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Mark Mag Gloade
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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 2:07 pm    

Alex runs every scenario on dateing, even ones he made
"this is getting me nowhere" he thinks
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then he gets an idea, just go have dinner with her talk with her and just ack like friends(well this took a while he should have lived in the 21 century)ack like friends,isnt that how you date if you have another way, tell me and i may put it in the story here

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crud a writers block

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to be continued tomorrow


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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 2:36 pm    Reply

Hey Mark your storys sre kool man I don`t beleve how good they are

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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 2:39 pm    

cool story dude.


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PostTue Jul 29, 2003 2:40 pm    

thanks morgan, i spend hours writing and thinking these out and there are 2 other storys!!!

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PostWed Jul 30, 2003 7:34 am    

it took 5 min for alex to figure out just to act like friends with telsia on this date....that is a good plan.....but he doenst know what to expect....

its about 1800 hours telsia is in her quarters getting ready when she hears a knock on her door...

'who is it?'telsia asks
'its alex'alex answers
'hey alex come in'telsia replys
'...ok' alex staggers(geeze this guy has destroyed numerous borg and nearly been assilmated and he still cant talk to a girl!!!)
'where are we going alex?'telsia inquires
'well i was thinking of some where on the holodeck...mabie france?'he answers
now at this point telsia is about to go hyper, like a teenage girl(no offence to anyone)and how is alex gonna handle this?good question read on to find out....
'yayayaayayayyaya'telsia expresses
'telsia are you alright?'alex asks
'yeah sorry just lost it there'telsia replys
'good i guess were off to france,(man paris this plan of yours had better work)' alex says to himself

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sorry kids your gonna have to wait until tomorrow to find out whats gonna happen

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PostSat Aug 09, 2003 11:28 am    

<alex and telsia are on the holodeck>
Telsia:alex how did you convince tom to do this?
Alex:Good question ask him the next time you see him
<ok so this date is crashing and burning right now but hey, im the writer i can do whatever i want in the story>
<after a few mineutes of talking>
Telsia:This was fun alex
Alex:you enjoyed it?
Telsia:yup, here is your reward
<and she kisses alex eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwww>
Alex:thanks
Telsia:your welcome
<after escorting telsia to her quarters alex kisses her>
Alex:bye
Telsia:bye
<alex walks around the corrdor to see tom and harry>
Tom:munroe way to go
Harry:ya i took notes on your date
alex:you guys were watching incase something went wrong and you could call red alert of mess up the holodeck
harry:yup
tom:we were ready to do that at the begening munore
alex:well ill be doing this next week .... got any goodp laces for me to take her other then france?
tom:yup
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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 2:11 pm    

well that was my attempt at writeing a romance novel....i am never doing this again i will have the whole story from begeing to end posted soon( just to warn you) tell me wut u think


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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 2:59 pm    

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Never? Lol,


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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 5:59 pm    

ya
i dont think i cna write a good romance novel so im sticking with sci-fi,fiction,adventure and action



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PostFri Sep 19, 2003 6:27 pm    

this is the full story, spellings corrected enjoy

VVOOOOOORRRRRRRMMMM an explosion of Alex's grenades echos through the Harvester ship...Those harvester and reavers are strong and fast, but im faster.He runs and grabs his rifle sets it on sniper mode when it all dissappears.
'Alex?' Telsia questions 'why are you on the holodeck?'
He answers 'training'
'But it is over' she states
'what does the hazard team do now' he question
'rest, we are the best we have no need for training'telsia answers
'alright, I guess,' he says sadly ' I gotta give Harry some advice on dateing ex-borg, cya'
He left Telsia on the holodeck with her thoughts, she activates the program Alex was just useing, she thinks to herself 'what can we do now?'
Alex is on his way to the bridge,he has helm duty in 20 mineutes.He stops in the mess hall for some coffie...
'hello lt. munroe how can i help you?' neelix ask
'is there any coffie?' replys alex
'no but i got something better!'
'what?' alex questions
'herogin tea, it is very good'neelix answers with pride
'ok i will try anyting once' alex states and he drinks the gooey red sap that is poured in his cup
'tastes great! what is in it?'alex says
'well there is-' neelix replys but just as he says that he gets a call from the bridge...
'lt munroe please report to my redy room' capting jneway orders
'yes maim' alex answers.he wonders why he was called there...
alex enters the capting ready room...
'Lt. Munroe i got a mission for you'janeway states
'anything captin' alex answers
'we have herogins heading our way'she says
'best get the hazard team ready maim?' alex quesions
' yes perpare them and do not let your emotions controll you' she answers
'yes maim' ales says
he turn and exits the redy room
'hazard team report to hazard ops in 1hour' alex says before entering the turbo lift
'lt munroe to ensign murphy'
'telsia here wazzup alex?'
'i gotta talk to you,we have a problem meet in my quartes alex out'
alex russhes to his quartes and waits for telsia
'alex what is the matter?'telsia questions
'well i..i mean.. ah ...voyager in in trouble' he staggers
'okay that is why you wanna talk to the hazard team' she says
'yes yea i mean no uhh...'he staggers some more
'alex are you alright?'
'fine i just gotta go to sick bay'
'okay cya later'telsia says
alex rushes to sick bay and talks to the doctor and explains his problem...
'i stagger,turn red and do really stupid things infron of her...'
'who is her' the doctor questions
'telsia murphy'alex answers
'ahh miss murphy, she is an attractive young lady isnt she'the doctor says
'yes she is ....beautiful' ales trails off
'i know your problem'the doctor states
'what what'alex questions
'you have a crush on telsia murphy,thats obious'the doctor answers
'am i sopposed to feel this way?, i mean i can only think of her'
'is perfectly human lt. now i suggest you stop galking at her before you get shot by a herogin'the doctor states
'yes sir' alex answers and heads off to hazard ops...
'team i have called you hear to inform you of a lare herogin hunting vessel heading our way, telsia and i will infirtrate the vessel and try to sieze control all of you must be prepared to beam in at a seconds notince,we clear on that?'ales questions
'why is telsia going?'asks alexandria alex's little sister
'because she has the best scouting ability in the crew'alex answers'dismissed'

alex and telsia head to the equpiment room,they have a large 10 weapon arseal.the phaser,phaser rifel,i-mod,scavenger rifle,stasis weapon,grenade launcher,teteryon pulse disruptor,photin burst,arc welder and basooka.they both step on the transporter pad and as alex says energize.........
boooooooom a large explosion rocks the ship....
'all personnel be advised that intruders are abord'chakotay's voice booms
telsia heads out in the hall and gets shot,suddenly alex fell's the imadiate urge to kill someone.he grabs his pulse disruptor and kills every freaking herogin on the ship and him and tom carry telsia to sickbay...
"A little adrenalne rush huh mr.munroe?"
"a what?"
"when you do somethin crazy for strange reasons you get a huge burst of energy"tom answers"an old 20-21 century earth expression"
"and the stupid reason was me?" telsia asks
"hey alex"tom whispers"if i werent alredy married to b'lanna i would be dateing telsia"
"not funny"alex answers
telsia begings to think to herself.....hey boys are fighting over me....is this good or bad....what am i gonna do???? as she stares into space
"would you two gentlemen settle this on the holodeck?"the doc asks
"sure thing,munroe how bout a game of pool?"
"your on!"he says competitively.....
each of them grab a cue
"You break munroe"Demands tom
"alright, good luck"
Alex breaks the balls and sinks in 2 solids
"man b'lanna would kill me is she saw me looking at telsia"
"looking eh?"asks b'lanna
SLAP
"I HEARD THAT HUM"yells b'lanna as she storms outta the holodeck
"I had better try to fix our marrage, cya later munroe"
tom leaves munroe alone to his thoughs...
alex decides he needs to go talk to telsia...
"telsia,got a mineute?"alex asks
"sure alex whats the problem"telsia sounds like she could be counsler
"i...well i have to talk to you"alex states
"why?"telsia questions
"well um it seems i am getting distracted more often when"alex says shyly
"when ..."telsia pushes
"when your around so umm i gotta ask you"alex sounds nervous
"ask me what"telsia asks
alex thinks,should he ask or just cover it up?what will happen if i ask?what will happen if i dont?will i ever get this chance again?
"well........."alex ask
alex thinks to himself...i can either make up a stupid question, tell her what i think of her or ask her out on a 'date' ....this is extremely hard...
"well telsia i was wondering if you wanna have dinner friday night"alex says nrevously
"sure alex i would love to, is is 1800 good?"telsia asks
"ya ill se you there" alex says with a bit more confindence
"ok cya then"telsia says hyperly as alex leaves
"sure"alex says lofestructly
...great i gotta find tom and harry to get some 'dating' tips... alex thinks
he clicks his comm badge
"Paris and Kim are you busy?" alex asks
"nah on the holoeck alex come in her"tom says
"ya were playing pool" harry says
"ok be right there munroe out"alex states and begins his walk to the holodeck
alex enters the holodeck to see tom and harry playing pool
"hey munroe whats up?" harry asks
"not much but i got to ask you guys some questions?"munroe says nervously
"fire away"tom says
"dating"munroe says unenthusictly
"well well well your dating telsia now"harry asks
"yup, but i dont know the first thing about dating"alex says
"well what do you know about telsia?"harry asks after sinking the 9 ball
"everything about her"munroe states
"well that is a good start, where are you gonna take her to?" tom asks
"no idea" i just ased her out for dinner
"a perhaps a dinner under the eiffol tower in frace would be good in the early 1900's" tom says gleamily
"sounds good" ales says "can you get that ready for me tom?"he asks
"sure mabie replacting some wine and some french food would be good munroe"tom says
"ya sounds like a good idea"ales says
"so when is this date alex?"harry asks
"friday night 1800"munroe says
"hey alex was telsia relle happy and bouncing after you asked her?"tom asks
"yes why?"munre inquires
"your in for one hell of a date then munroe, the proper turm for that is hyper, you should have seen some of the girl our ancestors dated in the 21 century"tom says
"why?" munroe asks again?
"well it was pretty funny what guys did for girls back in the 21 century"harry says
"ok thanks well cya"munroe says
"no problem"tom says

munore heads to holodeck 2 to get some ideas on how to date....
Alex runs every scenario on dateing, even ones he made
"this is getting me nowhere" he thinks


then he gets an idea, just go have dinner with her talk with her and just act like friends
it took 5 min for alex to figure out just to act like friends with telsia on this date....that is a good plan.....but he doenst know what to expect....

its about 1800 hours telsia is in her quarters getting ready when she hears a knock on her door...

'who is it?'telsia asks
'its alex'alex answers
'hey alex come in'telsia replys
'...ok' alex staggers(geeze this guy has destroyed numerous borg and nearly been assilmated and he still cant talk to a girl!!!)
'where are we going alex?'telsia inquires
'well i was thinking of some where on the holodeck...mabie france?'he answers
now at this point telsia is about to go hyper, like a teenage girl(no offence to anyone)and how is alex gonna handle this?good question read on to find out....
'yayayaayayayyaya'telsia expresses
'telsia are you alright?'alex asks
'yeah sorry just lost it there'telsia replys
'good i guess were off to france,(man paris this plan of yours had better work)' alex says to himself
<alex and telsia are on the holodeck>
Telsia:alex how did you convince tom to do this?
Alex:Good question ask him the next time you see him
<after a few mineutes of talking>
Telsia:This was fun alex
Alex:you enjoyed it?
Telsia:yup, here is your reward
<and she kisses alex eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwww>
Alex:thanks
Telsia:your welcome
<after escorting telsia to her quarters alex kisses her>
Alex:bye
Telsia:bye
<alex walks around the corrdor to see tom and harry>
Tom:munroe way to go
Harry:ya i took notes on your date
alex:you guys were watching incase something went wrong and you could call red alert and end it
harry:yup
tom:we were ready to do that at the begening munore
alex:well ill be doing this next week .... got any goodp laces for me to take her other then france?
tom:yup



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PostSat Sep 20, 2003 1:37 pm    

That's pretty long...

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PostMon Sep 22, 2003 7:08 pm    

ya its from begeing to end
o well i will have 2 more stories stared by december....



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