.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Fri Dec 05, 2003 8:01 pm**

ok guys this is REALLY bad. No one has posted in like a month... How about some one (loooks at some random person) writes another part

Tech · **Sun Dec 07, 2003 1:54 am**

Well, since everyone has practically stopped writing, here is my latest (crappy) contribution to the otherwise great story. Enjoy.

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"AHHHHHH!" A scream erupted from a crewman's quarters. She spotted the intruder bashing the door open and charing in, and, being quite sure that she could handle herself, she tried to restrain him before alerting Security. That turned out to be the biggest mistake she had ever made. Adat smashed his fist into her gut, knocking her out. He grabbed her by the collar of her uniform, his eyes taking in all the information. "Crewman, medical department," he registered in his head. Letting out a vicious snarl, he kicked the unconscious body on the floor. "This is useless!" he exclaimed, followed by a stream of obscenities. He crashed the whole room, searching for anything that could help him achieve his ends. "Hello... ? What've we here?" he muttered, as he picked up a phaser rifle. A feral grin plastered itself on his face.

Walking down the corridors with exaggerated calmness, he showed no mercy to the passers-by. It wasn't because he wanted to make his presence known... he enjoyed it. He busted open several doors to see what was in the rooms, shooting down anyone in them. All of the rooms were ransacked; nothing was left in its original position. Still, nothing in those rooms captured his interest. He quickly boarded a turbolift and headed for the Bridge.

Upon entering the bridge, Adat barged up to the Captain's console and punched in encryption codes that restricts everyone from accessing anything. He looked up again from the console, to see about a dozen phasers trained at him. He had to suppress himself from bursting out in laughter, limiting himself to an amused smirk. "We meet again, Admiral," he greeted Janeway, who, as soon as she could walk, had went straight back to the Bridge. "Quick recovery?" he asked, feigning curiousity.

"Adat," Janeway spat the name like it was venom. "You make one false move, and you'll be scrap metal," she warned.

"Oh, you can't possibly believe you have the upper hand..." he taunted. "I have the ship under my control now. And I can do anything I want with you... now, let's see..." he pretended to be thinking. "What should I do with you? Hmm... I know!" His lightning-fast fingers deactivated life-support before anyone could stop him. "Let's see how you do without air!" he grinned.

He let himself be pushed aside by a very furious Janeway, who tried desperately to reactivate it.

"What are you playing at, Adat?" she asked angrily. "Lives of about a hundred innocent people are at risk here! I demand you turn it back on!"

"Oh, I didn't do anything to harm the others. Only the Bridge has been depleted of oxygen. But unfortunately, no one can save you now as I have locked every entrance to the Bridge."

It wasn't long before everyone was left gasping for their breaths, and then, they collapsed, unconscious. "Fools... did the really think I'd kill them?" he thought, as he reactivated the life-support, and piling all the bodies in a corner without any consoles, he erected a forcefield large enough to hold them. "I think I'll keep you all here, where I can keep an eye on you," he said to the unconscious Bridge crew. He then went to the Captain's chair and sat down rigidly.

"Nothing can stop me now."