a never ending life long passion

PicardsTrueLove · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 9:13 pm**

Oh no! Thta's awful!!

Josi Rockholt · **Wed Apr 02, 2003 8:51 am**

Please continue.What happened to Tyler?Oh,this is a great story.

Starbuck · **Wed Apr 02, 2003 6:08 pm**

ok ok a little more

"Tyler!" Rebeca screamed. when suddenly she heard a loud bang. " I'm ok Becky." Tyler replied as he broke down the door. "C'mon! We gotta hurry!" he shouted as he picked her up and carried her down the stairs and took her out the back door. "Don't worry." he said gently "I'm taking you to my house." "But..." Rebeca said but her words were drowned out as he planted a kiss on her soft lips.

Thomas · **Thu Apr 03, 2003 10:22 am**

Great.

Chakotays Angel · **Thu Apr 03, 2003 6:13 pm**

Beautiful Work

Voy_Girl · **Fri Apr 04, 2003 2:47 pm**

Good!!!!

Starbuck · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 10:19 am**

some more

As Tyler kissed her, Rebeca's heart raced. But something went wrong her stepmother caught her and tyler kissing! "you little wench!" her step mother shouted at her "you keep away from me!" Rebeca shouted feeling safer with tyler was with her. But her stepmother hit Tyler so hard he was nocked out and grabbed Rebeca, dragging her back into the burning house. but this time she tied Rebeca's hands behind her back using a belt and pushed her to the floor in her room slammed the door shut,locked it, and set her door and floor on fire.

Thomas · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 12:07 pm**

How evil!

Voy_Girl · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 1:27 pm**

Awful!!!

janewaykat · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 5:51 pm**

That's horrible! (not your writing

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Josi Rockholt · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 9:02 pm**

Evil stepmother.

Abby diann · **Sat Apr 05, 2003 10:25 pm**

that is so mean . but this is a great story keep it up.

Starbuck · **Thu Apr 10, 2003 5:47 pm**

something a little different a short poem that was found in 'Beckey's' diary

when the night sky takes over the beautiful bright
when the cold north wind blows and enchants the night
when the howl of a wolf gives all a fright
thats when the sky takes over the night

Abby diann · **Fri Apr 11, 2003 5:39 am**

wow this is good w all need more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thomas · **Fri Apr 11, 2003 10:33 am**

That's a nice poem.

Starbuck · **Sat Apr 12, 2003 6:42 am**

thank you every one a little more

"Help" Rebeca cried throug her tears, as she slowly moved towards her window struggling to her feet. "Oh, its hopeless" she began to sit down as the flames engulfed the area around her, and she slowly began to suffocate to death.

I know its not a lot! but i've been really busy!

Voy_Girl · **Sat Apr 12, 2003 2:18 pm**

What a horrible way to die! Continue please!

PicardsTrueLove · **Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:17 pm**

Gah!!! Death!! NOOOOO!!

Abby diann · **Sat Apr 12, 2003 8:21 pm**

wow come on she has to live!!!

janewaykat · **Sat Apr 12, 2003 8:45 pm**

Dying!! NOOOOOO!!!!!

Starbuck · **Sun Apr 13, 2003 11:20 am**

a little more

as rebeca slowly began to accept the fact that she was going to die she heard the sounds of sirens. the firemen were going to rescue her! but all her hope faded when the cheif said that it would be too riskey to enter and left leaving rebeca to die.

PicardsTrueLove · **Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:08 pm**

Gah!!!

Abby diann · **Sun Apr 13, 2003 2:19 pm**

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voy_Girl · **Sun Apr 13, 2003 2:58 pm**

I agree with both previous comments! Where's her love????

Starbuck · **Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:39 am**

her love is unconcisous (sp?) her evil step knocked him out