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Mon Mar 03, 2003 8:18 am "Framed", Voyager story. |
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Yes. It's another one.
Title: Framed
Author: Voy_Girl ([email protected])
Written: 1 March 2003 (c)
Codes: J, Tu, C
POV: Janeway
Author’s Note: The title is 'framed', as in the outside of a precious picture, not in the meaning
‘busted’.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Star Trek, not any of the characters. I have just borrowed
Kathryn Janeway, Tuvok and Chakotay during the making of this story.
This story however, is my work, and that I own.
Short summary: Janeway and a mishap. Set in season 1.
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"Framed" by Voy_Girl
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I should have known there was something strange with that plant. Even though I really did not
have time to, I had to stop and touch its leaves, as soft as the finest silk. Even though the rash
did not appear until the following morning, I had already had a persistent misgiving the whole,
long night.
And so it was morning. A clouded warmth begun to hover and shiver, around everything that
was alive. That planet would be a good catch for anyone who is lost, looking for a safe place
to settle down on. It is actually uninhibited, friendly, welcoming. Its ground free to be walked
on by anyone willing to call it home.
But it will not be home to me. And not to my away team. We are on our way back to our real
home. We might have a whole lot of mischief, fights and private crisis to take care of before
we are even half-ways. But we will make it. That is what every single person onboard Voyager
have set its mind to, and if someone still carry doubts I will make them all believe.
I am not about to let my crew down.
I must have scratched my appearing rash unconsciously, wrapped in my sweet drowsiness,
because Tuvok was immediately at my side. He took a good look at my left wrist, scrutinizing
the pink erysipelas. I was fully awake, and without a word we both knew that I was developing
an allergy towards the plant I so gently had stroked the evening before; a second of contact
was all it took.
In certain moments, such as when Voyager is under fire, I am known to keep my head cool.
But regarding the simplest thing, I could not restrain myself. If I had not touched that
lecherous, lucious dark green plant, I would not have had those fuzzy spots appearing,
disappearing and re-appearing before my sole eyes.
The ground is so hard beneath me. Even the soft blanket tucked under my head seems to
stiffen. Before I close my eyes, I wonder who came up with the idea to take the shuttle down
to the planet. Who had to take a shortcut through the unknown forest. Who wanted to sleep
outside, as close as possible to the unique nature. I realize those ideas were all mine.
I guess I brought only Tuvok and Chakotay to support our team spirit. After all, we are the
three highest ranked Starfleet officers in the whole quadrant. It had only been a few months,
and I still did not know where I had the former Maquis leader. I did not know whether he
wanted to be my friend or if he was just clenching his teeth to pull through each and every day,
filled with rules and regulations.
And so the fuzzy dots reached a higher level until they plastered my view. I instinctively felt
that I became paler and paler as the minutes fled. The awakening sounds of many animals
sounded more high-pitched, the scent of dew, soil and fleeing night deepened and became
more intoxicating. I was developing a fever.
A rustle of feet that left. A nearby stream of running water filled my aching head. I could hear
the concealed source of the mysterious liquid. Seducing colors bounced, danced in front of me.
Raindrops which possessed all the colors of the rainbow, and all the shades in-between. They
rolled down my cheeks like tears of silver. They covered my forehead. Soothed me.
Rustle. "The rash has spread." I could hear Chakotay’s soft voice declare. I knew he was right
beside me, but the sound floated out into bits and pieces. I could not feel his touch on my arm,
but I knew it was there.
"She is enduring a high fever." Tuvok stated, oh, so calmly. Also he, my dear old friend was
close beside me, but still not close enough.
Something cool against my sore wrist. I was glad I felt something located to a special place.
The cool stayed pressed around my arm; it did not pound its way through my body and
erupting blood system. It soothes better than a million raindrops. For a moment I was
convinced that I had actually dipped my hand and underarm into an ice-cold pond, filled with
exotic fishes which placed soft, sweet kisses on my pain.
Some time later, a time span which I don’t know, I opened my stinging eyes. To my sweet joy
the spots were gone.
"Commander Chakotay and I united our separate knowledge to create a remedy. I believe it
will help." Tuvok was bent over me, undaunted he kneeled in the dirt.
I nodded slowly. I did feel a little better. Not the least since the two men had created
something together. Together. With Tuvok supporting my back, I sat up. The sun was already
high; it was almost noon.
When I glanced down at my left arm, I saw that all flesh between my elbow and the fingers had
been covered in a scarlet red mixture with green chunks in it. I did not dare to ask for the
ingredients, I doubt I ever will.
"Are you feeling any better?" Chakotay asked and looked up from the tricorder he studied,
posing as the survival expert of the group where he sat on a rough rock.
I assured him that I definitely did while I lay down to rest my heavy head on the lumpy blanket
again. I savored his concerned appearance; to keep and remember. He cared.
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Thomas Pool Princess
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 8:35 am |
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Wow.
Now I must dash and go back to school.
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 1:46 pm |
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:23 pm |
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Is that good or bad?
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Seven of Nine Sammie's Mammy
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:28 pm |
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good... still not recovered, though
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:34 pm |
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Recovered from what?
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Seven of Nine Sammie's Mammy
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 3:14 pm |
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The details you put in it... being such a fantastic writer, your stories leave me speechless
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Mon Mar 03, 2003 3:16 pm |
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Aww... thank you. I've always put details into everything, I guess.
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tom_88_2 Commodore
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Sat Mar 08, 2003 5:49 pm |
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good story
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Sun Mar 09, 2003 3:18 pm |
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Thanks.
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Chakotays Angel Captain
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Sun Mar 09, 2003 4:54 pm |
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Another Fantastic piece Cheers to you
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Mon Mar 10, 2003 2:54 pm |
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Many thanks!
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Lxe keep dreaming
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Mon Mar 10, 2003 4:01 pm |
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i love it Ann , beautiful, brilliant work.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
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Tue Mar 11, 2003 10:13 am |
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Good job.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Tue Mar 11, 2003 3:39 pm |
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Many thanks you two..
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tom_88_2 Commodore
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Tue Mar 11, 2003 10:40 pm |
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will u make a sequil. I know i can't spell.
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Wed Mar 12, 2003 3:29 pm |
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tom_88_2 wrote: | will u make a sequil. I know i can't spell. |
Hmm... I don't know. If I come up with an interesting plot, I might..
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