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Creeper the sneaker The Creeper
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Mon May 26, 2003 3:18 pm Jeepers Creepers 2 (Made Up) By Creeper the sneaker |
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(At Jerry's house>>>>Chapter 1)
C'MON SAM HURRY UP OUR WE ARE GOING TO BE LATE!!!!! said Jerry putting his bag's into the car while looking over the car roof. COMEING!? Sam came over and put his stuff into the trunk. Sam went on the other side of the car opened the door and sat down. COME ON YOU TWO!!!! Lily and Sylvia came out of the house. OH HOLD YOUR HORSES!!! said Lily running with her stuff and Sylvia followed behind her with her stuff. Jerry got in the car. Make sure you close the trunk door? Yeah yeah. said Sylvia smirking. The two girls got into the car and bukuld up. Jerry startred the car and went onto the roud. Hey what did Mr. Marshull say the camp was called? said Sylvia looking at Jerry. He said it was called.....Camp......Nightmoon? said Jerry. How long does it take to get out there? said Lily. Sam turned to face her. I think it takes about 24hrs? Hey Jerry turn on the radio? said Sylvia. Jerry reached for the potton and turned it. Oh man i hate the Dixi Chicks man? said Sam makeing a face. To bad!? said Lily smiling at him. Jerry laughd.
(24hrs later )
Our we there yet? said Sam looking over at Jerry. Yeah we are it's just up that road there? YES!!! said Sylvia and Lily. Sam looked aside him and noticed a old meatplant. Sam sat up. Sam saw a man walking in the plant. Hey guy's? Jerry looked at him. Yeah what? I just saw a man go into that old plant over there? You know some homeless people? They always go in some old house or something? said Lily. Yeah but the guy's face was pale white!? Jerry looked at Sam. Okay where here guy's? The car went down the narrow road untill they reached the camp. They all got out and brought there bag's out of the trunk. Likly Mrs. Burns gave me the key to our cabin? said Sam. Thank-god? said Lily.
(At supper time)
Hey this is good salade? said Lily looking at Mr. Marshull smiling. I'm glade you's like it. said? The Coach comes up to the 5 people. Jerry scoches over a little so the Coach can sit. So how's your day so far? Oh good. said Jerry. Sam poked his head up. A we saw a old man near the old meat packing plant? Nobady answerd Sam they just eat quitly.
(In the cabin >>>Number
Man I'm i tired!? said Lily looking at her watch. It's only 10:00? said Jerry looking at Lily. Hey guy's why don't we sneek out and check out that old plant? said Sam. Jerry stared at him. You nuts!!!!! Our cabin will be locked pritty soon? said Sylvia rasing one eyebrow up. Sam got up and went near the door. Well I'm going!? Jery looked at the two. I guess we are going? The two sighed outloud.
(outside the cabin>>>>Chapter 2)
I can't belive we are doing this? said Lily. Sam laughed at her. OH SHUT-UP!!!!! SAM. Sam and the other's went down the dirt road untill they came out on the highway. They walked down the road untill they saw the meatplant. Okay guy's this is the place? Okay now I'm getting scared guy's. said Lily. Sylvia turned. You allwas get scared. Jerry opened the gate and walked on the fresh grass the other's followed. I love the smell of fresh grass? said Sam. They went intill they came up to the building. Jerry went near the door and reached the handle to open it. What luck? said Jerry as he pushed the door open. The door made a squeking nose. Sam went in first and then the other's. Creepy? said Sylvia looking at the old machines around her. They came up to a narrow hallway. I'll go look. said Lily actully being brave for once. She walked down the hall. the floor was wet and watery. She turned to her friends. C'mon you guy's? Sam looked at the two and started to walk toward Lily. Lily started to walk. Hey I see light? said Sam pointing ahead. The 4 ran toward the light and then came to a complet stop. The 4 hid behind the door. What is that? said Sam making a weird face. What the... said Jerry surprised at what they where looking at. There are bodies on the wall!? said Lily freaking out. Sam was about to go in the room when the saw that same man thar Sam saw earlyer. Ugle? said Sylvia looking at the man. The man took off his coat and put it on the table. What are those bumps comeing from his back? said Sylvia. Jerry looked harder then looked at Sylvia. I have no idea? Sam leaned forward. Hey he's taking off his shirt? said Sam pointing. Lily stared at the man's back. I wounder if he has muscules? Sam looked at her. You would like that Hay? Lily laughd. The man slowly took off his shirt. All 4 of them freaked out. Sam and the other's backed up to a dark spot where there was no light. He..He...He has wings? said Sylvia looking at Jerry. Okay can we go back to the camp now? said Lily tiptoeing away. The others followed. The man looked behind him and sneered. The man climed up the wall and followed them that way. Jerry turns his head to face Sam and the other's. I hope that winged man isn't following us? They walked untill they found the door. Lily pushed it open and all of them followed her. Nice fresh air!? said Sylvia walking still untill they reached the fence. The man looked out of a hole that was in the building. The man decided to come out of the hole ontop of the roof and watched them.
(Down the dirt road to camp)
I'm tired? said Lily yaning. What time is it? said Sam looking at Jerry. Jerry looked at his watch. It is Almost 12:00? Know wounder why!? said Lily yaning again. They came up to there cabin. Good it's not locked yet you guys. said Sam while Jerry was giving him the key. There you's are? said The Coach comeing up to them. Jerry liyed to him. We where going for a nice long walk? Sam piched in. Yeah!? Lily and Sylvia went into the cabin with the key. Well you's can now go to sleep? said the Coach as he started walking back to the cabin he was sleeping in. Good night? Goog night Coach!? said Sam going into the cabin. Jerry stepped in. Sam handed the Keys to him so he can lock it. The teachers have the other keys why didn't they lock them when we went? said Sylvia. I have no idea. said Jerry as he sat onto his bed. Lets get some shut eye? said Lily turning off her light. Alrighty then? said Jerry. Good night. said Sam
( Next Morning>>>>Chapter 3)
All of the students and teachers were haveing breakfast. I love Cornflaks!? said Jerry smiling. Me to? said The Coach playing with a straberry in his cereil. Lily was still freaked at what the saw that night at the old Meat packing plant with that guy having wings and those bodies up on the wall. She played with her butter on her pancakes. The Coach got up and went near Mr. Marshull to chat with him. Serena came over to sit with them. Hey guys? How are you? Everybody looked at her. Good I guess? said Lily. Oh hows Patricha doing? said Sam. Witch one Patricha richards or Patricha Jenner? Ah the second one? said Sam. Oh she's allright. Evan thou her brother Darry died that night as they where comeing back from collage? How did he die Serena? said Sylvia. I don't know Trich never told me how he passed away? Huh? said Lily looking back at her pancakes. Serena looked at Sam and the others. You's went lastnight to that plant a? Sam looked at her. Sam was going to say something but Lily spoke first. Yes we did. And we saw a guy......with wings? Serena brought one eyebrow up. Your joking right? No I'm not. said Lily.
(The afternoon)
CANNON BALL!!! said Jerry jumping into the water. Water splashed on Lily that was playing with a ball with her friend Taina. Lily got mad. SAM!!! Wrong us before you do that!? Sorry? said Sam laughing at her. Jerry was sitting in the sand playing with a stick. Behind some tree's a man was watching all of them. Jerry turned his head and saw a little bit of his coat that was out a little. Jerry got up. The man started to run back into the bush so Jerryt followed him. (In Jerry's mind) It's that guy with the wings? Whats he doing here? Jerry went into the bush. Jerry kept on running intill he was in the middle of the forest. There was no sign of the man anywhere. (On a branch above Jerry) The man was looking down at him. The man sneered. Jerry begun to run again. The man jumped onto the ground and ran after him. Jerry happend to look behind him to see the guy was chasing him. Oh shoot!? Jerry ran faster they guy then jumped really high and cot him and pinned him to the ground. That hurt!? said Jerry as he was trying to sdruggle to get free from the guy's hands. The man turned Jerry over and smiled at him. Jerry saw the man's face. What the heck? The guys face was green with a little white to it. Jerry screamed outloud as in freaked out. The guiy put his hand over Jerry's mouth so he would not scream anymore. Jerry bit the guy's hand. He just sneered at Jerry not evan in pain at all. Jerry bit harder. The guy slapped him plus his claw's across his cheek. Jerry groond outloud. The cut stung. Jerry strugled to get free again. COACH!!! HELP ME!!!! The guy brought out a piece of cloth and put it around Jerry's mouth.
(Back at camp>>>>Chapture 4)
Okay people out of the lake? said The Coach helping one of the kid's up out of the water. Sam looked around for Jerry. Hey were is Jerry? said Sam looking at Lily and Sylvia. Don't look at us. We don't know were he is? The Coach came over. Where is Jerry you guys didn't he come out with us? Sam turned. He was sitting on the beach? as Sam pointed to the spot. (In the woods) Let me go!? said Jerry in his mind. The man was holding him by his hands and tighed them that he put on him . Jerry decided to kick him in the leg. Jerry brought his leg out then swung it. The guy growled in pain and let go of Jerry. Jerry quikly struggled his hands free from the rope and then untighd the cloth around his mouth. Are you trying to kill me or something? said Jerry looking at him. The man was holding his leg. I really feel sorry for him? said Jerry in mind as he walked over beside him. Let me see you leg? The guy growles at him. Hey its Okay? I'm not going to hurt you just look at your leg? The guy sneeres at him and moves his hands. Jerry went on his knees. Jerry rolled up the man's pant leg and freaked. Oh you have a great big wound on your leg? Like if you got stuck in a bear's trap? Jerry looked at it more. Yup its from a bear trap? Jerry looked up at him. The guy was lying down laughing evily. Jerry grabed the cloth and tighed up his hands. The guy stopped laughing and sneered. I really wish you quit smiling like that? said Jerry grabing his legs and putting them around his thi's. I'm going to have someone look at your leg okay? The guy growles evily at him.
(1Min later now at camp)
Boy your heavy!? said Jerry breathing heavily. The guy was knocked out. The man was making a low moaning noise. Jerry stoped outside of the teachers cabin. glade its sunny out? said Jerry starting to walk again. Jerry knocked on the door. The Coach came to the door and opened it. Jerry looked up. The Coach came out side. Where were you Jerry? said The Coach scratching his head. Jerry put the guy on the ground and looked up at the Coach again. This man kidnaped me or something like that? The Coach came over to the man that was on the ground. The Coach looked at his leg and then looked back at Jerry. What happend to his leg? When i kicked him the wound was allready there. I guess he got caught in a bear trap? said Jerry pulling down then pant leg. Okay I'll get Miss.Randy to take a look at his leg? The Coach walked back inside the cabin. Miss. Randy come here for a second? Miss. Randy gets up and walks to The Coach. What is it? Come look at this guy's leg that tryed to kidnap Jerry? The both teacher's come out. The nurse comes over to the man. The man still is knocked out thou. Can you roll up his pant leg Jerry? said Miss. Randy looking up. Yeah sure. Jerry rolled the bloody pant leg up. The Nurse looked at it. This man's leg got caught in a bear trap erlyer? said Miss. Randy looking at the Coach and Jerry. Get him in the empty cabin over there? said the Coach grabing the mans legs. Jerry picked up the mans hands and both of them walked near the cabin. Can you unlock the door please Randy? said the Coach trying to keep his balance. Miss. Randy opened up the door wide open so the Coach and Jerry can get throu. The nurse closed the door behind her as she went in. Lets put him on the bed? said Jerry pointing a fingure.
(Hour later in the empty cabin)
More to come
Last edited by Creeper the sneaker on Fri Aug 22, 2003 1:43 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Melodramatic Rear Admiral
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Tue May 27, 2003 4:03 pm |
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Thats very good
you have a real talent maybe you should explore that talent furthier
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Creeper the sneaker The Creeper
Joined: 23 Apr 2003 Posts: 1152
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Fri May 30, 2003 2:59 pm |
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Why thank you Dana Scully:)
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Creeper the sneaker The Creeper
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Mon Jul 21, 2003 5:12 pm |
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I hop use like rthis one then the other one i did i thought it sucked?
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Shenzi_Khan Captain
Joined: 22 Nov 2002 Posts: 509 Location: in cave mumbuling XD
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Tue Jul 22, 2003 2:07 pm |
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Nice:)
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Creeper the sneaker The Creeper
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Wed Jul 23, 2003 7:00 pm |
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I like this one? I keep on changing it! lol
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