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Voy_Girl
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| Chakotays Angel wrote: | No its not going to be a holographic baby  The Hirogens are on the planet looking for a prey that got away from them. |
And the Voy crew is so lucky to be on the same place at the same time... 
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Chakotays Angel
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| Wed Mar 19, 2003 7:22 pm |
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A small part of the section.....
�B�Elanna are you ok.� Tom cried out as he ran toward her. B�Elanna looked around to see who was calling her name. Tom was about to grab her arm when all of the sudden he was struck from behind by Seven with a rock.
Any one have any ideas on how seven will say she is sorry?
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janewaykat
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| Wed Mar 19, 2003 8:08 pm |
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good job! (nope I'm a horrible writer  )
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Thomas
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| Thu Mar 20, 2003 11:12 am |
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 We'll have to wait and see.
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Voy_Girl
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| Thu Mar 20, 2003 3:33 pm |
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Good... 7 starts crying like a little girl... j/k  (NEVERMIND that!!)
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Mon Mar 24, 2003 10:48 am |
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Seven becomes self destructive b/c she can't say sorry and turns her guilt inward: Janeway has to snap her out of it. (just a thought)
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Chakotays Angel
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| Wed Mar 26, 2003 2:42 pm |
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Here's alittle more
Seven, why in the hell did you do that to Tom?� B�Elanna yelled. �I thought he was another Hirogen coming to attack you.� Seven replied through her tears .B�Elanna replied back� Dose he look like one of those killers to you.� �No.� replied seven in a whisper. B�Elanna then reached and touched seven on the arm an spoke � I forgive you ,for hitting Tom on the head beside you did something that I felt like doing to him for months.� Seven started to laugh as she looked down at Tom�s body that lay at her feet. Chakotay and Kathryn came down to where the two women were kneeling over Tom�s body.
Sorry been working on other things
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Voy_Girl
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| Wed Mar 26, 2003 3:30 pm |
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Need more of this story...
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Thomas
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 11:16 am |
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I like it.
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janewaykat
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 7:47 pm |
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^ me too
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| Thu Mar 27, 2003 8:57 pm |
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keep on writing i can't write stories im just a lowly poet
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Chakotays Angel
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 1:27 pm |
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I'm sorry for this being so late just alot has happen to me in the past few weeks. Please enjoy 
" He is going to have one hell of a head ache.� Chakotay said as he handed Kathryn the Tricorder. Kathryn kneeled asking B�Elanna to give her a hand by supporting Tom�s head will she scanned him. Tom was starting coming to as Kathryn was finishing the medical scan. Chakotay asked Tom �Do you remember what happen to you?� �I remember running toward B�Elanna then feeling something hit me behind the head.� Tom replied as he got up off the ground. Seven was about to say something to Tom but Kathryn stopped her. �Why don�t the rest of you go back to camp, I want to talk to Seven for abit alone?�� Kathryn said with a worried tone. �Are you sure it is safe for the two of you to be alone out here?� Replied Chakotay as he placed his hand on Kathryn shoulder.
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 4:08 pm |
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^loooooooooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee ittttttttttt
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Chakotays Angel
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:24 pm |
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Thanks
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janewaykat
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:37 pm |
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^wannnnttttt moooorrreee!!!!!!!!!Very good
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Tue Apr 08, 2003 6:48 pm |
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lol Yay! he he more more more!!
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Thomas
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| Wed Apr 09, 2003 10:21 am |
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Nice.
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Voy_Girl
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| Wed Apr 09, 2003 1:21 pm |
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..Finally a new part.
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Chakotays Angel
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| Fri Apr 11, 2003 7:27 pm |
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more for you to read,
Seven looked at her commanding officer and spoke �Commander there is no need to worry about the Captain.� Chakoaty replied back to seven; �Anything happens to her, I�ll confine myself to the Brig.��Kathryn replied �Chakotay, if anything happens you will hear us screaming!� �What is she pregnant or something?� said B�Elanna in a joking tone. Everyone turned to look at B�Elanna with a shocking expression.
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janewaykat
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| Fri Apr 11, 2003 8:48 pm |
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...and the plot thickens very good
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PicardsTrueLove
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| Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:52 am |
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^^Discovery!!!!
| Chakotays Angel wrote: | | I'm sorry for this being so late just alot has happen to me in the past few weeks. Please enjoy |
What's going on honey?
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Chakotays Angel
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| Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:56 pm |
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It was just a few things that were going crazy.
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Chakotays Angel
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| Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:07 pm |
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new for my fans......
�To be honesty B�Elanna, Yes I�m pregnant!� Kathryn replied. Tom slapped Chakotay on the back and said, �Congratulations Chief, never thought of you as the fatherhood type?� B�Elanna said �Oh I�m so happy for the both of you.� as she gave Kathryn a big hug. �Captain, I wish you and the Commander well with the baby.� said Seven. �Seven, you can call me and Commander by our first names.� Kathryn said as she took Seven�s hands in hers.
more to come later
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janewaykat
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| Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:27 pm |
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Great Job!!!
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Voy_Girl
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| Mon Apr 14, 2003 1:43 pm |
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Very nice addition...
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