Voyager FanFic (Untitled at the moment)

[janeway9]

Here is the start of my new Fan Fic..tell me what you think of it so far and I might continue on it. I think it sounds some what stupid but you tell me what you think of it..It is untitled at the moment.


Janeway sat alone in her ready room waiting for a systems� report she had ordered. Staring at the stars with the eyes of a true explorer, never giving up the hope that her and her crew will make it home. At warp 6 the stars seem to just fly by so fast you can�t really focus on just one. Sipping her coffee, her door beeps.

Janeway: �Come in.�
Tuvok: �Captain, here is the report you requested.�
Janeway: �Thank you Tuvok. How have you been feeling since you left Sickbay?�
Tuvok: �I have been well Captain. But you, on the other hand, do not look well. Perhaps you should go and rest.�
Janeway: �Yes, you maybe right, but I can�t sleep. I just lay there with my mind running in full speed. My mind won�t let me rest.�
Tuvok: �Perhaps the Doctor can give you something to help you sleep.�
Janeway: �You know Tuvok, a trip to Sickbay sounds like a good idea right about now.�

B�Elanna, hard at work de-jamming the plasma manifolds in the warpcore was interrupted by Tom who was interested only in getting her back to their quarters.

Tom: �Well hello honey, its nice to see you�re still so dedicated to your work.�
B�Elanna: � You know Tom, if we weren�t married I�d...�
Tom: � You�d what? Beat me to a pulp? I don�t think so, you�d feel so terrible after wards.�
B�Elanna: � Did you come here for a reason or just to annoy me while I work?�
Tom: �Well both really. What would you say to a wonderful dinner full of foods to die for!?�
B�Elanna: � If I wasn�t working, I�d say it sounds great. But you see unlike some people I have a job I have to do and people who depend on my work�
Tom: �Okay, How about when your finished here you meet me in our quarters and I will make sure everything is perfect...�
B�Elanna: �Well, it will be a while...but okay. I will let you know when I�m on my way.�
Tom: �Great, see you tonight.�

Tom kisses her and leaves. She slowly regains her concentration and begins working again.

[Alpha6006]

Pretty good to start with. But you could put a few more Charactor movemet Eg.Paris walks into Engineering. and looks around

[sabertooth1217]

seems to sound really good

[Voy_Girl]

Right on character.