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janewaykat
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Joined: 14 May 2002
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Location: Basketball court and college
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 Sun Jan 19, 2003 11:23 pm My Love for You! |
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This is something my sister wrote she doesnt think its any good though and she wont believe me so help me out here please 
My Love for You!
He picked you out
from all the rest,
because he knew
I'd love you best.
I had a heart
and it was true
but now it's gone form
me to you.
Take care of it
as I have done.
For you have two
and i have none.
When I go to heaven
and your not there,
I'll write our names
on the golden stairs,
and if your not there
on judgement day.
I'll know you went the other way.
I'll give the angels back their wings,
golden halos and all those things.
Just to prove my love is true,
I'll go to hell to be with you.
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Deciviel
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Joined: 27 Sep 2002
Posts: 508
Location: Joe's Garage
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:25 am |
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Great poem you got here. Keep up the good work![/code]
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shrek man
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Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 5519
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:13 pm |
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Good poem!
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Chakotays Angel
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Joined: 04 Nov 2002
Posts: 776
Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:49 pm |
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Beautiful keep up the good work
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janewaykat
Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 May 2002
Posts: 5780
Location: Basketball court and college
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:54 pm |
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Thanx
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Jeff Miller
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Joined: 22 Nov 2001
Posts: 23947
Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:16 pm |
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not bad keep it up
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Voy_Girl
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Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:14 pm |
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Beautiful!
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ThomasEugeneParis4
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Joined: 22 Jul 2001
Posts: 599
Location: USS VOYAGER NCC-74656
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| Sun Jan 26, 2003 6:58 pm |
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Outstanding poem JanewayKat
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Lxe
keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002
Posts: 3622
Location: stv
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| Sun Jan 26, 2003 7:15 pm |
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absolutely beautiful.....
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PicardsTrueLove
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Joined: 26 Dec 2002
Posts: 1840
Location: Nowhere, Earth
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| Sun Jan 26, 2003 8:21 pm |
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That was so sweet! Oooooooh! I wish I could find someone like that!
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janewaykat
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Joined: 14 May 2002
Posts: 5780
Location: Basketball court and college
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| Sun Jan 26, 2003 11:05 pm |
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^Thank you everyone
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Captain Leah Manzer
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Joined: 21 Mar 2002
Posts: 5221
Location: State of Insanity
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| Mon Jan 27, 2003 12:19 am |
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beautiful poem katie:) Its so nice
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Mmm Cake...
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