Mind- J/C Finally added more....#6!!

Captain Leah Manzer · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 12:23 am**

*sings* I have MORE!

No one came back. After talking- bonding with these people, who had saved her life, they were just gone. Rebbeca sat on her bed, quietly, just wishing the hours would pass quicker, and she wouldn�t even move to get food or water. She hardly noticed that there was no one left in the cell, but driven with confusion and sadness that she just assumed that they were never really there.
Her mind was jumbled and confused, still filled with sad images of her family.
Rebbeca ran over to the small basin of water and threw towards the force field.
�I hate you!� she yelled while running at full speed against the force field. Finally she blacked out, forgetting all of her misery.

Chapter 6

The sky would have to dark if it were not for the stars. It would be too dark to see ten meters in front of you. It was that type of night- no sounds were heard, other then the light chirping of the foreign bugs. There she sat. It was her favorite spot to be, especially at this time of night. She found it the first day she arrived at this �Rehabilitation Facility�, while she was walking. It was a long, old tree that grew over a small creek. It looked as if it was reaching out towards the town, hoping that it could join with the people there. There were two knots that made a perfect seating place for her to lye back and gaze at the unfamiliar stars.
Many of the days she had no thoughts, so she just sat there staring. No thoughts because she had no life. THIS was her life. Months ago, her life was filled with much confusion, and she had many mysteries. Now none existed, she had nothing to think about. Today was different. She thought of those days many months ago when she was tortured so horribly. The name that comforter her, that brought her though some much of that time.
�Chakotay.� She uttered to the wind. The name still meant something; she felt something that could not be described.
Her thoughts drifted to the conversation she over heard that day. They talked about her, �the Present�. No one talked about who she was going to be presented to, but it was if this person was holy. Or so completely woven into these people�s culture that there is no distention between him, a religious figure, and some man who just thinks he�s Special.
The cool breeze caressed her skin as she fell asleep on her tree.
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lol I corrected all the mistakes in the rest of the story but I'm too lazy to accually put them up here. If you want I can send you the whole story via email or something...

janewaykat · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 1:06 pm**

Hey VG aint the only one still reading it

It's very good though

Voy_Girl · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 4:01 pm**

Are you done?

Seven of Nine · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 5:17 pm**

She can't be! What happens to Seven? And Janeway? And Voyager? And what else happens to Rebbeca?

Captain Leah Manzer · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 7:34 pm**

lol ahh... you THINK I'm done....

lol

Voy_Girl · **Wed Feb 12, 2003 3:19 pm**

Prove us wrong...

I'll just turn my back and leave you with a pen and some sheets of paper for a while...

Captain Leah Manzer · **Wed Feb 12, 2003 3:37 pm**

urg... do I have too... wel ok.. lol I'l be back in 30 min somthing.... ANYTHING... lol

Voy_Girl · **Thu Feb 13, 2003 3:47 pm**

That's the spirit!

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:36 pm**

Gah....I'm sorryI havnt posted but I fell like the story is getting really thin...any Ideas?

Matrix881 · Captain Joined: 19 Feb 2003 Posts: 520

i'm sure you can come up with some good ideas

Voy_Girl · **Sun Mar 02, 2003 3:48 pm**

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sun Mar 02, 2003 6:48 pm**

well that would make sence

Voy_Girl · **Mon Mar 03, 2003 8:12 am**

Let us know if you come up with something...

torrenttrue · Crewman Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 3 Location: Wisconsin

I need more to this! Are you going to be making a book? This is really great. I guess books are the only way to keep Voyager goin any more.

If you want, I could proof-read what you've done so far. I am very good at it. Let me know. Where can I see the book in progress as a whole?

Keep up the great work!

[email protected]

Captain Leah Manzer · **Tue Mar 11, 2003 1:46 pm**

Wow thanks! That would be amazing! Here I'll send you the Revised version that i have been working on and correcting. I'll send it to you next time your online.

To everyone else. I'm on March Break1 YEH!! and yeh I should set aside a day to work on it! Which i will do! So expect some more...

Voy_Girl · **Tue Mar 11, 2003 3:36 pm**

Good... And lucky you who have a break now...

prayerful7 · **Fri Jun 20, 2003 1:54 pm**

The story is totally awesome!!! Write more!! Please!!!

Josi Rockholt · **Sat Jun 21, 2003 11:06 am**

I just read the entire thing.Great job.Now,where's the rest?

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sat Jun 21, 2003 1:25 pm**

Errr............*runs away* its errr..... Comming that it! lol really I am working on it but I'm at a total stop because even I dont know whats happeneing next!

Voy_Girl · **Sat Jun 21, 2003 4:16 pm**

Hmm... Now I was fooled. I thought this story finally continued...

katelynjnwy · **Tue Jun 24, 2003 8:28 pm Help**

Must read more, write more. Please. Dying to know more.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sat Jun 28, 2003 2:39 am**

Months-weeks,-years, they all blended into one. It was so hard to keep track of the time since she had been gone. The whole in his heart told him an eternity, but the constant computer reminder told him it was only 6 months.
Over the months this whole had grow, finally absorbing the last of his emotions. Of course then continued to search of her, and Seven, but now, Chakotay had to make a decision- probably one of the hardest decisions in his life.
�Commander?� a voice interrupted his deep thoughts.
He looked up at a young ensign sitting at the OPS station.
�Err, I don�t know if I�m reading this right, but were being hailed�from the planet.�
Chakotay look at the view screen, longing for a portrait of Kathryn to appear.
�On screen�
She looked so different that he hardly recognized her. Her hair was longer and down. A blonde fringe covered her forehead, and a smile appeared on her face as she saw the crew of Voyager.
�Commander,� Her voice seemed forced, as she was unable to believe what she was saying.
�Seven,� Chakotay responded, seeming as stunned at the rest of the crew, �We picked up your signal months ago, but we couldn�t find you or the Captain. How did you contact us?�
�I�ll answer all your questions as soon as I get aboard, but you need to help me. I am sending my coordinates to you right now, but there is a force field all around the planet. Apparently they want to keep us from getting out. I have the shield frequency, and you will need to input in with in the next 30 minutes because it changes in intervals.�
The crew set to work, as the were trained to do, putting out the shock of finding Seven after so many months out of their minds.
�Well be there soon,� Chakotay didn�t know what to say, so he closed the channel and turned to Tom. �Set a course for those coordinates.�
Chakotay looked down at his small view screen avoiding the eye contact of any of his crew. For one brief moment he released all his emotions-all his pain, then he quickly hid it away again. Saving it for when he would see Kathryn. I hope.

Voy_Girl · **Sun Jun 29, 2003 5:09 am**

See what a lil' pressure can do? For being so long in-between, it's a great new part.

Captain Leah Manzer · **Sun Jun 29, 2003 12:38 pm**

lol thank you kindly.... I'm working on the next part.......................................NOW!