Fantasy Story

Voy_Girl · **Sat Jan 18, 2003 3:02 pm**

Hope you start soon...

Robin · **Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:36 am**

Yes. I will post another part today!! I shall write more today or my name isnt Korath of Timoran!

(And it isnt

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Robin · **Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:30 am**

Ok... the next part! And i wrote it within an hour of the previous post

"Life", Jon wrote "is a series of lessons, each one to teach new, with the best ones for last." Although what he didnt know, was that he'd be learning quite a bit, soon.
The next day, he came back at night to the tavern, to meet Cerwath again, and hear his stories. Cerwath was seated alone in the corener speaking to two hooded Gentlemen. Jon could have sworn they looked like the hooded mages he had heard about and the mysterious paladins. Being polite by nature, he didnt want to disturb them, and so he sat down on the table.
As the wine in the air drifted slowly through his head, his mind felt free, free to think, free to wonder, and a beautiful stimulating place this indeed was!
To hear the men sing old drinking songs, to see the bartender tell old passed on stories and to see the beautiful barmaid....
After some time of thinking about the existence of such fantasies, he suddenly awakened, to find the tavern much quieter. A few people very still there, but who he didnt see was Cerwath. Cerwath wasnt there.
He looked around and outside in the village, but couldnt see Cerwath.
He asked the bartender and the tavernmaid "Cerwath! Have you seen him? Where did he go?"
None could say much, except that he left with the two hooded men.
He searched the village, he searched nearby, he asked the village people but cerwath was nowhere to be found! This all seemed rather strange so he went home to bed. To continue his life of Jon the dreamer.
Next day again, he arose suddenly. As if someone slapped him on his face, or like a dream abruptly ended. His mind was troubled and thoughts garbled.
He went out to look for Cerwath again....
He even inquired where his room was, but the tavern owner said the room was booked for 2 weeks in advance but Cerwath hasnt entered since the previous night.
All this was fine, Afeter all this was just a stranger he didnt even know very well, the strager might have left, He thought.
But what worried him was why so abrupt? And more importantly, "Why does my head feel so heavy and afraid?", "Why Why Why? Why am I so upset about Cerwath leaving?"
This he wouldnt find out..... Untill that evening.
A fine evening it was, but Jon was sad and tired, strolling along in the park. Later sitting on a bench and looking at the birds. He was feeling better now, although his head still felt funny, like as if someone was speaking to him in his mind! "This is Absurd, Of course!" He said.
Ironic, it is that the very evening he would find out so much, and learn so many lessons, was the time he thought that this was absurd.
Little did he know what this evening had in store for him.

I love to leave the story hanging like that

Now will you write the next part or shall I cappyD ?

I think I have a good idea to start the main plot, or you can write with a cool idea to make up the plot..

harry_kim · Captain Joined: 10 Dec 2002 Posts: 665 Location: Voyager

Ah, good story!

Robin · **Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:27 pm**

Really? Thanks

Voy_Girl · **Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:09 pm**

Good chap!!

Captain Dappet · **Tue Jan 21, 2003 11:04 am**

Well...Since you have a good idea to start the plot, Robin. I think you should do it.

Robin · **Tue Jan 21, 2003 12:44 pm**

Okey Dokey.
I'll write the next part in 1-2 days

Seven of Nine · **Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:04 am**

This is the current Fic of the Week... when PSP starts working properly again I'm going to do an award for it

Robin · **Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:08 am**

Whats PSP ?

And I'll definately post the next part of the story today

Captain Dappet · **Mon Jan 27, 2003 1:34 pm**

Change of plans. I'LL wirte the next part

Time passed as he sat on the bench, thinking.
He sat there and suddenly, darkness had fallen over the village.
Maybe it was nothing, but this night seemed darker and more terrifying than the last. There were strange sounds around him.
Sounds that even if he tried, he couldnt tell what it was. Echoes. Echoes in the night.
Empty voices, and tormented sighs.
Jon was panicked, such noises were not of this world. He ran. Ran for home. For the safe haven. At home, his dad would protect him.
He didnt get home though, he was suddenly dragged behind a tree by a robed man. The robed man sealed Jon's mouth with his hand.
"Be quiet. If you scream, you'll make things worse." the man said and removed his hand from Jon's mouth.
"W-what do you want?" Jon managed to squeeze out.
"Listen, very carefully Jon Clegane. You must leave the village. Look for him. That is your current path, you must look for him. You must look for him, or we all will perish." A light blinded Jon, and when he could see again, the man was gone...
"Look for him?" he asked himself "Who?"
He didnt think for a long time when it hit him, it was quite obvious.
"Cerwath! I must look for Cerwath! I must somehow sneak off tomorrow, because mum and dad will never let me go...Yes...Tomorrow..."

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Robin · **Mon Jan 27, 2003 1:41 pm**

great! just what I had in mind!

Voy_Girl · **Mon Jan 27, 2003 3:18 pm**

Very Good chapter...

Seven of Nine · **Tue Jan 28, 2003 5:16 am**

Great

Well done on being Fic of the Week

Robin · **Tue Jan 28, 2003 6:56 am**

Thanks..

Did you like the story?

Robin · **Tue Feb 04, 2003 9:14 am**

The next part will be posted by tomorrow.

CappyD hasnt been online much unfortunately...

If he doesnt come, I'll post tomorrow

Voy_Girl · **Tue Feb 04, 2003 3:33 pm**

As long as someone does..

Captain Dappet · **Wed Feb 05, 2003 10:09 am**

I've been ill, sorry guys. I was trying to think of a good continuation but I cant think of one...So I would appriciate if you could write it, Robin.

Robin · **Wed Feb 05, 2003 11:42 am**

Okay, I'll post the next part

I'll do it in 1 day

Captain Dappet · **Fri Feb 07, 2003 1:59 pm**

Robin managed to convince me to write the next part, since he's busy with his site...I'll write it sometime soon...

Frosty · **Fri Feb 07, 2003 10:41 pm**

Interesting stuff, write more! *loads cat musket*

Captain Dappet · **Sun Feb 09, 2003 1:40 pm**

He woke up in the morning after.
"Today's the day, then..." he thought. He was so energic to go yesterday but today...He just didnt want to go...He had a feeling that he would miss the little town so much.
But he had to go. The robed man said so. He had to go find Cerwath.

He packed a bag yesterday night when his parents were sleeping.
And they were still sleeping. It was early, the sun had just gone up above the hills. It was a nice morning.

He took his bag and carefully snuck down the stairs, at the door he took a walking stick and a jacket and in the kitchen a knife. It could come in handy.

And so he left. Why, he didnt really know. Where, he had know idea.
He stood outside the door.
"Blasts...I dont have any idea which way to go." he whispered to himself.
He thought a minute, and then remembered that everything interesting seemed to wait for him in the East. Galant�r, The Horsemen of G�rind�r, the Evil and the Good...Everything...
"Then its clear...I'll head towards the East." he thought and set out on the road to the East...

Voy_Girl · **Sun Feb 09, 2003 3:46 pm**

That's good!

Voy_Girl · **Sun Feb 09, 2003 3:47 pm**

That's good!

Robin · **Mon Feb 10, 2003 1:44 am**

Ok, now Im in the mood to write more.

Jon started to walk out, towards the east. Following the small path, that leads out of the village.
After walking for an hour, he saw a Temple. He had heard of such religious temples, but never been so far out of the village.

So, he asked a man outside the temple, about the temple.
"Excuse Me", he said, "Csn you tell me somethin about this temple?"
The man replied " Something? I can tell you everything! As you know, we worship the 3 faces in Silmaria, or the three Gods. Kor, the God of War, Senaedrin, The Goddess of Healing and Henne the child God. All children in the cities, study in the temple of Henne, with the prests there, known as the Children of Henne. When they grow up, the boys study with the Brother's Of Kor in the Temple of Kor, and the girls study with the Sisters of Senaedrin. Thus, a child is religiously as well as academically tutored. This Ofcourse is the temple of Senaedrin. Here you may enter and take blessings of the priests, and be heled by them"

"Hmmmm... Interesting, I shall Enter" Thought Jon.
Jon enters the temple and sees many people. A monk comes up and ask him if he requires healing. "No, Thank You" Said Jon, Smiling at her. He had a look around and then left.
"Now only if finding Cewrath were as easy!" thought Jon

He continued, to walk down the path, down and out of all familiar terretory.