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PostThu May 29, 2003 1:19 pm    Across the Delta Quadrant

Across the Delta Quadrant.

Celestral Kanario
Chapter 1: old friends
Amaka Janeway sipped the last of her Romulan Ale, pushed the empty glass across the table and stood up. As she reached the door she heard her name "Ama! Wait!" she turned to see one of her best friends Harry Kim coming towards her. The young Ensigns face was flushed with Embarsment. "Come on, lets get out of here" he said. Amaka caught sight of the man behind Kim, Tom Paris. She han=t seen him in seven years, since they=re fight at the academy. AParis@ she said, fighting the urge to hug him. AAmaka@ he said. He smiled at her. She=d always loved his smile. AHow have you been?@ She asked as the three of them left Quarks. AI heard you were sent to a penal colony?@ She looked into hiss eyes. AYeah, for firing on a Federation ship@ she sighed. AWhy?@ She=d only heard a few rumors. And most had been from overhearing Alkaline Moonstone and Julz Johansson talking. And one could never believe those two. A I wanted to lead them away from the Marquis wounded craft@ she believed in what the Marquis were fighting for, just not how they were doing it. She could understand how the DMZ could cause problems for the inhabitants of the various planets. AHave either of you checked in with the Captain?@ She asked. They both shook their heads no.


Tom couldn’t=t get her off his mind. She was still as beautiful as the day he first met her. He remembered it as though it had been yesterday. It had been at the Derby. His friend, Charlie Day, had gone off to talk to a few girls who were in his class. He had caught Amaka=s gaze. Her eyes were the deepest of blues, her face was was beautiful. Charlie had called him over to meet his friends; Amaka had been one of them. She=d wished him luck and said she hoped he would beat Trent Moonstone. He did win though. Charlie and he had treated the girls to an ice cream after the derby. He=d fell in love with her that day. ATom?@ Harry Kim was waving his hand in front of his face. AEarth to Tom@ he smiled ASorry Harry@ he said and returned to his lunch.
Chapter 2: The Journey begins
“Captain” Amaka said “we’re entering the bad lands” her aunt tapped her comm. badge “Bridge to Pairs” she heard his voice, clear and strong “yes, Captain” Janeway looked grim “we have reached the bad lands” Pairs didn’t even hesitate. “On my way” she could tell he loved being aboard a star ship. She turned her attechion back to the helm. She needed to concentrate. The hissing of the turbo doors announced Paris’ entrance. She saw Janeway wave him over. “But, would Plasma storms leave debris?” she heard him ask, she turned away from the helm “but there should a warp signature” Janeway nodded. “Captain” she could hear the panic in Harry’s voice “there’s a displacement wave coming towards us!” just then the ship rocked and knocked her from her seat, the last words she heard was someone yelling out her name, and then everything went black.

“Um, we’ve lost her nurse as well Doc” Tom was standing over the unconscious form of Amaka Janeway, the only woman he’d ever loved. “She’s got minor injuries” the hologram said he pressed a hyprospray to her neck. Amaka’s eyes opened slowly “Kali” she muttered. “No, it’s Tommy” he said, using the name she used to call him in the Academy. “Tommy?” she sat up suddenly, he placed his hand on her back to help her. “Where’s Kali?” she asked, her blue eyes looked into his. He smiled grimly at her “she was badly burnt when her consol exploded” she looked around sick bay; Alkali was lying on the bed next to her. “Help me Tommy” she sounded weak and looked so determined to be with her sister. Just then they dematerialized

What do you think? Should I contunie?


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PostThu May 29, 2003 3:39 pm    

Sweet...

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PostMon Jun 02, 2003 5:21 pm    

Thank you....Just so you know. Amaka is supposed to be an exgerated character of me and I have a major crush on Tom Paris. So yeah

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PostWed Jun 04, 2003 1:37 pm    Chapter 3:Reunited

Chapter 3: Reunited.
Harry Kim blinked at the bright lights around, he sat up. One of the Marquis officers was on the other table. He glanced around the room, the walls were painfully white. They almost blinded him. The woman stirred and sat up. She was partly Klingon, judgeing by the deep Klingon ridges that dorned her forhead. �What are you looking at Star Fleet?� she snapped, making him jump. Her dark eyes held hatred in the very deepest core. �What were you doing in the badlands anyways?� he smiled. �Looking for you� she glowered at him. �Trying to catch us?� he patted his robes �I think I have a phaser in here somewhere� at the moment the door opened and a tall alien entered. She had short blond hair, and ears like a Vulcan. �Hello� her voice was soft and seemed to ring. �Are you comfortable?� the Klingon glowerd �Comfortable?� she spat �when you keep us like prisoners� the alien looked surprised �Prisnors, no no Miss. The Caretaker sent you here so we could take care of you� she gave a low laugh �You may come out� she held opened the door.


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PostThu Jun 05, 2003 7:33 am    

Paris_Girl wrote:
Thank you....Just so you know. Amaka is supposed to be an exgerated character of me and I have a major crush on Tom Paris. So yeah

I figured...


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PostThu Jun 05, 2003 1:26 pm    more to come

Tom is sooo hot though. I'll write more later

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PostThu Jun 05, 2003 2:46 pm    

Good job.Please continue.

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PostTue Jun 10, 2003 1:50 pm    

Chapter 4 is coming....soon
TOM PARIS IS HOT


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PostTue Jun 10, 2003 2:46 pm    Chapter 4

Chapter 4


Kathryn Janeway watched as the Commander of the Marquis vessel materlized on her bridge. She smiled slightly as she reconized Tuvok, her missing security officer. “Tuvok” she said to the Vulcan “it’s good to see you again” Chakotay turned on him “I think is the apporite time, Commander, that I am working under cover for Captain Janeway” Tuvok then walked and stood at her side. “What were you going to do Vulcan” Kathryn could hear the hatred in his voice “hand us over to their waiting hands?” Tuvok, being Vulcan and all, merely nodded “perciesly”. She wasn’t sure but she thought she saw a hint of admiration in his eyes. He then seemed to notice Tom Paris, and all hints of admiration flew from his eyes “you” he lunged at him. Kathryn and Amaka stepped foward in unison “this man is a member of my crew and I expect you to treat him with the same amount of respect as you would have me to one of your crew” Chakotay shot Paris a muderous glance before yeilding. “Lets move to the confrence room” and she turned on her heel without looking back.

Amaka sat between Tom and her aunt in the confrence room, trying her hardest to figure out where she knew Chakotay from. The Academy! It hit her he was our basic manouvers professor in second year! She sat up a little straighter. She really hadn’t been paying attechion. If her aunt got really annoyed when one of her officers didn’t pay attechion. She tried to keep her attechion on her aunt, but it kept wondering over in Paris’ direction. He was just as cute as the last she saw of him. With his sandy-blond hair, light blue eyes, and heart-breaking smile. She still loved him. “Amaka!” the sharpness of her aunt’s voice brought her back to the present. “Yeah?” she asked, she was still a little dreamy “any suggestions?” her eyes held annoyance. Amaka blushed a deep scarlet and nodded no.

Harry looked around as he and the maquis, who’s name was B’Elanna Torres, where lead into what seemed like the main eating and social area. It had a giant screen with pictures flashing across them, on one wall stood replicators. “You know” he said leaning closer to B’Elanna “I think we’re underground” the alien, who’d introduced herself as Kathrina, looked at him. “The whole city is underground” she said in her soft voice. He still wasn’t sure what race she was, and she hadn’t stated.

I am starting to work on Chapter 5


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PostTue Jun 10, 2003 3:06 pm    Chapter 5

Chapter 5.


Tom rang the bell outside the Captain’s ready room. “Come in” the Captain sounded tired and exsperated. Her face stated nothing else when the doors hissed open. “Captain, if your busy” he said. She waved her hand as if to dismiss the idea. “Not at all Tom, please come in” she set her PADD on the desk. “What can I do for you?” he sallowed “It’s Amaka” He looked at her. “I am worried, she doesn’t seem herself” he said “She’s quiet, and not her usually bouncy self”Janeway sighed and staightened up a little. “She’s worried, Tom” she said “Harry’s one of her best friends” she said “she’d die if anything happend to him” she hesitated as if she was unsure to add more, but didn’t. “Thank you Captain” he said and left the room. All the way to her quarters he ponderd on what the Captain was hiding about Amaka.

Amaka’s book “Blessed Child” was in her hands, but she really wasn’t reading it. She was thinking, of ways to help Harry and the Maquis. “Sorry!” she glanced up to see a dark-haired, aisan cadet helping her retrive her books and PADD. He had dark eyes, and his face was flushed with embarsement. He looked familar, “Your Harry Kim” she said. He seemed surprised that she knew who he was “You wrote that artical on the Borg last week in the Cadet paper” he seemed to go an even deeper red. “Yes” he said softly “It was really good” she said. She’d liked it alot, it was a great peice of work. “Well I have to go to Astrometrics, Lt. Paldesnes will kill me if I am late again” she watched for a few minutes as he walked down the hall and out of sight. Her memory was inturpeted by the chiming of her door, annoucing a visitor. “Come in” she said, placing a book mark in the book. She stood up and found herself face-to-face with Tom Paris. “Tom” she said, and for the first time since meeting him in Quarks she really smiled at him. “What’s going on?” she asked. She placed her book on the coffee table she’d convinced her Aunt to let her replicate. It was glass jade ontop, and the legs were carved in lions. “Not much” he seemed hesitant, as though he really wanted to say something. “Amaka” he said he moved closer her, he took her face in his hands and kissed her.


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PostTue Jun 10, 2003 3:09 pm    

Good writing!

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PostTue Jun 10, 2003 9:41 pm    

great story

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PostWed Jun 11, 2003 10:25 am    Chapter 6

Chapter 6.(more of this Chapter is to come later)


They materialize again into the holographic farmland inside the array. The old man was now playing a harmonica. As they approached he gave out a short laugh. “Persistent I see” he said, but he did seem a bit surprised. Kathryn sighed. “Where are our people?” Chakotay demanded he stepped towards the old man. “I can’t. If someday it’s possible to return your people to them, I will” he then raised his two hands and they vanished.
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PostThu Jun 12, 2003 10:52 am    Chapter 6(the rest of)

The rest of Chapter 6 .

It took a few days before they found Neelix, a Talaxian who knew this part of space like the back of his hand. He also happened to know where Harry and the maquis officer had gone. “The Ocampa” he said as he sat in the conferencing room. “Say that the caretaker, the enity in space, has been sending them aliens for sometime to care for” Amaka sat up a little. “Where is their homeworld?” she asked “The third planet in the neighbooring system.” said the pudgy little alien. She couldn’t explain it but she reconized his race, but how can that be she thought I haven’t been in the Delta Quadrant since I was a baby, and that was in the Neubian System. Still she reconized his face. He was very familiar. She caught his eye and smiled a little. His face wasn’t half the reaction she’d expected. “Captain!” he said, he turned around completely around to look at her “Amaka Rosakia, my cousin!” this brought silence to the confrence room then blowing a battle did on the bridge. “Cousin?” Kathryn looked at her, she could feel her face going red. “I am sorry, if I startled you” he said, seemily taking in the reactions of the rest of the crew “I persumed you knew” he added softly. “You were at my Taslen Ceremony, with your sister Alexis” the metion of his sister made Neelix’s face go dim. The bright smile was replaced by a downcast look. “Oh, Neelix” she said. “I am sorry” she said. “The Ocampa” she said “They are of my heritage as well” Neelix looked at her “really?” she showed him her ears, which were like those of Ocampa. “They are!” she tried to recall her Ocampa cousin’s name. She knew it started with a K. “Kes!” she said finally. “Kes, is one of my Ocampa cousins!” Neelix’s face held shock.


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PostThu Jun 12, 2003 11:07 am    Chapter 7: (Some of it)

Chapter 7.

Kathryn blinked as the blinding sun shone in her eyes. The planet was a desert, small, sand like structures sprang up everywhere. War-like aliens came from them. “Those are the Kazon Ogla” she could see that Amaka looked ready to kill. “The Kazon?” she said. She knew the Kazon were responisble for sending Alkali and Amaka to Earth. And for killing many Rikiarns. But that was the Kazon Nesturim. “Where are the Ocampas?” Amaka asked, obvious hatred coursing through her. “I am not sure. Kes has said something about them living underground” Neelix answerd before venturing foward. A blood curling war cry reached their ears and some Kazon warriors rushed out. They siezed Neelix pulling him towards what seemed to be their leader, a couple others rounded the Starfleet and Marquis Officers. “Friendly lot” Paris commented, Kathryn noticed Amaka shot him a dark look. She noticed a small figure in the background. “Trade us all that water for that girl” she said. The leader, who they found out was named Jaben, seemed to be consdering it. “He woun’t let me go” said a soft voice, Kathryn looked around and her eyes fell on the the girl “he wants to find the others like me”. Amaka noticed her too. They seemed to have a conversation going. Amaka smiled warmly at her, but at the same time looked disgusted. Kathryn wanted to know what she said, but didn’t have time to ask. “Captain, I suggest you get us out of here” Kathryn acted right away “Janeway to Voyager, energize transporter” and in an instant they were gone.


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PostFri Jun 13, 2003 8:40 am    Chapter 8

A/N: there may be some things wrong in this chapter, I couldn't for the life of me remember the name of Kes' friend or the elder that told them the could not help

Chapter 8

Amaka gazed around in wonder as they materilzed underground, in the Ocampa city. Or, as Kes said, the outskirts. Everything was so cheerful here, and she could feel a distinct breeze. She glanced around the farmland. She had been raised on her Grandparents farm in Indainna, she’s always loved the smell of freshly cut lawn, the sense of running through the open feilds with no shoes or socks on. Her sister, Alkali, said nothing but mouthed wordlessly. “Kes!” a tall, tanned Ocampa greeted her cousin. (A/N: I don’t remember the real name of Kes’ friend) “Terriak” she said, the two hugged. Another Ocampa had enterd unoticed. “Kes, I thought I would never see you again!” Kes smiled before she spoke again. “These are my friends, and my cousins” she smiled at Alkali and Amaka. “They’re people were sent here” Amaka watched as her aunt stepped foward “can you help us” Amaka jumped as she heard the message. No they can not. She was telepathic, but having growen up with Humans, and her sister being the telepath, besides her, in their community and in their year, she wasn’t used to recieving telepathic messages.
“They can’t answer, please speak aloud Tanga” Kes said. “I am sorry” Tanga said sincerly “but we can’t interfere with the choices of the Caretaker” Chakotay’s face went red and he stepped toward him. “Chakotay, don’t” Amaka heard herself speak up, he turned, surprised, towards her. “Don’t, we’ll find them” Kes looked at the elder “Tanga, I will help them. And I think my friends are with me” Terriak and the two other Ocampa with him nodded. “We’ll check the clinic for your people” and without so much as a backward glance at Tanga, they left the farm.


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PostThu Jul 17, 2003 1:23 pm    

this is excellent! You've definatley got writing skill! keep this up, it's a very good peice of work!


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PostSat Aug 23, 2003 11:50 pm    More to come

Hey everyone,
I have been extermly busy so sorry if this fanfiction hasn't been updated....*Paris_Girl blushes* anyways...I will update soon. Chapters 9-11 are coming
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PostSun Aug 24, 2003 5:31 pm    

I really like the storie keep it up?

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PostMon Aug 25, 2003 7:34 am    Re: More to come

Paris_Girl wrote:
Hey everyone,
I have been extermly busy so sorry if this fanfiction hasn't been updated....*Paris_Girl blushes* anyways...I will update soon. Chapters 9-11 are coming
God Bless
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PostWed Aug 27, 2003 2:32 pm    

Thanx Voy_Girl
God Bless
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PostSat Sep 06, 2003 4:02 pm    THIS STORY IS UNDER CONSUCTION

Hey everyone,
I am going to rewrite this story then repost it!
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PostSun Sep 07, 2003 8:37 am    Re: THIS STORY IS UNDER CONSUCTION

Paris_Girl wrote:
Hey everyone,
I am going to rewrite this story then repost it!
God Bless
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Would you like this thread locked, so you can start a new, fresh one?


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PostMon Sep 08, 2003 4:22 pm    

that would be great!! thanx
~God Bless <><~


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PostTue Sep 09, 2003 2:40 pm    

Paris_Girl wrote:
that would be great!! thanx
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Ok, I'll take care of it, and you can just start a new thread.


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