a never ending life long passion

Starbuck · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:13 pm a never ending life long passion**

this is my story of a young girl who falls in love with a young man who she believes is her soul mate

Starbuck · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:17 pm**

"he loves me. he loves me not. he loves me. he loves me oh." rebecca sighed as the petles on her dasy ran out. "maybe another dasy" she thought. "Becky!!" her stepmother quacked, "get in here now before i tan your hide!!" again rebeca sighed "comming mother" and ran off leaving her daisy chain behind.

PicardsTrueLove · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:23 pm**

So sweet!

Chakotays Angel · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 7:49 pm**

Very cute and sweet

janewaykat · **Fri Mar 28, 2003 8:32 pm**

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

write more!

Starbuck · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 10:45 am**

here's some more

"well," her stepmother barked, "what took you so long!" Rebeca picked up her little brother knowing her stepmother would never hit her while she held her precious Johny " I was in the medow looking for a spot to have a picnic with the children." Rebeca replied as she blushed knowing her stepmother would see right through the lie.

PicardsTrueLove · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 10:51 am**

oooo. This is interesting!

Thomas · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 10:59 am**

Hmmm.... yeah.

Josi Rockholt · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 11:22 am**

interesting.please write more.

Starbuck · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 12:06 pm**

ok heres just a little more

"oh you were picking picnic spots" her stepmother mocked "then why are you covered in daisy petles?" in fear Rebeca looked down and saw half her now dress covered in them "oh!" she exclaimed in fear her stepmother grabed Johny put him back in his high chair and grabed Rebeca " I told you to never pick the daisys for that stupid game!" she draged Rebeca into her room and locked the door "you'll stay in there until you can listen properly and..." she paused "no i have a better idea i'll leave you in there until thursday" her stepmother said wickedly "But today is only Saturday!" Rebeca exclaimed in fear

Josi Rockholt · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 12:56 pm**

wow.Really good.

PicardsTrueLove · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 1:53 pm**

Oooh! Evil people

Voy_Girl · **Sat Mar 29, 2003 2:31 pm**

Mean stepmother! But the plot is so good!

Thomas · **Sun Mar 30, 2003 4:13 am**

We gotta bust her out.

Starbuck · **Sun Mar 30, 2003 10:52 am**

some more

"Thursday!" Rebeca exclaimed. "Thats right Thursday," her stepmother began, "and you can forget about seeing that Johansan boy..." that Johansan boy Rebeca thought dreamily Tyler Johansan the love of her life she spent all her time thinking about Tyler Johansan. she knew she had to find a way to get out before Tyler got a girlfriend but little did she know that Tyler spent as much time thinking about her as she did about him

PicardsTrueLove · **Sun Mar 30, 2003 11:23 am**

Oooooooo "Love is in the air..."

Voy_Girl · **Sun Mar 30, 2003 2:31 pm**

Indeed:D

Starbuck · **Mon Mar 31, 2003 10:03 pm**

here's a little more

all of the sudden her stepmother screamed "FIRE!!" oh no! thougt Rebeca "let me out!" she screamed pounding on her locked door. "no way i said till thursday and i never go back on my word." her stepmother replied. once her stepmother and her children were outside Tyler came over and looked around "where's Rebeca?!?!" he asked in alarm. " I couldn't find her!" her stepmother lied. "I'll go get her!" he said but her stepmother grabbed his arm "NO!" she screamed "I called the fire department their on their way now!" she lied again. with all his might he broke away from Rebeca's stepmother and plunged into the house which was compleetly engulfed in flames hoping the Rebeca was still alive

Thomas · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:51 am**

A little weird, but good.

Voy_Girl · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 1:28 pm**

That really is an evil stepmother!

Voy_Girl · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 1:50 pm**

Fic of the Week, w. 14

Starbuck · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 6:59 pm**

here is some more and im honored that my lousy story got FOTW

"Rebeca!" Tyler shouted hoping for an answer when he suddenly herd a faint "HELP!" "REBECA! IM HERE WHERE ARE YOU!" Tyler shouted "im in my room!" Rebeca shouted back. "im on my way!" he shouted as he bolted up the stairs. when he came to rebecas room he found the door locked. "I can''t open it Becca" he said. 'Becca' she thought he has his own little name for me! " My stepmother locked me in and i think she set the fire!" "WHAT?!?!" Tyler replied and then he screamed in pain as a burning support beam fell on him.

janewaykat · **Tue Apr 01, 2003 7:16 pm**

^its not lousy

its really good

harry_kim · Captain Joined: 10 Dec 2002 Posts: 665 Location: Voyager

Yes, 'tis quite interesting