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Theresa Lux Mihi Deus
Joined: 17 Jun 2001 Posts: 27256 Location: United States of America
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Tue May 27, 2003 7:54 pm Fanfic Ideas |
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Discuss your ideas for fanfic here, bounce them off others....
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Lord Borg Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003 Posts: 11214 Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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Tue May 27, 2003 8:11 pm |
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the renagade tws(time war ship) is a vessle which must help picard and crew agentes the borg
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Lord Borg Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003 Posts: 11214 Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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Tue May 27, 2003 8:26 pm |
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the borg are stronger than ever and in a new sector, several federation vessels are like flies to this new threat. the enterprise responds to their peads fo help and arrives to late. as the investigate, a temp vortex opens and a borg vessles is trying to flee from the renageade
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Kyle Reese Cadet Gunnery Sergeant
Joined: 21 Apr 2003 Posts: 5672 Location: The United States of America
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Tue May 27, 2003 8:37 pm |
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um are you trying to write a fanfic or just telling us the plot or something
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Lord Borg Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003 Posts: 11214 Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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Tue May 27, 2003 8:42 pm |
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plot for now, then story after a few insites
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Praetor The Architek
Joined: 25 Jul 2001 Posts: 4810 Location: Somewhere I possibly couldn't go...
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Wed May 28, 2003 6:18 am |
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Here's a plot for my story:
Myself, Captain Mansell, and Leah, Captain Manzer are brother and sister. They are to command the newly built Arizona and Oklahoma starships. Both are sovereign sister ships. ((They are the only Sovereign class starships out right now besides the enterprise.)) They have also been fitted with the new slipstream drive. On their maiden voyage to Deep Space Ten the Oklahom, commanded by leah smashes into the Arizona, commanded by Corey. Both vessels explode, and when the slipstream collapses the large fragments from the vessels head straight into an inhabited planet. Causing massive amounts of damage, and after that, plasma from the warp drives spread out in the atmosphere killing everyone on the planet.
Then it goes to a different ship called the Federation Time ship Centuria. They are set out to stop what had happened with these ships. They believe rogue time travellors from the future had sabatoged the Oklahoma to crash into the Arizona. However this is all just a small part of a very, very large picture...
Well that's all i got, still ironing out some stuff, any imput would be great!
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Wed May 28, 2003 3:16 pm |
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I'm just going to point, to everyone who reads this, out that it is not nice (or acceptable) to totally rip someone's idea off this topic.
Last edited by Voy_Girl on Thu May 29, 2003 3:38 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Praetor The Architek
Joined: 25 Jul 2001 Posts: 4810 Location: Somewhere I possibly couldn't go...
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Wed May 28, 2003 5:06 pm |
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Are you saying I ripped someone's idea off? Or your just stating that...?
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Theresa Lux Mihi Deus
Joined: 17 Jun 2001 Posts: 27256 Location: United States of America
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Wed May 28, 2003 5:23 pm |
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I think it's just a statement.
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Chakotays Angel Captain
Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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Wed May 28, 2003 11:01 pm |
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Hey I need some help with my story line please. I'm lost and can't figure out what to do next. So please read what I have posted so far and give me some suggestions
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Captain Michael Pike Captain
Joined: 14 Jul 2001 Posts: 597 Location: PA
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Thu May 29, 2003 1:08 am |
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Here's one that someone can take and run with it if you want.
During the Dominion War, a campaign to clone humans (in a future effort to infiltrate the Alpha Quadrant powers) began under the order of the Founders. With the end of the war, the end of the project was officially announced, but the scientists who ran the cloning program unofficially kept runing the program until an enemy of the Dominion wiped out the scientific crew but not the life support for the tank (possibly because they didn't know what they had found).
After years of disrepair, the tank's maturation propeties shut down, but the clones had matured enough to survive on just the life support that was functional. A couple of years passed and the clones spent those long ages in darkness and silence, what we would call sensory deprivation chambers. The sensory deprivation led to incredible loneliness and eventually the clones used their minds to seek one another out. They established a telepathic connection and eventually they establish telekinesis. These new abilities lead them to escape and seek out the Founders, and the Dominion, in an effort to destroy the ones who did this to them.
The children wreak havoc on the Dominion, destroying any ship that come in their purview with the powers of their minds. The Dominion, faced with an unstoppable foe, calls for assistance from the Federation who inevitable send the crew of the Enterprise and or the Defiant and/or the returned crew of Voyager to aid the Founders. But the crews are faced with an interesting dilemma should they destroy these innocent children because of their incredibile abilities or should they allow the children to continue on their destructive path resulting in the possible destruction of the Dominion forever?
This has a lot of possibilities...either as a pre-Nemesis book with Deanna Troi or a post Nemesis book without her. Can Picard make a jusgement call with out her helpful insight? Or if she's in it, what can these kids inflict upon her (as a fellow telepath) that no one else in the universe could inflict? You could also work in the Titan if you wanted a joint venture reuniting the TNG crews....
I guess that's IF anyone wanted to write this!
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Captain Michael Pike Captain
Joined: 14 Jul 2001 Posts: 597 Location: PA
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Thu May 29, 2003 1:09 am |
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Oh yeah...I call it Demon Seed.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu May 29, 2003 3:37 pm |
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Praetor wrote: | Are you saying I ripped someone's idea off? Or your just stating that...? |
Just a statement. I think you're idea is an original.
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Lord Borg Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003 Posts: 11214 Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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Sat May 31, 2003 7:16 pm |
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every ones ideas are great, the arozona one is ecilent, is it in any way connected to the temporal cold war in enterprise?
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