Beginning of my J/C story

Thomas · **Mon Apr 14, 2003 3:04 pm**

That's good...

Josi Rockholt · **Tue Apr 15, 2003 7:02 am**

Where's the rest????

Chakotays Angel · **Wed Apr 16, 2003 3:06 am**

Still working out a few bugs...

Chakotays Angel · **Fri Apr 18, 2003 1:28 am**

Here is alittle more ............

�Very well off duty, I�ll call you both by first name.� replied seven. Chakotay was about to suggestion to everyone that it was time to be heading back to camp when out of nowhere seven Hirogen hunters mobilized around the group. Kathryn turned to speak to the leader, but was pushed to the ground by one of the other hunters with stock of his rifle. B�Elanna and seven rushed to her side to see if she and the baby were hurt. �Looks like we have found some fresh prey to hunt?� one of the hunters said to the leader. The hunter�s leader walked over to where the group of women on the ground looking down at them, He spoke �I have seen these women before on one of my hunts.� Tom and Chakotay lunged at two of the hunters in a temp to get their rifles.

enjoy

Thomas · **Fri Apr 18, 2003 4:43 am**

Too many hunters!

PicardsTrueLove · **Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:03 pm**

GAH!! STOP HURTING PPL!!! lol good job!

janewaykat · **Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:14 pm**

^Excatly. Great Job though

Josi Rockholt · **Fri Apr 18, 2003 3:07 pm**

Katie stole my words.Great job.

tom_88_2 · **Sat Apr 19, 2003 10:06 pm**

this is a very good story

Voy_Girl · **Sun Apr 20, 2003 2:52 pm**

Yeah, good job!!

Chakotays Angel · **Thu Apr 24, 2003 3:01 pm**

Alittle more ...........

�Chakotay Tom, No!� Kathryn screamed as they were stunned from behind by a hunter. The Leader grabbed Kathryn by the hair and pulled her into his arms. �Well, now it�s this nice to see the Captain of Voyager and her crew again!) said the leader while his tied Kathryn�s hands with rope. Kathryn looked down at the ground to be Tom and Chakotay�s bodies lay unmoving. �Please don�t� be dead.� She thought to herself.

janewaykat · **Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:08 pm**

keep up the great work

Thomas · **Fri Apr 25, 2003 3:12 am**

Gosh!

Josi Rockholt · **Fri Apr 25, 2003 8:59 am**

Continue please.We need more.And now!

Voy_Girl · **Fri Apr 25, 2003 2:19 pm**

Yeah, please write more!

Chakotays Angel · **Fri Apr 25, 2003 5:21 pm**

Here is the more you asked for....

Kathryn could see out of the corner of her eye that B�Elanna and seven were being tied up. �What do you plan on doing with us?� Kathryn demanded with angry as fought the leaders grip. �You and the females of the crew will become slaves, the male crew will our hunting prey!� replied the leader with an evil laugh. �What should we do with these two?� one of the hunters asked as he kicked Chakotay and Tom. �Tie them up and make sure they have no way to get loose.� the leader replied. �You will never get away with this our ship will come looking for us!� B�Elanna yelled as she was being pulled to her feet. Kathryn heard a groaning sound coming from the area where Chakotay and Tom laid. Chakotay shock his head as he started to wake up from the stun.

I'll try to posted more later ok

Thomas · **Sat Apr 26, 2003 4:52 am**

Wake up!

Josi Rockholt · **Sat Apr 26, 2003 7:40 am**

Come on,continue.Please?

janewaykat · **Sat Apr 26, 2003 10:02 am**

very good job

Voy_Girl · **Sun Apr 27, 2003 1:52 pm**

Post more...

Starbuck · **Sun Apr 27, 2003 7:32 pm**

must...have...more...now!!!!!!!!!!!

Chakotays Angel · **Fri May 09, 2003 4:05 pm**

I'm working on it < Keep your shirts on ok. I'm working in a few more suprise into the storyline. PLease be will to work with me on it.

janewaykat · **Fri May 09, 2003 6:06 pm**

ok I'll wait patiently (AHH I've never been patient in my life)

Josi Rockholt · **Fri May 09, 2003 6:13 pm**

^Same here.

Chakotays Angel · **Mon May 19, 2003 3:23 pm**

Here is alittle preview of what is happening so far.......

�So glad to have you back with us Commander!� replied the leader. �Kathryn are you and baby ok!� Chakotay said as he looked over at her. �We are fine Chakotay!� Kathryn replied with a sigh as a single tear fell down her cheek. Chakotay turned his attentions to the Tom, who was starting to come around from the stun. �What the hell is happening?� Tom said as he looked over to see B�Elanna with tears in her eyes.