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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 12:59 pm    

I should review soon...just haven't got around to it yet

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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 10:37 am    

lol


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 3:25 pm    

I scrawled something in that review box... Don't dare to go to review history and check...


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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 4:12 am    

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"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! HELP!!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! MY PRECIOUS!!!!"
"NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! OH NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MY PRECIOUS AND WONDERFUL PRIZED POSSESION!!!"
"MMMMMMYYYYYYYYY HHHHHHAAAAAAAIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRR!!!!! NNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!! MY BEAUTIFUL HHHHAAAAAIIIIIRRRRRR!!!! I SPENT 2 HOURS ON IT NOW ITS RUINED!!!!! MY HAIR!!!!"
"GGGGGGGGEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! I NEED GEL!!!! GGGEEEEEELLLLLL!!!!! I DIDN'T BRING MY GEL!!! QUICK!!!! TOWEL!!!!! GGEEEEELLLLL!!!! TTOOOOOOWWWWWEELLLLLLL!!! GGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLL!!!!!!

LOL!!!! Chapter 8 is riot!!!! I like it. chapter nine is a cool. Right now I have catching up to do, so I'm gonna go back to reading.


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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 4:55 am    

hey this story is turning out nice. an interresting relationship's starting.

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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 10:38 am    

yeah, i'm going to kill my friend, if she doesn't finish it


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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 3:20 pm    

you better let her know that...


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PostFri Jan 17, 2003 9:40 am    

a new chap just came out, and sorry, tt i haven't posted in a while... school you know


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PostFri Jan 17, 2003 4:05 pm    

'school'... Now I understand...


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PostSun Jan 19, 2003 12:23 pm    

At last I have reviewed

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PostMon Jan 20, 2003 9:28 am    

lol, regina will appreciate it and here's chap 11!!!

chapter11~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It's been two weeks five hours forty minutes since Sora woke up to find herself curled up in Matt's arms, two weeks five hours forty-one minutes since Matt found Sora beating the crap out of him and one week three hours did Sora recover from her illness and returned home and school.

Sora sat on a bench outside the school drinking coke trying to calm herself down. She couldn't believe how pathetic she was!! She had to stay in her worst enemy's house for two over weeks and.. arrgghh!! Sora crushed the can and threw it down the pavement in frustration. Steam was practically coming out from her ears. Grabbing her backpack, Sora strolled to class grumbling and cursing her rotten luck.

Matt sat in class practicing his drums with two wooden pencils and his vandalized desk just as Sora walked in. He watched in amusement as Sora glared at him. He didn't mind admitting that the last two weeks were awesome! He got her mad, slept in the same bed, kissed her, fought with her, got beaten the *beep* out of him by her. and everything else!! It was great. Chuckling, he turned back his attention to his table and started drumming again.

Sora was extremely, very, tremendously pissed. She felt like giving Mr.- irritating a blow on the head, bring him into an operating room, cut of his hair, do a quick lip switch to a distorted lip, switch his organs around, use a penknife and carve symbols over him and.. (Too gruesome guys). She needed to get rid of that annoying gloating look!! It was driving her insane (not that she isn't)! Anyway, she was lucky that she was feeling good cause today the school was organizing a trip to a skiing resort!! She could go snowboarding and skiing on the extreme slide! Who cares what the teachers say, she didn't become a expert by following rules. Hhmm.. Maybe she would be able to kill Matt someway.hmm.. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@###########$$$$$$$$$$$$%%%%

Reaching the snowcapped mountains, Sora and Matt listened to the blah blah talk from the teachers. "Don't go to the danger slope, don't do this and don't do that." Sora yawned. Who on earth listens to that stuff?? Dashing to the counter, she rented a snowboard after making sure it was the coolest and the best they could find. Grabbing it, she sprinted to the line to go to the top of the mountain (you know those chairs that bring you all the way up?). But when she saw who was in front of her, she groaned. Of all people. the person in front of her was. MATT!! "Hey babe! I see you, like me, are going to break the rules and do the extreme slope huh?" Matt sneered with a glint in the eye. "Wanna snowboard together? Bet you would be left behind."

Sora rolled her eyes, "I think its going to be you who has his head stuck in the snow.". Just then, it was their turn to board the cable-chair (whatever u call that). For about ten minutes, they argued back and forth about who will win, resisting the act of pushing one another down so that they die in the fall, swearing at each other causing many people to look at them. "You bitch!! I am the greatest and the coolest unlike you!"

"Oh yeah. at least I am not the one who takes two hours just to comb my hair!"

"Look. I know you want to be great and everything like I am and you are just jealous."

"Who me?? I don't want to share a planet with you let alone be like you!"

"Oh yeah? Then why are you so much like me you insignificant brat!"

"That's the most unfortunate Mr. Pathetic. I know you are probably the one that is jealous because I keep beating you in everything!"

"Do not!"

"Do too!!"

"Do not u crazy f*cking Despo!"

"I am not a Despo!! You Flirter!!"

"Am not!!"

"Are Too!!"

"Am not!!"

"Are too!!"

Finally reaching their destination (hardly anyone was there since it was the extreme slope) Matt and Sora fitted on their snowboards glanced at each other and took off.

Matt twisted right just in time to avoid a large rock. He and Sora were really neck-to-neck. Just then, they both reached something like a cliff and they were flying through the air, doing a double twist in mid air he landed gracefully on the sheet of white snow just in time to see Sora do a front flip and land a few meters away. Suddenly, Sora skidded right in front of him. Cursing himself, the put in a little spurt of energy and he was back beside her. Cold wind whipped his hair back, giving him a clear view all around him. On his right, was Sora and clumps of trees. Should he murder her there or should he enjoy himself a little more? Choosing to have fun, he snowboarded on.

Sora was getting really pissed. Matt was a bloody and unfortunate good snowboarder dude. Most people would already been left behind trying to catch up. But not him, he was an expert, like her. But, he was a challenge, a really good challenge. Narrowly missing a rock, Sora started to plan her strategy. But suddenly, she felt herself thrown sideways, missing a rock by a few inches and landing on the snow with trees all around her. It was then she realized that Matt had his arms around her waist. "What the heck.?" Sora jumped up and nearly stumbling over because of her snowboard but two strong arms caught her and prevented her from slipping. Sora groaned. Not again. She was staring into the two eyes that she hated for so long!! Frustrated, she twisted herself out of Matt's arms, and took of the snowboard. "What the f**k you want Matt?" Sora growled while dusting snow off herself. "Matt sighed, "I just saved your life you goon! You nearly got gutted by that stupid rock!!"

"Oh yeah? And you thing I am not good enough to save myself? I have been doing this for ages if you don't mind!" Sora retorted back hotly. "I am an expert helllooo?? geeze!!" Grabbing her board, she tried to walk over to the slope when she suddenly found herself being pushed onto a tree. Taken by surprise, Sora dropped her board and tried to fight back clumsily. Matt easily blocked them and grabbed both of her slim wrists in one hand. Sora groaned, she had made the biggest mistake, never let your guard down and always be ready. She tried to avoid the piercing stare by Matt and stared down on her foot. Those eyes always made her loose her cool for some unfortunate reason. she hated it. it made her weak.

"Look at me b!tch!! Just look at me!" Matt growled. He hated not staring into those rebellious sexy eyes, slowly, reluctantly; Sora looked up, breathing heavily and locked her expressionless gaze onto his. Matt placed his other hand next to Sora's head (on the tree) and whispered, "You know that you were about to get gutted, deep down inside you know that. You were thinking at something and weren't concentrating. You know it. You just don't want to admit it. You don't want to admit that I just saved your ungrateful neck. You know what almost happened. You know it."

Sora just gazed back coolly. "So? Am I supposed to say thank you?" She laughed hollowly, "I don't say thank yous Matt. I never do. So lets just forget about the whole thing kay?" Sora waited for Matt to move away but he just stayed in the same position. Sora knew what was coming. but she didn't want it. did she? She hated it. It always made her loose control, she had to stop it someway. Any way. "Matt." Sora began but he had already closed his mouth over hers. Sora didn't respond back though her mind was seriously going to die if she wasn't going to respond to that kiss. She hoped that Matt would stop. or did she? Matt seemed to have noticed her not responding and started sucking and biting her lips roughly (I have not gone through this okay? had help from some people.)

Sora couldn't take it and hungrily kissed him back. Damn him, she had lost the battle. She could practically feel that slimy bastard grinning into her mouth. As fast as it happened, Matt ended the kiss, Without a backwards gaze at Sora, he grabbed his board, fasten it and skated down the mountain. Leaving a very very stunned and annoyed Sora.



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PostMon Jan 20, 2003 3:23 pm    

Ahh.. That chapter is Great!!


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PostWed Jan 22, 2003 9:53 am    

of course


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PostWed Jan 22, 2003 1:09 pm    

Wow.. I'm already waiting for the next... (oh, how unexpected )


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PostSat Jan 25, 2003 11:45 am    

LOL


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