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Voy_Girl
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PostMon Mar 31, 2003 12:11 pm    

Cool..


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PostMon Mar 31, 2003 7:31 pm    

very good


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PostMon Mar 31, 2003 8:21 pm    

Unexpected story turns...I hadn't checked for a few months as I hadn't been around lately. Hmm, it's good! Keep writing!


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PostWed Apr 02, 2003 8:57 am    

Very good,Jeff.Please continue.


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PostSat Apr 19, 2003 4:38 pm    

I'll have the next chapter posted tommarow sorry for any inconvience this has caused


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PostSun Apr 20, 2003 6:04 pm    

it's tomorrow


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PostMon Apr 21, 2003 3:49 pm    

What Katie said.


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PostThu Apr 24, 2003 11:32 am    

come on jeff were all waiting..

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PostThu Apr 24, 2003 6:05 pm    

Jefff!!!!! we're dying down here

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PostFri Apr 25, 2003 8:54 am    

Jeff,where's the rest????What tomorrow never came?Your killing us.

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PostSat Apr 26, 2003 9:57 am    

His tomorrow was a week ago

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PostSat Apr 26, 2003 11:28 am    

ok after much ado and some complaining here it is the next chapter.

Chapter 20: Jeremy

Susan continues to hold Jeff�s lifeless body she can�t stop crying at the thought she just lost the most important thing that ever mattered to her she didn�t have a chance to tell him that she was pregnant with his baby.

Susan: I will always love you.

Susan kisses Jeff�s cheek than two guards come in.

Professor Clyde: �Remove miss King from the body and take her to the holding cell.�

Guards: �Yes sir.�

Susan: �No wait please give me some time with Jeff.�

Professor Clyde: �No.�

The guards grab Susan and they drag her out of the morgue her cries for Jeff can be heard down the hall as they drag her away from the one thing she loved they put her in a cell she rushes the door but it�s shut before she could get out Susan sits on the bed and waits for something to happen. Days pass it has now been eight days since Jeff was shot and she saw him in the morgue she is laying on the bed telling the baby in her stomach that they will get out of this and she will not let Jeff die in her mind that he will always be there for her. Susan hears some guards outside the room and she gets up and looks out the window it�s the same two guards that put her in the cell they open up the door and grab Susan she screams as they drag her out of the room she bites one of the guards.

Guard 1: �Ahh sh#t that damn woman bit me�

The guard punches Susan in the stomach and Susan hits the ground and grabs her stomach.

Susan: �You A##hole Im pregnant you could have just killed my baby.�

Guard 1: �That isn�t my concern�

The guard grabs Susan by the hair and drags her with the second guard behind watching they drag her into a room it looks like a Lab they sit her in a chair and restrain her in it Susan is screaming she wants to get free but she can�t.

Susan: �What do you want with me?�

The guards don�t answer her they just stand at the door and stare at her than a female comes in.

Female scientist: �aww this is Susan King I hear your pregnant well we can�t have that now can we?�

Susan: �What are you going to do?�

Female scientist: �Im going to Abort your Baby.�

Susan: �NO.�

Female scientist: �You don�t have any choice what happens to you�

The Scientist pulls out a needle from a cabinet it has a blue liquid in it she pulls up Susan�s shirt Susan is pleading with her not to but she doesn�t listen she jams the needle in and it hurts Susan screams in pain and passes out she is out for a while she wakes up and sees that she is restrained to a table she is woozy like she has been drugged when she finally comes to she looks up and sees Professor Clyde.

Susan (Woozy and groggy): �Wh what do, do you want with me? You have taken everything away from me. I have nothing left.�

Susan closes her eyes and feels like the room is spinning around.

Professor Clyde: �You belong to us you have nothing.�

Professor Clyde looks up at a person on the other side of the table.

Professor Clyde: �she�s ready for the injection, do it now.�

Medical assistant: �Yes Professor.�

He injects a green liquid into Susan�s Neck and Susan Passes out again. Professor Clyde looks at the assistant.

Professor Clyde: �Get her prepped.�

Medical Assistant: �Yes Professor.�

Clyde leaves and goes into another room it looks like an autopsy room.

Professor Clyde: �well did you remove the CPU from Jeff�s corpse?�

Corner: �Yes Professor I did.�

Professor Clyde: �What did you find out?�

Corner: �I have more data than I can work within a lifetime you had a perfect weapon.�

Professor Clyde: �I know.�

Professor Clyde walks over to Jeff�s corpse and smiles evilly.

Meanwhile Susan finally wakes up in a hotel room it looks oddly familiar there is a guy next to her she looks under the sheets and sees they are both naked than the guy wakes up Susan looks at him and smiles.

Susan: �Morning sexy� Susan smiles.

Jeremy: �Morning�

Jeremy and Susan smile they than start kissing slow and long.

To Be Continued................


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PostSat Apr 26, 2003 3:00 pm    

yeah good job. (we weren't complaining we were encouraging you to write more )

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PostMon Apr 28, 2003 10:16 am    

Finally.Good job,Jeff.

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PostMon Apr 28, 2003 11:06 am    

thanks Im glad you like my story I will try to have the next chapter done sometime this week depending if I don't have writers block

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PostMon Apr 28, 2003 11:21 am    

You better not get a writers block.You need to keep writing.

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PostMon Apr 28, 2003 11:23 am    

yes I know lol I think I got a few ideas already lol

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PostMon Apr 28, 2003 11:25 am    

Good.Now get writing them.

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PostWed Apr 30, 2003 1:40 pm    

Chapter 21: Rolling

Susan and Jeremy are kissing slowly in bed she feels totally free for the first time in her life but she doesn�t realize that but she doesn�t realize her life has been altered dramatically she thinks that she is on a honeymoon with her lifelong boyfriend now husband.

Susan: �Hmm I love you.�

Jeremy: �I love you too Im so glad we are married.�

Jeremy smiles and Susan smiles back Susan than tells Jeremy that she is going to take a shower Jeremy tells her he will join her Susan smiles and goes into the bathroom to take a shower the phone rings and Jeremy picks it up.

Jeremy: �Hello.�

Professor Clyde: �How�s it going with miss King?�

Jeremy: �Its going good she doesn�t even remember Jeff at all she believes we are married.�

Professor Clyde: �Good keep it up wait for further instructions.�

Jeremy: �Understood.�

Professor Clyde hangs up the phone and leaves his office he walks to a science room there in the room is Jeff�s body it has been cut open and it looks like his organs are out being examined Clyde looks at the corpse of Jeff than looks at a scientist.

Professor Clyde: �Well what have you found out?�

Scientist: �The former Mr. Miller has had more action than I would have though he had according to the CPU we put into him he was in several fights it�s very amazing he was a great test subject.�

Days later and 5,000 miles away in Madiorpool, China a small Stealth place drops a person off on a roof its late night the only light is the full moon the person is clad in black with a black mask on he starts to run he is running faster than anyone ever has he is able to jump in between buildings without any problems the person gets to the building and looks in the first skylight he comes to it looks like a strip club nude women dancing on stages and half-dressed women giving lap dances. Than a voice comes over a communications unit in his outfit.

Professor Clyde: �Scan for a hidden entrance that should lead to one of the many hideouts of the Chinese Mob �The Hand�.�

A display appears and the person is able to scan for the entrance he locates it.

Professor Clyde: �Very good now you know what to do Clyde out.�

The person stands up and hears a voice behind him he stands up and stays still.

Guard: �Hey what are you doing here? You don�t belong up here.�

The guard goes to hit the person but the person does a quick kick sending the guard down the person looks at him the guard flips up and a brief fight starts but the person kicks him off the 14 story building onto a fence impaling him and killing him instantly blood flies everywhere. He than activates a control device on his glove and his entire body goes invisible some sort of stealth device he than makes his way down to the ground than enters the building he takes the elevator up to the 14th floor he enters and finds nude women all around he pulls out four small balls and tosses them to the floor they explode and everyone goes to sleep. He than makes his way to the wall and finds the entrance but there is no way to open it up so he pulls out a small bit of C-4 he than pushes a button and it explodes knocking out the power for the whole floor he goes in using night vision it looks like to be a part of him he sees there are three guards they approach him he grabs a guy before they start shooting they shoot the guy he than pulls out a knife and throws it at one of the guards hitting him in the neck killing him instantly while they are shooting at him he rolls in the ground and grabs the first guards gun and shoots another guard in the head brain tissue goes flying he than jumps behind the last guard and breaks his neck while everyone in the room is freaking out he knocks them out with the same kind of knock out balls he used in the first room he than breaks open the wall save and pulls out a chip he than accesses the com system in his outfit.

Tactical Unit 1: �Tactical unit one to HQ I have the unit marked chip-102z01 ready for pickup.�

HQ: �Pickup will be there in two minutes be at the pickup spot.�

Tactical Unit 1: �Understood.�

He leaves with what he came for going back to the pick up spot.

To Be Continued . . .


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PostThu May 01, 2003 2:09 pm    

Ahh... Very good parts!

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PostThu May 01, 2003 2:52 pm    

Good job.Now don't keep us waiting as long as last time.

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PostThu May 01, 2003 6:38 pm    

^excatly Great Job

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PostSat May 10, 2003 10:55 am    

Chapter 22: Fighter

After his mission in Madipoor, China the Tactical unit is back at the base he is in a special unit having drugs pumped into him his eyes are closed but he�s not asleep he is more like a trance.

Professor Clyde: �How is our subject doing?�

Scientist: �He did really good considering this was his first mission out he did have a case of overheating though that�s why we are also pumping some cooling liquid into him.�

Professor Clyde: �Very good how about the chip we had him acquire for us?�

Scientist: �Oh yeah, you are referring to chip-102z01 we are implanting it into his brain right now if this chip works like the Chinese said it would it should augment all of his bodily stats making him faster, stronger, more endurant to pain.�

The professor and the scientist both go to the window and look at the tactical unit the other workers cut a hole in the back of the units head inplanting the chip into his brain they than put the part of skull that was cut out back on and almost instantly the area heals quickly.

Professor Clyde: �Very good get him prepped for his next mission.�

Scientist: �Yes professor.�

A few hours later in a Mission Room they Download the mission objectives into the Unit though a implant in the back of his neck.

Mission Captain: �Do you understand your objectives?�

Tactical Unit 1: �Yes�

Mission Captain: �Good�

A few hours later the stealth plane arrives in NY the unit is dropped in a alley he isn�t in a disguise he looks like a normal person he makes his way to the area that used to be ground zero he hears a scream in a nearby alley he walks over there the professor and mission captain can see what he sees he has a camera implanted into his eyes he sees a woman is being raped by two guys.

Professor Clyde: �Disregard the woman she isn�t important continue on the mission.�

The tactical unit does not reply right away like he should he continues to watch the woman being raped.

Professor Clyde: �Tactical Unit 1 continue the mission disregard the woman.�

Tactical Unit 1: �Understood moving out.�

The tactical unit leaves the guys continue to rape the woman he heads to the area that one of the towers use to be at he scans the ground and sees there is a secret door there he looks around and sees there is no one near by he opens it up and goes in there is a big room it�s clear the power has been off for a while he uses infra red to look around and he comes to a giant safe he puts in the code and it opens up there is a weapon in it he picks it up it�s the size of a shotgun but it looks advanced.

Tactical Unit 1: �I have made the pick up I am now heading back to the meeting point.�

Mission Captain: �Understood we will be there in three minutes.�

Tactical Unit 1: �Understood�

The tactical unit heads to the meeting point but the two guys. Leave the alley they see him.

Thug one: �Hey give us all your money.�

The unit doesn�t reply.

Thug two: �Hey you deaf he said give us all your money.�

One thug pulls out a knife the other pulls out a gun. The unit scans them and goes into fighting mode the first thug stabs him right in the chest blood squirts out.

Thug one: �Now you die.�

The thug laughs but the unit grabs him by the back of the head and slams him into a brick wall his face splatters all over it he died instantly.

Professor Clyde: �Break off the fight and report to the extraction point do you hear me?�

The unit doesn�t reply.

Thug two: �Ahh crap.�

The thug unloads all eight bullets into the unit and it doesn�t phase him the unit than grabs him and punches him in his back and litterly pulls out his spinal cord he dies a few seconds later the unit than goes to the extraction point.

To Be Continued . . .



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PostSat May 10, 2003 6:06 pm    

wow. good chapter.

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PostSun May 11, 2003 6:15 pm    

yes, great chapter


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